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Sleeping BeautyTOBSn08
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Sleeping Beauty and the 100 Kisses (Part 1)

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After 100 Years of Sleeping the castle around the Sleeping Beauty became a dangerous place, a hedge grew and let no one pass behind it, but now most of the thorns turned into roses and one Hero is on its way to wake up the sleeping beauty. But the witch that cursed her turned the castle into a perilious place.

Sleeping Beauty and The Bomb Survival

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Now that our Sleeping Beauty is awake, its your turn to defeat the evil witch and stop her from turning the castle into a bomb survival level!

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These are my 2 Levels for the LBL fairytale submission
The 2nd one was made within 1 week because of lacking time.
Enjoy and leave Feedback
2010-01-07 13:19:00

Author:
TOBSn08
Posts: 143


Holy wow, it looks great! Was this part of your original series or are you some kind of super-human cyborg that can create two levels in the time it takes us humans to make one?

Risky move calling it a bomb-survival... My guess is that you are playing on the name (which i appreciate). Hopefully you don't get a negative response from it.

At any rate, it reminds me of Swampa, which I loved, so I will surely check it out.

2010-01-07 13:40:00

Author:
comphermc
Posts: 5338


Yes!! You finally published another level. Your my favorite publisher just because of Swampa and i've been waiting for another level from you. I thought u had quit or something lol. I will definately play this and will be waiting for the next part to Swampa. Also if you have any free time could you check out my level Underground Ruins and give me feedback if want to. It is F4F and i'll give you some feedback regardless of what you say 2010-01-07 15:27:00

Author:
L1GhTmArE
Posts: 519


lol, I was the first one to beat part 2

All in all the levels were really well made and fun to play. I enjoyed them much! My fav. part is the last race in part 2.

But I seriously think you should make another boss. That one was kinda meh.

But still both levels deserve 5 x :star: and a heart
2010-01-07 18:05:00

Author:
blizzard_cool
Posts: 752


S-W-EEET!

Can't wait to play!!
2010-01-07 20:45:00

Author:
piggabling
Posts: 2979


Wow, cool tobs.
Ill try it and give you feedback if youre online tomorrow on psn.
2010-01-07 20:48:00

Author:
Chicoleunis
Posts: 123


Hmm..well I thought the first one were amazingly amazing,in a awesomely awesome way that made it so awesome that it turned out amazing and other neat over-used words.

But the second one feels a bit unpolished. the boss was pretty meh,it didn't look as good as the first one and that ending scene obviously were not finished.

When you get back from your vacation or whatever makes you go away I really think you should edit the second one and fix those bugs and unpolished parts,even though if you have won or not.
2010-01-07 21:27:00

Author:
Mnniska
Posts: 531


Wow - just wow. Both of these are very innovative, jam packed with stuff to do and cleverly designed. Really enjoyed them. Your bomb survivial level is inspired and should single handedly reclaim the phrase bomb survivial as not always a bad thing. Seriously clever wheels with sponges and I loved how you squeezed as much game play per square inch as you could in areas. Very well done. 5 stars & hearted both.

(I did notice the magic mouth after the finish line of the first race in the first level is censored and there's a spot you can fall through the level in the second. some gas along the bottom should solve that one easily.)
2010-01-08 02:08:00

Author:
Morgana25
Posts: 5983


Yes the main level was awesome!! You fit so much into so little space...its just crazy...but in a very extremely good way! I especially like the bomb/ zip-line...and how you used the same bombs to goto more than 1 area in the bomb survival level. The story line was great and very creative. Your visual style is top notch and the lighting was perfect. Like Morgana said there is a censored speech bubble in one of the areas on the main level. This happened on my level too so it could be just random. If I could get my pics to show theres an area where i jumped in the air and land on some bg wood and I thought it was a secret area by going to the left. I ended up falling off the map lol. Maybe block it off to a certain point and make it a secret bubble area? Other than that, the level was great. I gave it 5 * and <3. Oh yea Also im 2nd place on both! 2010-01-08 17:27:00

Author:
L1GhTmArE
Posts: 519


The second one is AMAZING. I loved how nothing in it was done before(like the bomb zip line etc.) the boss was a bit slow though, i'd give it more attacks to keep you on your feet. It doesn't get hard till after you've unstickered about 2 hearts(when the bombs start to fall.2010-01-08 18:08:00

Author:
Unknown User


Wow, what an amazing level you made ! :hero:

When I saw the first screenshot, I thought it was a bit too " overelaborate " , too " messy " ,but the scenery is just perfect !

I love this atmosphere, in front of a castle, in a kind of garden, with those wooden old scaffoldings (I've always loved this way to make them),...

The challenges are great too, really clever. This series is a real success, good luck for the contest !

Oh, just one thing, in the first part, there's a " messed up " mouth, it probably contains a forbidden word.

:star: :star: :star: :star: :star: + 1 heart for both levels (+ You)
2010-01-08 22:04:00

Author:
Oddmania
Posts: 1305


WOW!! Two more great levels from you!!

Both wonderful and a joy to play! Great platforming and I liked how you introduced the story!

I have yet to actually finish the second one but I'm still working on it! :blush:

:star::star::star::star::star: and a heart for both of the levels!!
2010-01-08 22:26:00

Author:
piggabling
Posts: 2979


Part one was the only thing I played btw:

This level was great, especially the visuals.

There were only a few things I personally noticed:

1. One mouth doesn't work, the one right after you finish the race.
2. Also, in the mouth that says, "only some metres left to the top" "meters" is spelled wrong
3. It can be difficult to tell which way to go in some instances because of the lighting and how you have to walk behind things or change layers randomly (this didn't affect me to much though)
4.The part with the knives was a little too hard to be in a race. It killed me about 5 times and timed the race timer out.

Other than that it was a good level, I really liked the ending but I don't really like platforming only levels...

still,:star::star::star::star:
2010-01-08 22:40:00

Author:
Devonushka
Posts: 95


2. Also, in the mouth that says, "only some metres left to the top" "meters" is spelled wrong


No it isn't. For some reason, Americans decided to change a few words spelling from what they actually were spelt...



Ok, On to these levels. Hi Five Man. These levels have completely annihilated MM levels into dust. That was incredible. You have a talent. I feel sorry for you in getting very few plays. Do exactly what you did for Cannon Canyon Blast... It's got 20k plays sure... Anyway, I love your visual style. It's quirky, charming and detailed all in one. The best looking level in what you can call a 'Gardens' Theme. Gameplay is brilliant. specially in the second one. Those bomb ideas were top notch.

Suggestions:
Fix the text box that is censored.
Change something about that boss. It's an incredible visual design but I did find myself tiring...
There was a part in the 2nd level where you could go two different directions at a spinning cog. They both led the same way but going right was significantly longer (And more fun) I would block off going left if I were you.

:star::star::star::star::star: Heart and Hearted Creator.
2010-01-11 09:46:00

Author:
KQuinn94Z
Posts: 1758


Hey, I'm back from vacation and im happy to read through all your feedback!


Was this part of your original series or are you some kind of super-human cyborg that can create two levels in the time it takes us humans to make one?

I'm more the Cyborg Guy i think


Risky move calling it a bomb-survival... My guess is that you are playing on the name

Yeah it's actually no Bomb Survival, it's just the story. The intention of the witch is to destroy the castle and publish it as a bomb survival level, thats why there are so many bombs in part 2


But I seriously think you should make another boss. That one was kinda meh.

If I have had more time, i would have made a better boss but i promise to update the 2nd level and fix several bugs and to improve the boss fight


Thanks so far
2010-01-16 21:21:00

Author:
TOBSn08
Posts: 143


Great visuals, solid platforming...what more could you ask for. Great Job:star::star::star::star::star:2010-01-16 21:39:00

Author:
shawneboi
Posts: 221


The bosses attack is too fast. It's real hard to remove a sticker, exit popit then dodge bombs. I'd slow the bomb attack down a bit and maybe add another attack, maybe a couple of electric mechanical claws that move left and right then move down to crush you, then move offscreen when the bomb attack starts. Also, when you fall down into the boss area and the race starts, the bit of dissolve with a sensor takes too long to dissolve and wastes race time. I'd maybe remove the ice slide and dissolve and just replace it with a vertical drop onto the race gate rotated sideways.2010-01-16 22:18:00

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