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STORY Introduction Introduction It was a normal day. The sun was shining, people were creating, and people were having fun. This was the way of the Sackpeople, and it was the only way they knew..and could think of. But of course, this was not to last. But, lets discuss the events leading up to it. Sackpple was a young, cowardly-like, shy type of Sackboy. He stayed away from other happy gadders, built levels alone, and basically avoided everyone. His life though, was far from ordinary. His dad worked for the military, and since there was no purpose for an army, his dad made very little. His mother had been long dead, and Sackpple himself was having a tough time at school. But one day, while running from other gadders to find, he saw an unusal bump right by his hinding place. Upon further investigation, he found the dirt was fresh, as if to bury something. After pondering what he should do, he decided to see what was worth burying. What he found was marvolous. It was a glowing object, of a shape he could never remember. Were those lines, or curves? Was it green or blue? Three dimensional, or two? These he could not seem to remember, but touching it gave him a brilliant feeling. Scared, he dropped it and ran home. As he closed his door, he noticed he still felt great. Confused, he turned around and saw his own reflection in his mirror. He was glowing green. His usually short blond hair was a strange color that he also couldn't identify, and his jacket was a tad darker than his skin. Suddenly, a headache formed and he blacked out. Chapter 1 When he awoke, the green aura and everything else unique was gone. His jacket was once again black, his skin the usual weaved white, and his hair blonde. Pleased, he quickly got back to his feet and then fell back down again, in fear. In front of him was a hooded figure, with his green glowing eyes revealing themself behind the darkness that covered his face. "Who..who are you?" Sackpple said, fear revealing itself in his voice. "Your saviour", the figure said with a laugh. Sweat was rolling down Sackpple's face. "I'll..I'll call the cops on you!" Sackpple cried, but realized he didn't know their number. "Give me the Eix!", the stranger cried, holding out his hand, as if expecting to receive it. Suddenly, Sackpple turned more white than usual. A ghostly white. He left the unique object two miles away. "I..I don't have it," Sackpple said as he began to cry. "Please don't hurt me!" The figure only sighed, then vanished causing Sackpple to once again black out. He jerked right up, sweating, eyes bulging, fear poisoning him. Slowly, he studied his surroundings. White walls, medicine cabniet..and a doctor. He was in a hospital. "Thank goodness your awake!" the doctor said, sounding shocked. "You were out for two weeks!". But Sackpple wasn't paying attention to the doctor. He was paying attention the vicious war going right outside the place of healing's doors. Chapter 2 "What happened?" was all Sackpple could, and wanted, to say. The doctor sighed, and stood by the window to gaze at the raging battle. . "It all started when we find you. Glowing like mad. You should've been dead!" the doctor said, then yelled the last phrase, banging his fist on a nearby table. Sackpple looked down in a strange guilt. For some reason, he felt as if he had done something, but he couldn't quite remember. "Suddenly, the glow blasted from you, escaping your house whatever way it could. All the walls, knocked down. Suddenly, the foundation crumbled, and the house collasped. On me, your father, and whoever else was in there." Suddenly, Sackpple knew what happened. He didn't know how, but he knew. It was strange, how just finding something could do all that. But since he didn't tell the doc bout this strange new power, the man continued. Chapter 3 "They...them...dead..", Sackpple barely said, tears coming from his eyes. The doctor raised an eyebrow. "Yes. Only me and you survived. How did you know that?", the doctor asked, confused. "I don't know!", Sackpple yelled, then buried his face in the bed's fluffy pillow. The doctor started walking towards Sackpple, when an explosion was heard and the hopsital shaked like mad. He noticed that Sackpple was starting to glow again. "SACKPPLE! WHAT ARE YOU DOING?", the doctor yelled frusturated. "Leave me alone!", the young sack cried. "Your going to kill us all!", the doctor yelled, but his voice was lost as the hopsital lost balance and started to fall on its side into the nearby river. SUBSCRIBERS LIST Welcome to the subscribers list. Here you can see who is subscribed...and know that there is a list. If you wish to be signed up, send me a private message or post on this thread. SUBSCRIBERS Astrosimi

2009-11-10 22:10:00 Author: Testudini Posts: 3262

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Interesting... I am very intrigued to see where this goes

2009-11-10 22:12:00 Author: ARD Posts: 4291

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That bad, huh?

2009-11-11 01:26:00 Author: Testudini Posts: 3262

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Not bad at all. I rather enjoyed the LBP tie in. I hope to see some more of those references. I thought this part was written very well: When he awoke, the green aura and everything else unique was gone. His jacket was once again black, his skin the usual weaved white, and his hair blonde. Pleased, he quickly got back to his feet and then fell back down again, in fear. In front of him was a hooded figure, with his green glowing eyes revealing themself behind the darkness that covered his face. "Who..who are you?" Sackpple said, fear revealing itself in his voice. "Your saviour", the figure said with a laugh. Sweat was rolling down Sackpple's face. "I'll..I'll call the cops on you!" Sackpple cried, but realized he didn't know their number. "Give me the Eix!", the stranger cried, holding out his hand, as if expecting to receive it. Suddenly, Sackpple turned more white than usual. A ghostly white.

2009-11-11 04:20:00 Author: comphermc Posts: 5338

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You know, you should set up a subscription system, so that people could be updated on the story if they so please. If you do make it, sign me up

2009-11-11 05:07:00 Author: Astrosimi Posts: 2046

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Now, if I was atleast one day old I might know how to do that! GOO-GOO-GAA-GAAH!

2009-11-11 12:25:00 Author: Testudini Posts: 3262

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Now, if I was atleast one day old I might know how to do that! Just edit your original post to include a list of subscribers. When you update the story, just send these people a PM letting them know. Check out some of the other threads in the Creative Writing section to see how it works.

2009-11-11 12:28:00 Author: comphermc Posts: 5338

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.... You know what I say to that? DO YOU WANT TO KNOW MY RESPONSE?!?!? WELL YOU CAN'T HAND-k.

2009-11-11 12:48:00 Author: Testudini Posts: 3262

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Thats so cool! OMG i want more!!!! i wanna know who that dark figure was! so intersting!!!!!

2009-11-11 15:44:00 Author: Tawarf Posts: 457

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New chaptah

2009-11-24 02:11:00 Author: Testudini Posts: 3262

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cool i like how lbp is joined to it kinda reminds me of prototype lol

2009-11-24 20:05:00 Author: rseah Posts: 2701

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