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Salty Dog Water Slide!

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Hey everyone, I created my first level and it's a quick and fun (at least in my opinion) water slide level. I've put in some hidden areas including a Points Fest area that will separate you easily from the rest of the people on the score board. Not many people have found it yet but there are clues in the level that will lead you to the area.

I'm looking for general feedback on the level and if there's anything I need to fix or improve upon. Thanks!

Level name - Salty Dog Water Slide
User name - gettinmoney662
2010-01-25 02:17:00

Author:
gettinmoney662
Posts: 6


You should have both fish magic mouths hooked up to one proximity sensor, so they speak in the correct sequence. I didn't notice the first one at first, and reading only half of the message was somewhat confusing.

Also, you could always make the level more aesthetically pleasing. It seemed somewhat barren in some areas.
2010-01-25 05:02:00

Author:
DarkDedede
Posts: 672


Hmmm, I'll see if I can fix that problem, thanks for the feedback. I'll check out one of your levels.2010-01-25 23:46:00

Author:
gettinmoney662
Posts: 6


I think the slide is too small, try making it longer and have it land ON the prize bubbles and close to the scoreboard, that way you dont have to swim that much, grab onto the slow sponges and see dark matter
also try using a material that looks more water park-ish

For F4F do my Pollo Chronicles please
2010-01-26 02:10:00

Author:
Racroz
Posts: 406


Um, there wasn't really any good obstacles or anything that made it really fun. You should try putting in things to avoid or jump over, otherwise the level is just a slide?
I guess for a slide theres not really much more to put in, except you could try to make it look more slide-like.
Also, I didn't really get the fish-clues, as there didn't seem to be any X like they were talking about. And "to the left of this thing"? What thing were they talking about?
I guess it was an alright level, but it wasn't fantastic or anything

F4F (https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=21469-The-Metropolitan-Sewage-Works)
2010-01-26 03:37:00

Author:
lbper
Posts: 13


Well yeah, the level is mainly just a slide, haha. I'll check out your guy's levels tonight.

I'm gonna make the entire pool smaller to see if that helps with some problems people are having with the aesthetics.
2010-01-26 05:51:00

Author:
gettinmoney662
Posts: 6


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