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gordan freemans mindblanb your gordan freeman in the black mesa compound trying to escape. this lvl is very funny with its dioulouge and scripted events. all this is my biggest achivment in lbp with it taking a full month to complete. please give feedback as no one else will and let me know what you whant to see in the seqwell

2009-11-18 21:38:00 Author: solid-snake Posts: 212

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This is based after the machinima series of the same name isn't it? EDIT: Yep.

2009-11-27 20:40:00 Author: Unknown User

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Huge fan of the machinima series. I will play ASAP.. BTW, put some effort into your post. If you worked for a month making the level, you want to sell it to us better too. (advertise it better) Use capitalization, punctuation, grammar, etc.. Also, it's Gordon Freeman not Gordan Freeman.. And the series is called "Freeman's Mind" not gordan freemans mind.

2009-11-27 21:39:00 Author: Unknown User

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Darn its based off the "Freeman's Mind" Series. I thought it might have been Quater Life: Halfway to Destruction by Peter Chimaera. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fOvglodUIcA I havnt played the level yet. But ill give it play when I get time. Also like AwesomeNick94 said, you might want to make your first post a little bit more exciting. Use better grammar. Put in pictures and maybe even a video!

2009-11-27 22:57:00 Author: King_Tubb Posts: 435

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I'm going to avoid giving any feedback.. I don't know what to tell you.. Sorry.

2009-11-27 23:47:00 Author: Unknown User

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Hey AWESOME NICK! Give feedback, no matter how bad. Just give it as it is. And this looks great, but I can't get on the PS3 at the moment. LATER!

2009-11-28 00:47:00 Author: chezhead Posts: 1063

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Well, I'll try. You ever play one of those levels made by a little kid that has no idea what he/she was doing? Like one praising Hannah Montana or Selina Gomez.. This is basically one tiny step higher than that. I can't remember seeing a single capitalized letter, there's lots of spelling errors, and almost no punctuation. Lines are repeated, and it doesn't relate to the actual series very well. There was no challenge to the level, you just walk through, hoping to find something relative to the series, something entertaining, or the end. What really ticked me off is that Half-Life is a rated M game. Kids should not be playing it, let alone praising it. I'm sorry, but this level really looks and sounds like it was made by a 9 year old. I can't really tell you any specific ways to improve your level other than putting some thought into it. Once again, sorry. This is really how I feel about it.

2009-11-28 01:00:00 Author: Unknown User

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Lots of fun! That creature that jumped at me half way through the level was brilliantly made - scared the crap out of me. Though I have to say that you'll probably get a lot more views if you spelt it 'Gordon' rather than 'Gordan'. I'm also a big fan of the series.

2009-11-28 10:33:00 Author: carl Posts: 10

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well sorry you feel this way nick but can i just add something. i am trying my best with the grammer i have a lerning disability with grammer and plus im using the crappy virtual keybord so there are times when i mis up. and if you couldnt find any relitiveness to the machinima try looking again. there mostly from the erlyer episodes and there not is correct order i just whent with it as thought seem fit.

2009-11-29 14:00:00 Author: solid-snake Posts: 212

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