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Temple treasure Part 1: pitfalls

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Temple treasure Part 1: pitfallsdanlee80
This is THE BEST of my levels
all
okay, this is a level i made trying to perfect traps, but now its awesome, it has a ancient setting and part 2 is on its way, i do have to admit, it's a bit short if u are really good at acing levels, but if ur not, you shouldn't be able to beat this in less than 20 minutes.
2009-11-05 04:25:00

Author:
Joshofsouls
Posts: 1569


I like it! But...

-Very short, I'd like it to be longer.
-You should add a camera for the large stairway.
-It looked nice.
-The first trap was very difficult to see, it is a good idea to not give the player unexpected and random deaths. You did give a hint of its presence, but you may want to change the camera angle so you can see it.
-You should add a checkpoint before the first trap, so the player doesn't have to climb the stairs more than once.
-I like the obstacles, they were hard, which was good, and they weren't annoyingly hard, which is good too.
-You may want to remove the gas that appears after the small fire drop. It is unneeded and is difficult to maneuver through.

Good level, 4 stars.
2009-11-05 04:41:00

Author:
warlord_evil
Posts: 4193


Short but fun!

Liked: One of the better visually composed temple themed levels out there.
Only one of the death traps could be considered cheap.
Good mix on the music.
Sarcastic comments that for the first time on LBP didn't annoy me.

Dislikes:
Really, really short - I ran through it in exactly 3 minutes including multiple deaths. I get quality over quantity, but it'd be awesome if you could keep the quality up over a bigger level.
Maybe would have liked to have seen a little more interactivity in your level. Outside of one switch and the glowing skull, there wasn't much to do other than stay alive.

Cool stuff overall. 3.5/5 stars. Feel free to leave feedback on any of the levels in my sig.

After the sign that says this treasure is for fools, you have an environment switch that can be turned invisible.
2009-11-05 18:56:00

Author:
mr Radical 5601
Posts: 515


Wow! I have never seen a good level themed on treasure temple!
Bad:
-Stairway: What ever you say they are NEVER good. Expecially when you are going up to them.
-Length: I expected it to be longer. Oh whatever.
Good:
+Gameplay: good hidden traps and very fun platforming; exactly what I expected from you!
+Visuals: Unique (and that's what I appreciate the most!) and very beautiful. Maybe a little weird in a good way.
+Audio: sounds and music were all cool.
Critic: :star::star::star::star: but no <3. Don't have much space left on hearted levels list. Otherwise I should add this. You have real talent in level making and I really am interested about what you make in future. Seriously man keep it coming!
2010-05-10 13:34:00

Author:
FreeAim
Posts: 2462


BTW I want my feedback on The Cellar please!2010-05-10 13:35:00

Author:
FreeAim
Posts: 2462


What warlord and radical said. Plus.. some good ideas (liked the sliding spiky platforms), let down by boring visuals. Sorry :/

If you feel like reviewing, Arbitrary Platformer 2, please.
2010-05-11 07:45:00

Author:
roux-
Posts: 379


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