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BlackThornDust LBP Story (1&2)BlackThornDust Well i made my first level with water in it i hope you might want to play it its a sequel story i'm working on . the collector comes back and apparently he wants to kill you sinds you sealed him away. , the he appears to get more power thanks to a crazy proffesor and sends a commander (Hibyk) after you all I'm trying to learn how to make better levels by taking it one step at a time. i hope you guys might want to play these levels of mine and give me an opinion and tips.

2009-12-30 21:58:00 Author: BlackThornDust Posts: 100

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I'll try and check this out in the next few days. Edit: Just played through both levels and got some satisfaction in doing so. Its kind of a MGS/POTC hybrid. Kudo's for the storyarch. That's one of the things I enjoy most about playing levels. A good storyarch can make up for some weak playing points. Check for spelling mistakes in the thought bubbles... I may have the wrong creator but there was one point where I saw the spelling are in place of our. I believe it was at the beginning of the second level... and I'm not sure if this was intentional or not but you can go left and fall/jump down to a dead end (the only way out is to respawn). Not sure this adds to the game enjoyablility. I would consider filling this gap up. There is a spot in the first level where there are point bubbles below the elevator. Is there a way to get back up after you jump down to get the point bubbles? Also... one time when I was riding the elevator up I got squished between the wall and the elevator which spawned me at the bottom of the elevator while the elevator stayed half way up the shaft. There was no way to procede other than to restart the level as the elevator never came back down. To prevent this from happening you might move the checkpoint to be on the elevator. Also just before the elevator somehow I got behind the drum and had to respawn to get out. I believe the back thick layer is open. You might consider filling it. I liked the underwater maze in the second level... racing against the clock added to the suspsense. The first time I played it through I missed the "scientist" cut scene. You might consider enlarging the range the magic mouth. I appreciate the time and effort you put into this. I think if you touch up these items it will make the level all the more enjoyable. Looking forward to seeing more levels from you. I may come back and add to this... as I am only typing of the top of my head (I will take notes next time).

2009-12-30 22:39:00 Author: enodrawkcab Posts: 238

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nice^^ hope you like em

2009-12-31 11:13:00 Author: BlackThornDust Posts: 100

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