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Hospital Horror(Fun!)
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| Hospital Horror(Fun!)LiIvIiT! A simple trip of horror through a huanted hospital. Very Fun! (My First Level!) all **Please play and leave suggestions!** | 2010-01-10 22:39:00 Author: LiIvIiT--  Posts: 14 |
| Well done on creating your first level! I've just given it a go, and here's a few things I liked and a few suggestions for you: Things I liked- Usually i'd recommend playing round with different shapes and the corner editor, but in this case your clean straight lines were exactly right for a hospital. You had a nice clear theme without an overbearing plot There was some nice simple gameplay The motorbike at the end is a lovely smooth running vehicle. Suggestions - Some of the visuals could do with a bit of tightning up, e.g perhaps make the piston on the lift invisible? It just makes it look a bit more polished when you can't see the mechanics I would have really liked some music. Perhaps you were going for a silent atmosphere, but unfortunately in LBP nothing is ever really silent and I was aware of the mechanics such as lifts and lifepoints the whole way through, which some quiet background music would have masked. I could have used a little more light - again it's balancing the atmosphere which you want to create with making it manageable for the player to see. For me personally, a little more would have been appreciated. I felt that the jet pack section could have been developed... I might have done something wrong here, but i just kind of picked it up, flew down a hole and then put the jetpack down. Maybe I missed something. Keep up the good work, I'll look forward to seeing more from you in the future! For f4f please would you play 'in pursuit of the meddling magpie' by TheAdipose. | 2010-01-11 01:35:00 Author: TheAdipose  Posts: 533 |
| Thx Like i sed my first level and about the music...well i havent completed the single player mode yet so i dont hav very much music. I didnt rlly expect this level to get 5 stars cuz i mainly put it out there just to see what is was like to hav ppl play your level. Lol its a great feeling when i get a review like yours. I might not go back and fix this level up but i am working on a new level with a prison escape theme. Ill b sure to use your tips while creating it! P.S. Ill be sure to play through your level also! | 2010-01-11 20:43:00 Author: LiIvIiT-- Posts: 14 |
| As mentioned before it misses music indeed, some creepy cracking sounds would fit this level perfectly. Sometimes it was hard to see where I had to go. It was a bit rough around the edges also, the lifts for example. I liked the atmosphere the most though, dark and creepy. Although not bad for a first attempt. I gave it :star::star::star: and tagged it creepy. Feel free to check out my levels, they have been up for a while though  I've also made a rollercoaster level just for the fun of it. | 2010-01-12 03:36:00 Author: Unknown User  |
| Not bad for your first. I'm not gonna repeat what the others said, but they were right. Shawneboi | 2010-01-12 04:06:00 Author: shawneboi  Posts: 221 |
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