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A sweet task - Planet lavalokomotivetoto A sweet task - Planet lava: Everywhere are fire.A fat Baby want to show you,what he love to play.Can you stop this baby?Dont think that as these babys are sweet and nice.They are killer babys,who want to kill you! all This is a Levelsequel,that made only by me. Four divine Babys want to show you,what they love to play.One of them love to play with fire,the other one with wind.Your mission? Defeat all babys!And save the galaxy.In this level you'll meet the first of four babys.He is fat and he he farts constantly.Oh god.This will stink!You can think,what he love to play!Look at the headline. Attention:This is the second part of my sequel. I havent got made the part one,because I aware later a story.Actually, this level should be a black white planet level!But part one and three are in work!incidentally,this level will shine with the colors red and brown.It may be that this level has some errors, but I will remove them as soon as possible. The Pics havent got a good quality,if you play the level in lbp,everything looks nicer,than the pics here So I wish you much fun with a red-brown and crazy level 1-2 Player(s) not more than pls!Thanks!

2009-11-26 15:33:00 Author: Unknown User

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Really enjoyed that one - loved the colour scheme and the overall design, rusty cogs and that red go fantastically together. Gameplay was interesting with a few surprises - loved the vertical train (though I was very grateful for the infinite lives checkpoint there ) and the cage at the end. Great stuff - looking forward to part 2.

2009-11-26 15:53:00 Author: Ozmosis23 Posts: 24

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I just played this - and liked it. It was very artistic and beautiful - it fit in with the theme and you and some nice machinery (and platforming fun) going on there. Good job! Just a few things - 1. I almost finished it but died right at the end next to the checkpoint - was a bit confused, and I lost all my lives by then. Nothing really to say here - just mentioning! 2. Sometimes it was a bit confusing of what you were supossed (ignore my bad spelling!) to do. 3. Nothing major here - the spelling in the speech bubble annoyed me a bit - maybe you could look at correcting them? 4. I think it would be a good idea to set a description for when you load up the level - this might attract a few more plays! Hope I've helped! And if you do change anything or make any updates tell me, I'd love to play it again if it'd help you. Seeing as your doing F4F - would you mind taking a look at my level and leaving some feedback? It'd be a great help! Link: https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=t=18967 Thanks! And again - good work! :star::star::star::star:!

2009-11-26 16:47:00 Author: standby250 Posts: 1113

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Thanks for you're comments @standy250 I know i did some mistakes but .. I can promise that I will improve the level! Yes i'll write a feedback for you and ozmosis23

2009-11-26 18:33:00 Author: Unknown User

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Great visuals. I did get caught up in the cogs when i went up the lift because I was trying to dodge the fireballs but I don't think you can do anything about that. It was a great level. Had fun. I gave you 4 stars. Please F4F: https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=t=18995 Thanks!

2009-11-27 11:31:00 Author: MrTran Posts: 216

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Thanks for your comment mrTran .. Yes F4F i'll write for you a feedback

2009-11-27 20:37:00 Author: Unknown User

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Hiho loko, played through the level and got these things to say: First off: please improve the spelling and presentation in your post. One's for sure, you pulled off a level with a color scheme i've never seen in an LBP-level. It's original and stylish. A little disappointing though, that it ends so early. It's far too short. But let's just blame the thermo ^^' All in all a neat little level with some really cool ideas like the vertical train. Not very complicated but that's basically what the mayor audience of LBP want's, eh?

2009-11-28 16:48:00 Author: Vanemiera Posts: 329

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Hey just tried your level man. Major props that you're are from Germany. I'm German myself (in blood anyway lul) Anyway here is my critique: Design: Awesome stuff here bro. Love the red monochromatic color scheme. Swirls add a touch of whimsy. My only critique is move some of the swirls around because at some points it looks empty in the background, even it out. Not a major issue just me being picky. Ok one thing I think you should do is not put the thermo filled at the end. Personally I felt the level was fine. The length of level doesn't bother me, quality and fun factor do. I hate it when people put apologies, H4Hs, and adds at their score boards. The level is good you don't need to put that stuff at the end. Language: Ok, like what others said, grammar. I liked how the fire baby's English was broken, it made it sound more child like. However, there were time when it was too broken. Just a minor problem. Game play: Fun and entertaining. Don't change a thing. :star::star::star::star::star: and hearted. sweet work F4F - https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=t=19244 Thanks

2009-11-28 18:24:00 Author: m3p Posts: 58

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At first : Thanks for the comments vanemiera and m3p. I was happy,if i saw your comments! I dont know ..whether I can still write the feedback today. But I promise you that tomorrow, the feedback will be there!

2009-11-28 20:27:00 Author: Unknown User

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Just got done playing this. Excellent level! The visuals were unique, and the way the platforms moved and swayed along with the background gave the level a really unique feel to it. I also enjoyed the cute concept... bad baby! A few notes I made: There were several areas where tne english didn't make sense, or was hard to read. Now, I can't really fault you for this.... I can ONLY speak and write english, so I totally appreciate that you aren't writing in your native language. The text "You spotted my grazing? Thats your dead!". I'm not sure what "grazing" means in this sentence. To me, "grazing" is what a cow does in a field. Also, I think the 2nd sentence should be "That's it, you're dead!". The text "You wont loose,ya?" should be "You won't lose, will you?". There is only 1 O in the word lose ('loose' is another word which means something isn't tight... such as 'the bolt was loose&apos. There was a few more, but they were difficult to write down because I had to platform while they were displaying. But again.... can't fault you on the english. Just telling you in case it helps. Now, on the rising elevator part (where you go up for a while while you have enemies and fire logs thrown at you) - I was trying to avoid the logs, and plane shifted back on the cog, which made me go down into the fire. I don't know if you meant it to be this way, but if you want to prevent the player from plane shifting back onto the cogs, you can use pieces of thin invisible dark matter. If you don't know how to do this, I think there are a few threads explaining it, or I can tell you. Anyway.... small issues aside, this was a fantastic and stylistic level. I gave it 5 stars and a heart. Great job! EDIT: Oh yes, and congratulations on your level getting spotlighted.

2009-11-29 00:23:00 Author: CCubbage Posts: 4430

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Thanks a lot CCubbage I know,that my english isnt good ^^ But thanks that you corrected me Ohhhh im soo happy ,that my level getting spotlighted its a wonderful feeling Attention:Sorry guys i delete the old version of a sweet task It was a misstake ((( i won't do that (((((It had 1.800 plays and 122 and now just 22 plays and 1 heart ... Imm sooo sorry but i corrected some misstakes in the dialog's ))) Hope you have fun with the first red level in LBP !

2009-11-29 12:10:00 Author: Unknown User

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Aww, you deleted the level and published again? What was that for? Dang it, it will be hard to get the highest score again... Anyways, congratulations for the spotlight! About the level, I feel that I already told you everything that can be told about it, but ayways, I'll try to give some feedback. -The dialoge. I don't know to what extent you fixed this, but it is the major flaw in this level. If there's something specific that you don't know how to say, just ask me. -The visuals are outsanding! Those red swirls are simply amazing! You really did a great job here; you pulled out aesthetics that aren't complicated but look extremely good. -The gameplay. Excepting the train part, it isn't specially innovative, but that doesn't mean that it isn't great. The gameplay overall was fun, and that's it. In the train part, however, there's a special thing that I don't like: those enemies that fall from above. It feels kind of an unfair death. I'd rather have a single well designed enemy that those 3. Just a suggestion, though. -I'd suggest you not to say that about the level being short because of the thermo. And don't show that thermo, either. This level is really good, an you shouldn't sorry yourself for those kind of things. If the thermo is full it is because you really did make a beautiful level! There's no need to apologize for that. I gave this :star::star::star::star::star: and a heart. I can't wait to play the next ones! Oh, and I know I'm repeating myself, but it's a shame that you accidentally deleted the level. I'll go and put a heart on it again, but many people won't :s

2009-11-29 12:38:00 Author: Keldur Posts: 628

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Thanks for this amazing comment keldur:&apos Deleted the level : I know its unbeliveble annoying ((( I were soo sad keldur i could cry (((((

2009-11-29 13:21:00 Author: Unknown User

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Well, I went back and put my heart back on it. I agree with Keldur's suggestion about mentioning the thermo at the end of the level. The level isn't SO short that this is necessary. Maybe just a text box that says "Stay tuned for part 2!"

2009-11-29 17:04:00 Author: CCubbage Posts: 4430

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When you publish it again, publish it ON TOP of the old one (overwriting it). This way you don't lose any plays, hearts and rating. By the way, I stumbled accross your level last night and played it. It's really cool. I love the unique look and you had some good gameplay in there. My only con besides a couple of english error (don't worry, doesn't kill the experience) it's that elevator that rises up while you receive some logs of fire by the head. I thought the idea was great but the execution is a bit finicky. I didn't "feel" like I was in control of what would happen or that I would know what's next. This led me to bad reactions and I suffered a couple of cheap deaths. Anyhow, I really enjoy it because you have great balance between "beautiful" and "fun". :star::star::star::star: + heart ( I will have to go heart it again because you erased the first level! lol) (I will also give you 5 stars this time ot strenghten your rating towards haters out there) .

2009-11-29 17:09:00 Author: RangerZero Posts: 3901

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I don't really know how to contact you right now, Chocogirl/lokomotivetoto, but the correction you requested is done, so I'm going to post it here. You just copy past it and edit your first comment on the thread, then: A sweet task - Planet lava: There are four really mean babies in total, and each one loves to play with a different element. In this level, you'll be facing the fire one, who happens to want to burn you down! Can you stop him from doing so? This is a level in a series, which will be made by me. These levels consist on that there are 4 divine babies, and that each one love sto play with a different elemnt, being it fire, wind, ... Your mission? Defeat those ill mannered babies, in order to -logic, isn't it?- save the world! In this level, you meet the first one of the abies, who loves to play with fire and also play with fire, but not necessarily in that order. Looks like this will stink! Note: This is actually the 2nd level of the series. I haven't made part 1 yet. Part 1 and three are works in process! This level may have some errors, but with some constructive feedback, I may be able to fix them as soon as possible. The pictures might not be of the highest quality, but I assure you taht everything looks 10 times better in the level! So go play this red brown looking level, I assure you yoou won't be dissapointed! 1-2 player reccomended. Thanks! I hope that was helpful!

2009-11-29 18:56:00 Author: Keldur Posts: 628

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First of all I must admit that loko(... )s new level is a great work! I really like it! I saw it since the beginning and it was cool to see the growth every time you showed it to me. Congradulation for the spotlight - your level (and you) deserves it! I hope to see more levels from you in the future! Keep up the good work! And i hope to see you soon in lbp or anywhere else best regards theCooper

2009-11-29 22:03:00 Author: theCooper Posts: 72

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Funny... I played this level a month ago and I was about to look up your levels in favor of adding a nice feedback to my level series until I already played one of them [same goes with the other 3 of your sweet task levels]. The artistic visuals of this level is radical and the platforming is awesome. Your level building style is good and colorful, your character designs are a top notch, and the train design is great. Outstanding visuals and gameplay. Can't wait to see you do more Chocogirl; keep up with those sweet visuals and game play.

2010-04-22 22:42:00 Author: JustinArt Posts: 1314

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