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Sackboy visits The Great ClockMopthefloo Sackboy adventures to The Great Clock! Meet Orvus, and he will teach you how to manipulate time! all I know i'm hardly ever on here (i wish i could be more) but i really want someone to review this level! i'd also prefer if it was someone who has played Ratchet and Clank FUTURE: A Crack in Time, since that's what the level is based on. thanks in advance. i'm willing to do feedback for only 2 other levels (since i'm a tad busy)

2009-12-14 23:38:00 Author: Mopthefloo Posts: 139

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I will check this out for you tomorrow

2009-12-15 01:33:00 Author: Packfan55 Posts: 15

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Mop! hehe i will chek out this lvl Asap

2009-12-15 02:16:00 Author: Joey Posts: 758

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hate to rush you guys, but is there any feedback yet? i'm really waiting for this important feedback to give to my friends

2009-12-16 02:04:00 Author: Mopthefloo Posts: 139

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Its pretty good, decent visuals and some very fun gameplay.. great job making orvus.. but i found one bug after the station i jumped to a platform, fell and went to a entirely different part of the level. Arrows showing the correct path would help too

2009-12-16 20:38:00 Author: Packfan55 Posts: 15

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Its pretty good, decent visuals and some very fun gameplay.. great job making orvus.. but i found one bug after the station i jumped to a platform, fell and went to a entirely different part of the level. Arrows showing the correct path would help too can you explain which platform exactly? and were you able to finish the level?

2009-12-16 23:30:00 Author: Mopthefloo Posts: 139

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First of all, you should play "shadowheaven's "the cog and the pendellum" it might inspire you to make your "clock" level actually look like a clock. Because.. your title says clock.. but I did not have the feeling that this was a clock.. more some sort of tower.. with.. tree's.. and stuff.. Visually, the background could use some more variation, but its not hurting my eyes. I would suggest to google "inside of big ben" etc to get a feel on how a clock-work level should look like. I am not saying that your level should look like a clock, but your levelname might be misleading. You used rotating glass platforms at some occasions, one wrong move on those and you die a horrible dead, Maybe change the material? though.. thats up to you! The white verticle platforms that go up when Sack comes closer/walks over them are a nice touch! Also shooting back the bullets from certain enemies was a nice touch. At some point in the game, you find a creature that talks about oswald and makes you jump down, that jumppad can throw you outside the level and worse.. I would suggest to change it/remove it. overal a decent level, but the author might spend some more time in perfecting its editing skills and try out a stronger theme next time he creates a level. I gave it three stars and marked it "fun". Now if you want, would like to take a look at: https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=t=19564 or https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=p=351782

2009-12-19 11:48:00 Author: Luos_83 Posts: 2136

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thanks for the feedback. the reason it's called "The great Clock" is because its inspired by the great clock from Ratchet and Clank FUTURE: A Crack in Time. and there are no really "clock-like" visuals in the game. but thanks again for the feedback!

2009-12-21 04:45:00 Author: Mopthefloo Posts: 139

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Pretty good level. I liked all the colors. I also like the Character you had. Pretty sweet level overall. 8/10 No need to feedback me

2009-12-21 06:30:00 Author: Snrm Posts: 6419

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