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Prince of Persia

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Prince of PersiasgtJARHEADxX
Journey through Persia as you try to find Elika and save her from the dark wizard. Make your way through the ruins and palaces with many traps and obstacles. Based on the 2008 game Prince of Persia.
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This is my 5th level. I am relatively new to LBP and I'm still trying to get used to the more difficult gadgets. I feel like this is my best level in terms of setting, props, and gadgets and I hope you all agree! Let me know if anything needs improvement, it needs more detail, etc. Thanks!
2009-11-23 23:05:00

Author:
Unknown User


Could you post a few pictures, please? Because now I can't get any kind of impression on should I play it.
However, I'll be kind this time, I'll play it anyway.
2009-11-24 16:51:00

Author:
Unknown User


Ya...Pics. Well I'll try to get some...eventually.2009-11-25 01:18:00

Author:
Unknown User


I'll tell you how to add pictures.
1. Take some pictures and send them to HDD.
2. Go to the dashboard/pictures/lbp
3. Insert a portable memory stick and copy the picture to it.
4. Now plug the thing to your computer and download the pictures.
5. When editing the thread you should be able to add your pics in.

Oh, and now for the review. Be aware that I'm quite fussy.

I find the level to look quite unfinished. The use of the story horse is giving a very amateur look, even if it fits. In general, you should NEVER and I mean never use a story object, unless it's a non-material object, like the milk bottle or bamboo stick.
Also, it was a very lazy solution to make a sackboy shaped dissolve object, sticker it, and call it an evil wizard. A good boss is made of several parts, is preferably even a little animated and has multiple attacks. I've heard PCAwesome makes good bosses, so you might want to check some of his work.
Top of all, I find the environment to look very much unlike the world of PoP. Lets take the part where you must swing across that platform of grass. Why was it grass instead of those rings? Why am I in some sort of rocky wasteland instead of the cities surrounding the palace.
Shortly, the level has much to improve. At the posititve side your grammar is good, and you at least didn't show anti-matter or use an empty background.
2009-11-25 19:52:00

Author:
Unknown User


Thanks. I'll get the pics ASAP. And I appreciate the review.2009-11-26 02:21:00

Author:
Unknown User


I just beat it, overall it was a fun level. I did notice a few things wrong though, the final boss you can clearly see the emitters, I don't think they should be shown. Also, you can beat the level without even having to fight the final boss. I pulled the last switch at the end and was able to complete it without the need to fight him. Try out my level too if you ever get a chance, I still need feedback.2009-11-27 01:47:00

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TallMike101
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