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A Day In The City

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Check out my new level on LBP: A Day In The City.
My PSN: Jarheadgunner514

Please give feed back on how to improve on my levels.
2010-01-17 21:39:00

Author:
Emogotsaone
Posts: 1030


No one? Darn...2010-01-18 01:36:00

Author:
Emogotsaone
Posts: 1030


You gotta wait longer, or participate in F4F. It could take days to get a comment. Posting level pictures is a good motivation though.2010-01-18 01:54:00

Author:
warlord_evil
Posts: 4193


Uhm...
Not a very well thought out level.
Very short, spaced out, and lacking in a basic structure.
It would have potential if you made it longer, added more scenery to up the atmosphere, and adding some kind of plot.
As for improving on what you already have, change the checkpoint near the "gangstas" to an infinite one. Other than that, the race part was pretty well done.
I gave it 3 stars, against my better judgement.

If you like Zelda games, you should try my Zelda level here:
https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=20684-The-Legend-of-Zelda
2010-01-18 04:36:00

Author:
drewface
Posts: 8


Yeah, after a while it seems like a horrible level to be honest. I don't know how to make good levels and I need some major help with my scenery...2010-01-18 19:36:00

Author:
Emogotsaone
Posts: 1030


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