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Adventures in evermore pt 3
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| Adventures in evermore pt 3lordty3000 After making it to the dwarf city you must go through the city and its sewers before you can reach the outpost in the desert on the other side of the mountain. The passages below the fortress in the desert hide an ancient evil..... all Try out my level its the third in the series and the 4th is up too. They are a fantasy realm adventure. Let me know what you think and help me to make it better. | 2009-11-19 16:29:00 Author: Unknown User  |
| nothing...come on people let me know what i can do to improve my levels! | 2009-11-20 22:50:00 Author: Unknown User |
I'll check this out next time I go on. I suggest putting up some pictures so people will take more interest in your level.  EDIT: Okay I tried this level out and I found it quite fun. - When you start off all the characters are the same object, if you have thermometer space I suggest creating at least one more character you can use. - There weren't enough checkpoints, I think that there should be a checkpoint after every obstacle you face, on this level you had to go through 2-3 challenges till the next checkpoint, making it frustrating when you die on the last challenge of the bunch and have to redo the ones before. - Camera zones made it annoying to see in some places - Not enough atmosphere, everything just seemed a bit still. - More clues to the player needed + I like how you had about 3/4 different visual themes going through the level, making you feel that you've gone on a journey. + Nicely placed decorations. + The bosses looked awesome. + The level had a nice dreamy feel to it. :star::star::star::star: and tagged 'satisfying' Since your doing feedback for feedback, I was wondering if you could try out one of my F4F levels, see my signature. | 2009-11-24 15:50:00 Author: olit123  Posts: 1341 |
| Thanks for responding. These are the exact tips I need. Id like to know exactly where the camera angels need to be changed but thank you and I will review your level as well. | 2009-11-26 18:21:00 Author: Unknown User |
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