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KIngdom in the skykevin2314 Help the king save his kingdom from falling out of the sky. There's hidden areas activated by sensor switches the goal is finding them. Please leave feedback on what to work on thank you. all

2009-12-20 21:36:00 Author: kevin2314 Posts: 59

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This level has an interesting concept. A kindom in the sky that might fall if... That's where it ends for me. I don't know what I did or even if I saved this kingdom. The story was hard to follow, I think it could use some work. Here are some questions that you could ask and find a way to explain them in your levels. What is this kingdom? Why is it in the sky? Who lives in this kingdom? I see contraptions that are claimed to be broken but what are their purpose? ------ Moving on... I liked the abstract visual style you have going on here. I feel though each section of the level was disconnected in someway. I feel that it's lacking a theme. I say stick with the visual style, but it needs to be developed a bit more. I don't know what else to say about this, I for one am not an expert creator/developer. So if you've learned anything from this post great! All I can say from this point is to practice. Practice makes perfect. Experiment with different visual styles. Read up on level design and making games. It's ought to help.

2009-12-21 01:15:00 Author: eternal_renegade Posts: 35

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