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Journey to the Red PlanetAgentBanana My new level about the first sackboy on mars! all I've always wanted to be an astronaut, so I decided to make a level based on that. I haven't finished it and released it as a beta (like I did with all my levels) to see if people would like it. I highly reccomend 1 player as I'm not sure if the intro will work with more players. Other then that, thanks for reading this and (hopefully) playing the level. Edit: Could any moderators join this thread with the other thread which its meant to be under? What it's supposed to be under is 'Journey to the Forgotten Planet' on the cool pages. Thanks!

2009-12-13 11:45:00 Author: AgentBanana Posts: 511

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Well, I really liked the shuttle launch scene. Perhaps you could run your title as you climb into orbit. Not sure about the crash land though. It's been done a lot I think. How about landing the shuttle. I like the caves also. What about using some of that space to branch into little secret caches of bubbles or prizes? Let the gadders go spelunking a bit? Anyway, your other levels look interesting and I'll play them as well soon. If you like you could F4F my Twas the Night Before Christmas. Thanks and nice work!

2009-12-14 02:07:00 Author: thanatos989 Posts: 248

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Really nice start on a level you have here. The shuttle was very nice and kudos to you for the SRB separation part. Wished it was a shorter transition to the crash but it's not bad. The landscapes for the red planet were very nice. I especially liked the stalagtites just before the scoreboard. Very excited to see you finish this one.

2009-12-14 06:41:00 Author: Morgana25 Posts: 5983

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Wow yeah really nice shuttle! Liked mars too. I think the flight is a good length. u shouldn't make it shorter... mars is a long way after all! Crash could be done a lil better... sliding on glass didnt look that great. As for the remainder of the level it was really fun and nice to look at! F4F: Actually I've just released my own space level! It's called Planet X and i'd love to have ur feedback on it!

2009-12-14 10:38:00 Author: ladylyn1 Posts: 836

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Thanks for the feedback . I'll repay the debt once I've finished Homework and MW2! (Sorry it's addictive )

2009-12-14 18:46:00 Author: AgentBanana Posts: 511

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Hey Agent Banana! I played this level earlier today and I really think you should finish it. You're definitely on to something really cool. I only have a couple suggestions: - don't mess with the lift off.. that was really cool - you should make it so that we can't see the glass where the ship crashes - I think I spotted most if not all the areas of your level, and it seemed a little empty. I think adding some moving parts would really bring this red planet to life - not all LBP levels require a story, but it might work for this level - just keep it simple It's a great start to a level - I'd hate to see it stay at the beta stage forever.

2009-12-15 20:59:00 Author: Powershifter Posts: 668

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Thanks for the tips Powershifter! I'll do just that, although at the moment im very busy, I will finish it over the Christmas holidays. If I can build what I have in my head right now, it should be pretty good!

2009-12-16 16:34:00 Author: AgentBanana Posts: 511

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Normally I can write 100's of lines per review, but this level doesnt really need that. Visually nice, not to much not to less.. just right! No real hickups, things you can get stuck by etc. The level just screams for more gameplay/visuals.. When I finished it with a friend we both had that.. WE WANT LEVEL TWO!! AND WE WANT IT NOW!! kind of feeling. A very nice job, 5 stars, hearted the level and you as an author. Now, if you have the time, would you take a look at: https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=p=351782#post351782

2009-12-19 12:03:00 Author: Luos_83 Posts: 2136

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Hey people! I recently updated the level, it is now 3/4 done. - Ive updated textures. - Ive improved rocket launch/crash. - Fixed some bugs. I'm having this problem with the Space shuttle falling down a little if you have more then 1 player, so I reccommend 1p for that. If you are playing multi, get everybody but 1 person turn off their controllers. Thanks! I hopefully will finish this by the end of '09!

2009-12-23 23:11:00 Author: AgentBanana Posts: 511

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Just a heads up for anyone that still doesn't know. The levels finished. Renamed it 'Journey to the Forgotten Planet' because mars is abt too specific. There's a different level thread aswel. Anyway enjoy!

2010-01-23 11:38:00 Author: AgentBanana Posts: 511

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It's really good! Some interesting gameplay. Great visuals. 5 stars, heart and just because your my nationality, (We're few and far apart on here) heres a hi 5! *Contact sound*

2010-01-23 18:40:00 Author: KQuinn94Z Posts: 1758

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This level is really really good my friend! Great variety, excellent gameplay and outstanding visuals! 5 stars

2010-01-23 19:44:00 Author: shawneboi Posts: 221

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Thanks for the feedback, but this is the wrong thread, lol. The real ones on the cool pages, this is basically my very stupid mistake of creating two threads. :'D And do you want me to F4F any of your levels killzonequinn or shawneboi? I'll be glad to as you took the time to play me level. And Killzonequinn, it's more like a keyboard five. OOHRAH!

2010-01-23 23:21:00 Author: AgentBanana Posts: 511

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