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Jetpack Samurai Bamboo Training

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Jetpack Samurai Bamboo TrainingFumo161
Do you have what it takes to be a jetpack samurai? Find out with this unique training exercise. Cut down as much bamboo as you can within the time limit!
This level has been up for two days with not even a single play and that's just irritating so I am willing to do some more F4F.

Oh and if there's anyone out there that can make me popular... well... :blush: ... that'd be nice... cuz I make good stuff
2010-02-03 17:25:00

Author:
Fumo161
Posts: 210


Hey there, my names MR. E. That's too bad to hear that nobody will play your level. It sounds pretty interesting. People here tend to get so caught up in their own world, they forget about everyone else. Too many creators, not enough players I say. I'll give your level a shot. Just feedback my INSECTOIDS! level and we'll call it even.2010-02-05 00:29:00

Author:
M_R_Enigma
Posts: 161


Alright I've played your level and here is my professional evaluation of it. To begin with, I thought your level was a great concept. I liked the materials you used for the backdrop. The sword you designed was pretty cool looking as well. Here are a list of improvements you could do to take your level up a notch.
1. The title is a bit long. Try something shorter like Samurai Training, Bushido Warrior, or something a little more interesting.
2. I liked how you used a prop sword to cut the bamboo, but the mag switch was off. I found myself hitting the bamboo with no cut. Instead of having the bamboo fall from the ceiling, try setting them vertically on ground like a real samurai would cut them. Honestly, I would have preferred an "open air" approach to the background design. Make it an adventure and a challenge.

Overall I thought this level was a great idea, but there are some areas you can improve upon. So I rated this 3/5 stars. 2 for effort and 1 for originality.
2010-02-05 08:04:00

Author:
M_R_Enigma
Posts: 161


You gotta republish if you want to get those plays up, man 2010-02-05 16:59:00

Author:
Thegide
Posts: 1465


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