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Arizona Sky the Rainbow Trail

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Arizona Sky the Rainbow TrailJiri---

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Hi this is my level: arizona sky the rainbow trail,it is on site 1 yet you can play it.. please give a feedback too!
I am On Site 1, this is your chance to play this level fast =)
2009-12-04 16:02:00

Author:
Jiri
Posts: 56


Hiya, I found this level on cool levels and I loved the title and level icon.

The level looks amazing and the style of 'arizona' has been nicely replicated. It wasn't always obvious which way I was supposed to go and I have a feeling I missed out a lot of the due to unclear instructions.

I don't mind having extra places to explore and I am actually going to play the level again to find out what else is there... it's just I think it should be clear when you are on the 'main path' and when you are exploring.

at the end of the level there is a 'sky path' object. I stickered accept... and then nothing happened... an anti climax or a bug?

There is dark matter visable everywhere. In the cafe it doesnt matter cos it looks like part of the structure, but its also randly floating by the balloon

...I played it through again to explore some more. I really like the fact that you have lots of objects and point bubbles that are a real challenge to get. I think the level lacks a narrative though and I just seems to go from section to section then finish with no real connection.

The sky walk still didnt work second time and the option board only partially dissolves. I love your object creations (especially near the start) they look great. I also think you have a really good use of layers to create interesting landscapes.

My advise would be to think of a 'story' or goal for the player (even if its just a speech bubble saying GET TO THE TOP OF THE MOUNTAIN!!!). The level is pretty easy too - perhaps the inclusion of some puzzles or platformy sections.

On looks and objects this level is 5*.. as a complete package though, its unsatisfying and needs more to do. Therefore I gave it 3.

Adi and Clarie
2009-12-04 18:02:00

Author:
TheAdipose
Posts: 533


From what I know, this level is copied. I seen this 3 months ago under a different user name. And Jiri is notorious for stealing other levels. (I've seen plenty that he stolen)2009-12-04 18:07:00

Author:
KQuinn94Z
Posts: 1758


From what I know, this level is copied. I seen this 3 months ago under a different user name. And Jiri is notorious for stealing other levels. (I've seen plenty that he stolen)

^This


He has even more copied levels, but he's deleted a few of them to get rid of the evidence.
2009-12-04 22:52:00

Author:
TheFirstAvenger
Posts: 787


@theadipose: thank You for the nice Feedback,that is very cool, i think i will make a story,but i make this on the part 2 =)
with the bug, i make this away(away right?) today (:
sorry for my english
i hope i can bring the arizona flair (:
2009-12-05 11:46:00

Author:
Jiri
Posts: 56


give feedbacks2009-12-05 14:30:00

Author:
Jiri
Posts: 56


PUSH
I am on site 1,you must go there easy and play my level =)
2009-12-05 19:32:00

Author:
Jiri
Posts: 56


Jiri, seriously, you don't need to bump your thread so dang much. You bumped a post after only 2 hours and then again after 5. I really don't think that much bumping is very good. I say if you really want to bump your thread for more attention, wait a week. Or just don't bump at all.

There are plenty of other levels that haven't gotten a single reply so... yeah.

Also, from what I hear, this level isn't yours (?) I'm not sure myself as I've never seen this level before but many people have and think you are copying them. I advise you stop taking credit for others' work. (If you are)
2009-12-05 19:42:00

Author:
iGotFancyPants
Posts: 1355


I MAKE THIS LEVEL ****...
I HAVE THIS LEVEL For 5 Months ago republished,and the first person think i was on site 2 with this level and there was a other nick or so...
but that is not true..
THIS LEVEL ISNT NEW,It is longer on the Planet.
You can ask tawarf or....
I AM JUST on Site 1 because i REPUBLISH IT,because I DONT COME ON SITE 1
2009-12-05 19:47:00

Author:
Jiri
Posts: 56


Do you belive me yet? :o
and sorry for push my thread but i hate haters
i wouldnt copy level,l have 2000 autor hearts and i am Serious
and yet QUIET
2009-12-05 19:49:00

Author:
Jiri
Posts: 56


and sorry for a bit wrong english grammar that is because i am from germany2009-12-05 19:52:00

Author:
Jiri
Posts: 56


I wasn't sure if you copied (see my post) so don't assume everyone is a hater. Also, you just triple posted... again xD

If you want to add more to a thread just edit your last post. And don't worry about your english, it's not that bad...
2009-12-05 20:06:00

Author:
iGotFancyPants
Posts: 1355


I HAVE THIS LEVEL For 5 Months ago

That may be so, but when searching for levels of the same name, I found one with the same level inside (though I haven't played it through to check in its entirety) that was made 14 months ago by a Japanese creator. So I don't know what to think...

...but, since you commented on my level, I'll also comment on this one, addressed to whoever made the level in earnest.

It's not a bad level, though the earlier parts clearly received a lot more attention than the mountain parts in the end. The petrol station and the bar were all well done and detailed. Everything up to the hot air balloon is well done, though the balloon itself doesn't offer much safety, it's quite easy to accidentally walk out of it and fall down, should one wish to move around. After that it becomes increasingly more sketchy and unpolished, like with the "skywalk" switch mechanism falling on Sackboy's head once the sticker switch has been activated. Some apparently unreachable score bubbles also add to the frustration. In short, the top section after the hot air balloon could use some more work.

If the level was indeed made by you I'd rate it: :star::star::star: that could see another added if the second half of the level gets a minor overhaul and some playtesting and polish. If it's stolen, subtract two instead.

As a last thought: whoever made the level, I'd think it strange to say the least that someone is requesting feedback for it 14 months after its creation. :eek:
2009-12-05 20:12:00

Author:
sny
Posts: 144


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