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HIIII! I uploaded a few of my songs onto Youtube and I was wondering if I could get some feedback from you, and maybe some constructive criticism? That'd mean a lot to me! You can ignore the videos; all I did was either quickly film myself doing something or I mashed up footage me and my friends made in 08-09. I'm still going to upload some more tracks, but I've picked these out first, as they're most recent. Clicky away! 1. Bweep Bweep http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WXzPDE8oJK4 2. Siphon http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=THPBUoPr3ts 3. Klopfgeist http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JmPLvm5JS4E 4. Flora http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6QKqF_tnfxg 5. Ephemera http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hhQKMYNmx1c 6. Niflheim http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wskJ63rNkbM

2010-01-27 00:39:00 Author: Voodeedoo Posts: 724

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First of all, I have to say your music is very genuine. I can tell you put time and effort into making it sound good and I really like that. I loved listening to your stuff as a fellow electronic music making myself; your stuff reminds me of some of my very early compositions. I can see you are a fan of Aphex Twin (cool, so am I), I can definitely hear the similarities between you and him. I like the sounds you use for your drums and your synths are very analogue-digital sounding. Now, I do have some critique. I think you should try constructing a more harmonically tight melody line. Sometimes it feels like your melodies wonder to places they shouldn't be going. Also, some of the main keys to a good song especially in the genre you make are layers, dynamics, and variation. I have noticed your songs are a little repetitive, try mixing things up. Innovation is necessary to create a unique identity for yourself; I can already tell you have figured out a lot of good techniques such as gating and arpeggiating. What programs/gear you use to make your music? Cool stuff, man. Keep up the good work. Have you checked out soundcloud.com yet? It's perfect for posting music to show people.

2010-01-27 06:56:00 Author: ElectrizCity Posts: 13

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Thanks for the response! I'm using Logic Studio, but thats about it; no synths, hardware, or drum machines so it's a bit limited when it comes to certain things. And yes, I've tried signing up for soundcloud.com but I for some reason can't upload my music files :O Maybe it's cause I'm on a mac... EDIT: Saw your music page on soundcloud and was very impressed! Your music covers many styles of electronic music. They sound pretty pro too! Good luck in the future, sir!

2010-01-27 11:59:00 Author: Voodeedoo Posts: 724

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Cool, I have logic studio too, but I can't seem to get myself to use it. I do all my stuff in Reason 4 and I've gotten used to it's interface. I think soundcloud.com has been having some technical difficulties lately. You'll be able to upload them shortly. It's not because you have a Mac, I have one too, haha. Thanks btw.

2010-01-27 16:31:00 Author: ElectrizCity Posts: 13

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Oooh alright I thought my computer was just being we todd ed. I think I got used to LogicStudio cause before that I started off with GarageBand and mastered it, and it's a similar interface. It took me a while before actually using it, but one day I was bored and decided to get off my fat tush and get used to it, and I did Since then I've used it as my new lil toy but I've yet to try out other things. I've done a lot with it but I feel I could do more if I had the right equipment...

2010-02-08 01:53:00 Author: Voodeedoo Posts: 724

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