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Edens Tear (contains water)

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Hey guys, i need feedback on my lvl to see if its to hard or just what you guys think of it. i mean i made it to be detailed and easy, but only 3 people have completed it which makes me think somethings wrong lol.

so if anyone can play my new lvl i would really appraciate it and ofcourse i would do likewise.

jus sux when u put so much time into a lvl and no one plays it
2010-01-15 23:05:00

Author:
Unknown User


If you provided some screenshots of the level, it might make more people want to play it, I'll try to check it out later when I get the chance.2010-01-15 23:28:00

Author:
Fredrik94
Posts: 342


how do u get screenshots? eyetoy/ camera im guessing?

p.s. thanks
2010-01-15 23:32:00

Author:
Unknown User


You can get screenshots by taking pictures with the in-game Camera Tool. You can then upload them to the PS3, and either put them onto a flash drive, or post them directly from the PS3.

I'll check it out later, as well.
2010-01-16 02:37:00

Author:
Frinklebumper
Posts: 941


o crap really? AWESOME thnx lol i will be sure to do that, thnx guys 2010-01-16 06:17:00

Author:
Unknown User


So I just played this level, and I saw that you had some concerns with your level being too hard. That in fact is not the problem. What I noticed is that it is sometimes unclear which way you need to go. I would suggest using cutscene cameras in places when it is required for you to go back in order to advance.

Also, there were a few places that I feel and ended up in a section of the level where I would have to kill myself to get back onto the playing field. And when I did die in places, I wasn't given the chance to go back and try again.

What I did like was the visual style used here. The colors were great and the music played well into the scenery. The platforming was pretty solid throughout.

Sorry it seems like I have alot of negative comments, but I hope they will help you to improve your creation.

If you would like to try out some of my levels, I would also appreciate some feedback.

Thanks
2010-01-16 22:15:00

Author:
shawneboi
Posts: 221


Decent level. My favorite part about it was the visuals. They were pretty good in most places and your use of lighting was great also. The visuals were a little messy in some places, though, such as when you ride the butterfly up the hill. The level itself was pretty fun, but it wasn't perfect either. Like the above poster said, there wasn't always a clear path of where to go, and the underwater race was a dead end. Overall it was pretty good. 4/5. Please give me some feedback on my level (https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=21278-Mysterious-Planet-Black-Ore). Thanks.2010-01-17 04:41:00

Author:
Camden1
Posts: 83


no thats what i need lol thnx alot, yeah i actually fixed alot of things because that happaned. ;/ i tried to make it so people would think but i see its not obvious enough to people who dont know wat to do lol, cuz ofcourse i know thats y i dont think bout it.

lvl is maxed out, 1 more spec it over heats lol. ima definatly gonna address those problems tho. was it easy to find the underwater race? i wanted it secret but not to secret,

thnx for feedback and yep i will def check out ur lvls
2010-01-17 04:43:00

Author:
Unknown User


Decent level. My favorite part about it was the visuals. They were pretty good in most places and your use of lighting was great also. The visuals were a little messy in some places, though, such as when you ride the butterfly up the hill. The level itself was pretty fun, but it wasn't perfect either. Like the above poster said, there wasn't always a clear path of where to go, and the underwater race was a dead end. Overall it was pretty good. 4/5. Please give me some feedback on my level (https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=21278-Mysterious-Planet-Black-Ore). Thanks.

thnx alot aswell yeah im sorta dissapointed, i wanted to add so much more, especially races but i ran out of space because of detail :/ must address!!!!! lol i knew the wwater race was way to short, the sequel will have a good race for sure. was mostly practicing visuals, and yeah butterfly up the hill..... stupid themometer.... i tried fixing but wouldnt let me shape the floor the way i wanted after i put to much, honestly because of space i used it to rush a way to get to the top to make it a lil longer . will have to lower visuals in sequel for more gameplay ;p. thnx for feedback guys
2010-01-17 04:48:00

Author:
Unknown User


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