Archive: 7 posts

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Sorry but I don't have any pictures. This is my first level that I've made that is entirely made up of a race. You go from swinging over a pit of gas to riding on a rocket car. I will take any and all feedback into account.

2010-01-23 22:47:00 Author: SavageCaptor Posts: 66

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Alright, good first attempt! Some things that could easily make this level a little better: 1. Add a background, visuals aren't necessary, but they help...trust me 2. Decorate...again...visuals... 3. The game play was actually solid, but the rocket kinda lost me and I ended up running the rest of the race, but I did finish eventually! Try to create some kind of track that the machine can follow, so this won't happen. Again, good first level. Keep at it my friend!

2010-01-23 23:10:00 Author: shawneboi Posts: 221

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Thank you!

2010-01-23 23:15:00 Author: SavageCaptor Posts: 66

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Anyone want to f4f mine?

2010-01-24 05:05:00 Author: SavageCaptor Posts: 66

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i will play it and edit this post later ok EDIT: Ok i played it and i agree with shawneboi, the gameplay was fun but you need some improvement on the visuals you dont even have to add stickers or anything, you can just change the cardboard(or background) for a better looking material but when you do this make sure the floor material and the walls material look good together, i'm sure you don't want odd looking houses(or buildings) and in the race try using less sharp edges, use "U" instead of "V" on both the turns and the front of the vehicle and thats it overall its a fun level for F4F do my pollo chronicles level(sig)

2010-01-24 16:24:00 Author: Racroz Posts: 406

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*bump* Any more f4f's?

2010-01-25 15:26:00 Author: SavageCaptor Posts: 66

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Well, here's what I thought (Sorry it took so long, yesterday was my birthday so I spent it with friends) 1. Very plain. Could use some visuals, maybe a bit of a storyline. You know, a reason you're trying to get there. 2. The "Music reference" wasn't very subtle. 3. I personally don't like levels that use the ground from the scenery, maybe you should move the entire level up a bit and make a new ground out of some materials. Might make it more visually pleasing. 4. The rocket was rather frustrating to get over the giant metal bar near the end, and after clearing it, it flipped upside down and was unusable. Dunno if that was your intention... 5. Overall, a decent first start, but storyline and visuals could really help this level take off.

2010-01-26 05:21:00 Author: DJLols Posts: 217

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