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Storyline Malfunction

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I am currently working on a level, probably the best level I have made so far, so I want it to get well. Unfortunately, the part of my brain that allows me to make up storylines has packed up and left me to rot. If anyone could contribute please help, here is the story so far.

You meet a town fellow on the outside of a city, who asks you to take a gun (paintinator) across to the edge of his town, getting across 1 or two obstacles and getting to a hut, which controlls a water wheel which acts as the towns water filter which sends clean water to the towns well system (real water used). you use to gun to unjam the lever stopping the waterwheel from spinning, saving the town and its inhabitants

After helping the man you venture towards the city, finding a ridge-hopper tranports across a crevice, you meet another man, who owns the ridge hopper who lets you have 1 crossing for free for helping his towns water problem (usual price is "5 stickers"). when you reach the other side, you meet a tramp who is upset because he has family back in the town you left, but is 1 sticker short of a ride, and asks you to spare a sticker if you manage to get one in the city. Upon reaching the outskirts, you meet young sackman who has been locked out of the city by an annoying guard, and asks you to sneak into the control hut that powers the gate, and open it for him (also granting you access to the city). After this you meet the kids parents who thank you for letting him, and go tell you to have a word with the gate guard. Once you do this he apologises saying "I'm sorry, I thought it was just another tramp trying to sponge money from the city", and gives you a sticker as an apology (which you can use to give to the tramp to get a reward).

After this my mind has one blank and can't think of anything more.

Anyone got any ideas, the story is set not in medieval times, but in the past (hence the town having a waterwheel and well)

Let your mind rip, but don't go too overboard, my thermo is currently at about 45-50%. If I incorporate your idea I will mention your PSN name in credits and will recommend your levels.

thanks, Pete1991
2010-01-07 17:35:00

Author:
Pete1991
Posts: 225


Don't know if bumping is allowed, if not, mod please delete this post

I am desperate for ideas
2010-01-09 21:42:00

Author:
Pete1991
Posts: 225


Maybe you could rip an idea from Dream Theater and meet an eccentric count?

or, in an original idea of my own, you could stumble across an artifact and learn the story of a king...? or something to that effect?
2010-01-10 06:58:00

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Ragfell
Posts: 729


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