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My level name is "escape the beautiful nightmare" The story of it is your in a nightmare and you have to escape. Not much to the storyline. but it does have alot of jumping. the skill base of the level is jumping no real monsters. it can be somewhat repetitive but it starts out easy and get harder towards the end. so please give it a look. Critique it after you play it. and i mean rip it to shreds. tell me everything thats wrong with it. and what im doing right. It's a bit hard but theres plenty of infinate life spawns. i think i turned f4f on but im not completely sure. it says on.

2009-11-28 03:23:00 Author: Sputnik_15 Posts: 17

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Hey, this is my first thread and i wasn't completely sure where it should go. My level name is "escape the beautiful nightmare" i was wondering if you could tell me what im doing right. what im doing wrong. if its too hard. or how i can simply make it better. I'm trying to get good at creating but i need some real feedback. like a teacher critiques and essay. i need somebody to pick it apart. please give me good or bad feedback i would really appreciate it Soo close!! You need to have this in the Level Showcase and enable the F4F feature to get a lot of feedback. Basically if you play other F4F levels in the showcase, just tell them you wish to have them give you feedback on this one. Good luck!

2009-11-28 03:28:00 Author: jwwphotos Posts: 11383

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Jwwphotos is right. If it's a level you want checked, you want it in Level Showcase, I'll move it there for you.

2009-11-28 03:33:00 Author: Whalio Cappuccino Posts: 5250

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I take all critiques.. good or bad. i like my work torn to shreds

2009-11-28 05:51:00 Author: Sputnik_15 Posts: 17

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You might want to edit the Thread name as well as add F4F. Just click on the edit and then select advanced. The rest should be somewhat self explanatory to change that stuff. If you look at some of the other level threads, they generally have the thread as the level name as well as add some photos. Also add a description of the level and any other tidbits. Good luck!

2009-11-28 06:03:00 Author: jwwphotos Posts: 11383

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