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Just made my new level - please give it a try!

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Well I just made my first level, it's not great but it's not bad either. I'm trying to get the create trophy legitimately so if you have a decent time playing the level please throw me an author and level heart Constructive criticism is appreciated, although it'll be a while before I try my hand at making another level. My PSN is rofl_waffle, and the level name is Anemoi Aery. Thanks in advance!2010-01-25 04:29:00

Author:
roflwaffle
Posts: 69


I hope you develop the look of your queen NPC. She seems somewhat bare right now, and she really has some potential. You could also put some lights around her so it's a bit dark around her. Oh, and it wouldn't hurt if she introduced herself somehow. 2010-01-25 07:15:00

Author:
DarkDedede
Posts: 672


bump :< if anyone has the spare time please give my level a try 2010-01-28 02:09:00

Author:
roflwaffle
Posts: 69


Pictures would help2010-01-28 02:50:00

Author:
Emogotsaone
Posts: 1030


Just played your level. For a first level, it's a good start, but it does have some issues. First, I kept getting stuck inside some of the wind platforms that allow you to jump extra high. I believe it only happened on the wind platforms that were placed directly on the floor. If I'm correct about that, you may want to elevate them off the floor so that they work properly. Next, I got a little frustrated with the second balloon part. This was partly because I kept getting stuck in the two wind platforms on the floor below the balloons, but also because I felt the the lifetime of the balloons was not long enough. Jumping with a balloon is pretty wonky and unpredictable, so having to rush with a balloon leads to a frustrating experience. I haven't messed around with emitters yet so I can't give advice exactly on how best to fix this, but I do think the lifetime of the balloons should be longer. My last, minor issue is that breaking the seals felt very uneventful. I didn't even realize what the first seal was before I jumped on the button and make it vanish. I'm not sure how I'd go about changing that, but I figured I'd throw it out there anyhow.

Anyway, good first effort.
2010-01-28 03:26:00

Author:
Unknown User


One final bump :o please try it if you haven't already, and thanks for the comments. 2010-01-30 19:57:00

Author:
roflwaffle
Posts: 69


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