Archive: 48 posts

---

The Perpetual Distance - (Chapter II) - The Abandoned CitadelKoRnDawwg http://www.lbpcentral.com/forums/picture.php?albumid=826&pictureid=8006You and the gang are back for some more exploring - only this time within the City of Mayhl, which has been devastated by a sudden military coup. You are now set to journey through the ruins and reveal the truth behind this attack, whilst still in search of the next artefact...Is this Lizeth's doing? It's a little shorter than usual due to thermo problems, I didn't get to end it as epically as I wanted to but still, I hope you enjoy! Special thanks to Knocked Out, Zwollie and everyone else who has tested for me And yes, Evanesced (or Forgave...No idea why he's changed his PSN ) makes an appearance as the last guard. Dawwg all

2009-10-31 19:37:00 Author: KoRnDawwg Posts: 1424

---

Yo dawwg, you ain't fly! But this level sure is! I'm playin it now and it's AMAZIN! The second speech bubble after the teleport is just ************. Better check the words you used... unless you wanted it censored

2009-10-31 19:43:00 Author: iGotFancyPants Posts: 1355

---

hmm i just played it.. really AWESOME mhhm nice details really nice background the sound effects are cool etc. i just Found a little problem hehe. a hole at the begining lol hearted and :star::star::star::star::star: nice work!

2009-10-31 20:11:00 Author: Joey Posts: 758

---

Yo dawwg, you ain't fly! But this level sure is! I'm playin it now and it's AMAZIN! The second speech bubble after the teleport is just ************. Better check the words you used... unless you wanted it censored Guess what word I used? 'Happened' LOL Why?! It's fixed now...Quite annoying since I didn't actually say what I wanted to say ?__? And I'm pretty fly! I am! For a white guy anyway

2009-10-31 20:11:00 Author: KoRnDawwg Posts: 1424

---

Wooohooo! finally its out, i've been playing it with you alot lately so i've already seen the most of it before but heh there is so much detail in this level that every time I come back I see things I didn't see before! I love the colours and materials you used, after I saw you level for the first time I wanted to give up on my level because yours was looking so amazing I also love the details you put in, like the checkpoints with gates that open when you walk past them and the falling lights when you collect a thing that noo-one will collect (thats what you called them right?) The level was of good length and had enough platforming in it, I can't wait till the next one.. Hope that doesn't take you a year to make :| There's so much more I could say about the greatness of this level but then the others would have nothing more to say I didn't find all the collectables though, and I've been trying to trick your 2-player part for about 10 minutes but I couldn't get to it, well done! I did manage to get the bubbles though Don't ask me how lol. Gave the level a well deserved :star::star::star::star::star: and a big heart saying beautiful

2009-10-31 20:32:00 Author: Kn0cked-0ut Posts: 562

---

OMG... gimme 10 minutes... Okay, played it... brilliant stuff as I've come to expect. Beautiful, artistic visuals, very cool puzzles and super atmosphere. Loved the 'things' you have to collect, and some good music choices and SFX, too! Some great mechanics too (btw, did you mean to leave some switches and muisc radios showing? Kind of spoiled a bit of the effect in places). This series is easily one of my favourites - but I'm angry to report that even though I gave it 5 stars (and others here have) that it's currently rated 3 stars. I wouldn't normally recommend or condone republishing as new, but in this case I simply don't care. I would either implore prospective players to ignore the insultingly low rating (this level is stunning), or, Dawwgy, I would consider taking this masterpiece down and trying again. I despair, I really do.

2009-10-31 20:38:00 Author: MrsSpookyBuz Posts: 1492

---

hmm i just played it.. really AWESOME mhhm nice details really nice background the sound effects are cool etc. i just Found a little problem hehe. a hole at the begining lol hearted and :star::star::star::star::star: nice work! Thank you! But what do you mean by a hole in the beginning? :o Wooohooo! finally its out, i've been playing it with you alot lately so i've already seen the most of it before but heh there is so much detail in this level that every time I come back I see things I didn't see before! I love the colours and materials you used, after I saw you level for the first time I wanted to give up on my level because yours was looking so amazing I also love the details you put in, like the checkpoints with gates that open when you walk past them and the falling lights when you collect a thing that noo-one will collect (thats what you called them right?) The level was of good length and had enough platforming in it, I can't wait till the next one.. Hope that doesn't take you a year to make :| There's so much more I could say about the greatness of this level but then the others would have nothing more to say I didn't find all the collectables though, and I've been trying to trick your 2-player part for about 10 minutes but I couldn't get to it, well done! I did manage to get the bubbles though Don't ask me how lol. Gave the level a well deserved :star::star::star::star::star: and a big heart saying beautiful Thanks! I forgot to credit you as being one of my main testers, I'll do that now I really appreciate that, and yes, I do call them the things which no-one will collect But I do like to add that little replay value for those who wish to try and collect them all As for the two player part, EEK! You could get the bubbles? Noes! Must change :/ But I'm glad that you tried to trick it, and even happier that you couldn't do it! HA! No seriously, it's impossible I can't blame ya xD And yes, part 3 will probably be a complete breeze, this was the really hard one to make y'know, cause there's so much plot...Almost frustrates me that I couldn't really put all the details in Anyway, thank you again, and don't bloody give up on your level now, if anything I should be envying you -__- Just a couple of corrections! I accidentally made a couple of mistakes in the speech bubbles...Hopefully now it should be a little clearer

2009-10-31 20:48:00 Author: KoRnDawwg Posts: 1424

---

I'll check it out. Since the first one was.... Fly I'll have some feedbackz up soon

2009-10-31 21:09:00 Author: KQuinn94Z Posts: 1758

---

Crap, three stars...Well, not as well as I thought it would go...

2009-10-31 21:13:00 Author: KoRnDawwg Posts: 1424

---

3 stars?? I think you fell foul of the rating kiddies there, that sucks. Lovely gothic atmosphere that really drew me in, and some really special lighting in places too. All the little details really add up, the animated checkpoints, the collectables that don't necessarily appear straight away, and it also feels like its own authentic little world which is not easy. I'd have to play first again because the story left me a little clueless, but thats no criticism. You could do a very succinct recap of sorts that might bring new players up to speed... only a thought. Great work. : )

2009-10-31 21:19:00 Author: julesyjules Posts: 1156

---

Crap, three stars...Well, not as well as I thought it would go... See my previous post - ignore etiquette, republish it new. I'll play it again, and so will SpookyBuz.

2009-10-31 21:21:00 Author: MrsSpookyBuz Posts: 1492

---

Crap, three stars...Well, not as well as I thought it would go... Seriously!!? You better republish now because the 3 stars will keep coming if more unfair raters play it and this level definitly deserves 5.

2009-10-31 21:22:00 Author: Kn0cked-0ut Posts: 562

---

OMG... gimme 10 minutes... Okay, played it... brilliant stuff as I've come to expect. Beautiful, artistic visuals, very cool puzzles and super atmosphere. Loved the 'things' you have to collect, and some good music choices and SFX, too! Some great mechanics too (btw, did you mean to leave some switches and muisc radios showing? Kind of spoiled a bit of the effect in places). This series is easily one of my favourites - but I'm angry to report that even though I gave it 5 stars (and others here have) that it's currently rated 3 stars. I wouldn't normally recommend or condone republishing as new, but in this case I simply don't care. I would either implore prospective players to ignore the insultingly low rating (this level is stunning), or, Dawwgy, I would consider taking this masterpiece down and trying again. I despair, I really do.Hmm, well which do you think is the better option? I guess I could try again... 3 stars?? I think you fell foul of the rating kiddies there, that sucks. Lovely gothic atmosphere that really drew me in, and some really special lighting in places too. All the little details really add up, the animated checkpoints, the collectables that don't necessarily appear straight away, and it also feels like its own authentic little world which is not easy. I'd have to play first again because the story left me a little clueless, but thats no criticism. You could do a very succinct recap of sorts that might bring new players up to speed... only a thought. Great work. : )Thanks! I almost forgot to say add that you'll have to play the previous levels beforehand :o I think that's what threw people off...I think I made the story all too confuzzling :o Thank you once again, I really appreciate it!

2009-10-31 21:27:00 Author: KoRnDawwg Posts: 1424

---

Okay, in the future, please forget that I ever said this... You could try locking it, republishing as new, and if the newer one does the same or worse, delete it again. Just let me know the nano-second you decide. DISCLAIMER: I didn't type this - it was my goldfish.

2009-10-31 21:32:00 Author: MrsSpookyBuz Posts: 1492

---

Okay, in the future, please forget that I ever said this... You could try locking it, republishing as new, and if the newer one does the same or worse, delete it again. Just let me know the nano-second you decide. DISCLAIMER: I didn't type this - it was my goldfish. Lol at that post This thread is on fire! It'll hit the cool pages in about an hour

2009-10-31 21:37:00 Author: Kn0cked-0ut Posts: 562

---

Okay, in the future, please forget that I ever said this... You could try locking it, republishing as new, and if the newer one does the same or worse, delete it again. Just let me know the nano-second you decide. DISCLAIMER: I didn't type this - it was my goldfish. Huh wut? Don't remember 0__0 But I have republished, if that's what I thought you said...Can't remember but I can remember a goldfish visited me in a dream...0__0 ...Okay I'll stop...But I have republished

2009-10-31 21:51:00 Author: KoRnDawwg Posts: 1424

---

I have absolutely no idea what you mean... (I'm on it!)

2009-10-31 21:57:00 Author: MrsSpookyBuz Posts: 1492

---

I have absolutely no idea what you mean... (I'm on it!) ...I actually think you may have some involvement in that dream...Was it your goldfish by any chance? (And okay!)

2009-10-31 21:59:00 Author: KoRnDawwg Posts: 1424

---

...I actually think you may have some involvement in that dream...Was it your goldfish by any chance? (And okay!) Yes, he's called Fred, and he's nearly two! He does escape from time to time, so please give him a finely dissected prawn if he comes by Brum! (SpookyBuz is on it now)

2009-10-31 22:02:00 Author: MrsSpookyBuz Posts: 1492

---

Yes, he's called Fred, and he's nearly two! He does escape from time to time, so please give him a finely dissected prawn if he comes by Brum! (SpookyBuz is on it now) Unfortunately all trains leading to New Street station are off because conductors can't be arsed to work voluntarily on a Sunday anymore. Even so, he can probably thumb a lift, or if he's patient enough, wait until Monday. 0__0 Can he talk by any chance? I'll give him a call (Wait, there's two of you? EDIT: LOL! Just realised that it's not MrsSpooky, it's Spooky, as in MrSpooky, and that means he's your, yeah, I get ya... -__-)

2009-10-31 22:05:00 Author: KoRnDawwg Posts: 1424

---

Unfortunately all trains leading to New Street station are off because conductors can't be arsed to work voluntarily anymore. Even so, he can probably thumb a lift 0__0 Can he talk by any chance? (Wait, there's two of you? EDIT: LOL! Just realised that he's your husband *tut* Stupid me -__-) Oh dear, what a shame, well, he sometimes likes to ride his bike so look out for him! (Gah! Good job Spooky didn't read that before rating! He's leaving a comment on your level! lol)

2009-10-31 22:08:00 Author: MrsSpookyBuz Posts: 1492

---

Oh dear, what a shame, well, he sometimes likes to ride his bike so look out for him! (Gah! Good job Spooky didn't read that before rating! He's leaving a comment on your level! lol) Well, if he can ride a bike...I wonder if your fish's fins can hold a controller... (Oh ****! I'm going to hide behind your goldfish...On that note, why the hell are we talking about your goldfish riding bicycles, thumbing lifts, catching trains, eating freshly dissected prawns and visiting dreams? Hey, sounds like a good comedy!)

2009-10-31 22:13:00 Author: KoRnDawwg Posts: 1424

---

Ahem... Dawwgy seems to be having a weird dream... Still, in the interest of fairness... "Okay, played it... brilliant stuff as I've come to expect. Beautiful, artistic visuals, very cool puzzles and super atmosphere. Loved the 'things' you have to collect, and some good music choices and SFX, too! Some great mechanics too (btw, did you mean to leave some switches and muisc radios showing? Kind of spoiled a bit of the effect in places). This series is easily one of my favourites - but I'm HAPPY to report that even though I gave it 5 stars (and others here have) that it's currently rated 5 stars." Nice one!

2009-10-31 22:16:00 Author: MrsSpookyBuz Posts: 1492

---

Ahem... Dawwgy seems to be having a weird dream...Must be the contaminated fish food...Wait, wut? Still, in the interest of fairness... "Okay, played it... brilliant stuff as I've come to expect. Beautiful, artistic visuals, very cool puzzles and super atmosphere. Loved the 'things' you have to collect, and some good music choices and SFX, too!They aren't just 'things', there 'things' that no-one will ever want collect lol jk, Thank yuuz Some great mechanics too (btw, did you mean to leave some switches and muisc radios showing? Kind of spoiled a bit of the effect in places). Yes, yes I had to The radios especially, otherwise it would not make any sense. But as for the permanent switches, I did that just to give a little lesson to newbs and add a bit of subtle "what you would find behind the scenes" action This series is easily one of my favourites - but I'm HAPPY to report that even though I gave it 5 stars (and others here have) that it's currently rated 5 stars." Nice one! Well holy crap, let's hope that kids will be blessed with the ability to read within the next couple of days Thank you so much though for your great help

2009-10-31 22:34:00 Author: KoRnDawwg Posts: 1424

---

Is this a hint to the hidden goldfish that might be in your level? Is it in the water to the left? If it is.. be right back!

2009-10-31 23:06:00 Author: Kn0cked-0ut Posts: 562

---

Right, some updates... ...The level is doing pretty well, but I realised that I never fully checked the speech bubbles properly (I was kinda in a rush yesterday), so all corrections have been made. I've also placed the radios better so they're lying on objects, which actually looks pretty cool Right...I'll have to be using the republish trick so I apologise in advance for any torture 0__0

2009-11-01 19:23:00 Author: KoRnDawwg Posts: 1424

---

*Apologies for the double post!* Righty ho! Well I had a few minutes to check the progress and plays of the level, and Goodness Gracious Great Balls of Fire! (Yes, I'm using that joke again but hey, I performed it with the solo yesterday night and BOOM it was awesome! ) . It got on page two...Which is strange to see considering it has significantly less plays than some other levels on there...Is there something like a play:heart ratio or something? Anyway, Chapter III should actually be a lot quicker, and a little less plot-heavy (?) than this one...Even though there isn't a whole lot, it's still way too much for some kids to handle -__-' Never fear though, it's not like I'm toning down the plot because of the reception from this level, I just don't have to add as much in this. It's more focused on manoeuvring through the underground passages

2009-11-04 17:44:00 Author: KoRnDawwg Posts: 1424

---

You are correct, sir - a level can move faster up cool pages with less plays if it has good hearts and good ratings. And, boy does this one deserve it! I enjoy each release in this series - I love the imaginative platforming. I gave it 5 stars and a heart.

2009-11-05 22:57:00 Author: CCubbage Posts: 4430

---

You are correct, sir - a level can move faster up cool pages with less plays if it has good hearts and good ratings. And, boy does this one deserve it! I enjoy each release in this series - I love the imaginative platforming. I gave it 5 stars and a heart. That's interesting, I thought it was based on plays and how many people are playing it at once 0__0 Thanks for that! And I'm glad you enjoyed it Well, I went on a slightly over-the-top republishing spree yesterday night to really push this thing to page one. Today is the last day it will be on cool pages and hell, it's on the front page right now! I'm happy it's up there. I feel now that this level has achieved good success

2009-11-07 10:02:00 Author: KoRnDawwg Posts: 1424

---

Astonishing detail. Makes me want to attempt a level just like this one. Loved the overall look and although the platforming wasn't all that challenging (for me), it was fun. At the very end I was only able to collect 2 items however, so perhaps I missed a few? 5 stars all the way.

2009-11-07 19:02:00 Author: SHENOA77 Posts: 184

---

On my second playthrough, I was still as impressed as the first time My only major feedback is at the drawbridge, the R1 sign made me think I was supposed to jump and grab the winch (assuming you used the glitch), so I jumped off that thing at least a dozen bloody times lol. Same goes with the two doors early in the level that open, where you need to grab the block inside to open the other door below that one. I thought it was metal, so I was wandering around that place for what seemed like forever Beautiful, beautiful, epic level. Did I mention it was beautiful? Best layer glitch I've seen out of the hundreds of beautiful layer glitch levels out there. A big, smoochy heart for you and your level. Keep it up!!! Btw, it's "pene" that censors happened.

2009-11-07 19:25:00 Author: Incinerator22 Posts: 3251

---

I made this a while back -pedestal impede stampede -torpedo spedometer -cockpit peacock cockroach woodcock cockatrice -happened penetrate ripened opened deepened dampened ect. -entering sweltering blistering altering watering -skyscraper trapeze grape -analyze analouge canal -punching crunching hunching -reputation amputate computation disputable deputation -unremovable ovation oval -X3 or 3X -computer -Osiris -Humpty -Stinger -immortal

2009-11-07 19:34:00 Author: Incinerator22 Posts: 3251

---

That's the most ****ed-up list of censored words ever. But thank you for telling me Right, the level has had it's run on cool pages, totaling around 7,500 plays. However, the really, really annoying thing is that it ended up with three stars. ****ing ****-take. I've had comments ranging from "it was good but i didn't know what to do, 1 star", as well as "it's spelled artifact, 1*", despite the fact that I've had to RELENTLESSLY say that it's spelled with an 'e' in the UK. I'm just so ******, I hate the LBP community.

2009-11-09 13:40:00 Author: KoRnDawwg Posts: 1424

---

That's the most ****ed-up list of censored words ever. But thank you for telling me Right, the level has had it's run on cool pages, totaling around 7,500 plays. However, the really, really annoying thing is that it ended up with three stars. ****ing ****-take. I've had comments ranging from "it was good but i didn't know what to do, 1 star", as well as "it's spelled artifact, 1*", despite the fact that I've had to RELENTLESSLY say that it's spelled with an 'e' in the UK. I'm just so ******, I hate the LBP community. I know what you mean, my level had a two star rating after the first 50 plays : luckily its 4 now If I was you I would republish the level... the level deserves much more than 3 stars and 7500 plays and im sure there are enough people out there that give you 5 star ratings Perhaps publish it and ask friends to play it so you start with a good score?

2009-11-09 16:48:00 Author: Kn0cked-0ut Posts: 562

---

I know what you mean, my level had a two star rating after the first 50 plays : luckily its 4 now If I was you I would republish the level... the level deserves much more than 3 stars and 7500 plays and im sure there are enough people out there that give you 5 star ratings Perhaps publish it and ask friends to play it so you start with a good score? Far, far too much hassle. I'll just do better on the next one, and besides, 7000 plays isn't bad. I just hate kids, and despite the fact that these ignorant and snotty little ****ers have consistently rated one star, others who have considered the amount of effort put into making these levels have said that's it's pretty good. So as long as I am appealing to those people, I'm happy. Honestly, I've just never had a 3-star level and am a bit ****** about it, but meh, I'll live. Now. Chapter III, anyone?

2009-11-09 19:07:00 Author: KoRnDawwg Posts: 1424

---

Your starting with chapter three already? If you need a tester you know who is waiting for it

2009-11-09 19:25:00 Author: Kn0cked-0ut Posts: 562

---

Your starting with chapter three already? If you need a tester you know who is waiting for it It should be the easiest one Gameplay outweighs the story in this one. It's just basically a journey through a colossal underground cave system. It's also fairly satirical since there's still military activity on top with soldiers killing civilians, yet the Noveltones play at the same time You also see a load of wealthy and rich people watch the bombing of the Citadel and congratulating eachother and the soldiers for the coup's success.

2009-11-09 20:16:00 Author: KoRnDawwg Posts: 1424

---

Sounds like a good idea, not sure about the Noveltones though lold

2009-11-09 21:47:00 Author: Kn0cked-0ut Posts: 562

---

Sounds like a good idea, not sure about the Noveltones though lold Nothing better than a few murders whilst listening to elevator music So, I'm working on chapter III whilst coming back to my DMC remake-remake...Should try and get some pics... Better make it quick. As soon as June next years strikes, I'm quitting LBP

2009-11-12 20:56:00 Author: KoRnDawwg Posts: 1424

---

Nothing better than a few murders whilst listening to elevator music So, I'm working on chapter III whilst coming back to my DMC remake-remake...Should try and get some pics... Better make it quick. As soon as June next years strikes, I'm quitting LBP I already quit littlebigplanet february 2009

2009-11-12 22:12:00 Author: Kn0cked-0ut Posts: 562

---

I already quit littlebigplanet february 2009 ...eh? 0__0

2009-11-13 18:18:00 Author: KoRnDawwg Posts: 1424

---

Made a comeback this summer by joining lbpc

2009-11-13 20:06:00 Author: Kn0cked-0ut Posts: 562

---

Made a comeback this summer by joining lbpc I'm talking about quitting entirely. Like, never returning.

2009-11-14 21:51:00 Author: KoRnDawwg Posts: 1424

---

I'm talking about quitting entirely. Like, never returning. I know, I'm not sure how long my interest in littlebigplanet will last.. do you have a specific reason for quitting in june 2010?

2009-11-14 21:56:00 Author: Kn0cked-0ut Posts: 562

---

I know, I'm not sure how long my interest in littlebigplanet will last.. do you have a specific reason for quitting in june 2010? A levels. I'm dedicating myself to studying Maths and Physics as part of my AS next near, preparing myself for sixth-form. Basically, I'm going to be do ****-loads of work and I won't have time for LBP.

2009-11-14 21:58:00 Author: KoRnDawwg Posts: 1424

---

I don't know what grade or difficulty (Don't know how to say this differently, everythings called different here) your in but next year is the last year for me and Im doing the highest possible with math and physics but I've got plenty of time, my grades aren't that high though Oh I realise were talking about this on perpetual, ontopic now!

2009-11-14 22:03:00 Author: Kn0cked-0ut Posts: 562

---

I don't know what grade or difficulty (Don't know how to say this differently, everythings called different here) your in but next year is the last year for me and Im doing the highest possible with math and physics but I've got plenty of time, my grades aren't that high though Oh I realise were talking about this on perpetual, ontopic now! Well, Maths at A-level (not sure what you call it over there...College?) is the hardest subject you can take...Scarily enough. I have to really work on it. Funny it's your last year next year 0__0 ANYWAY, well, I'm taking a small break from Perpetual to make LBPC and Winter Contest related stuff

2009-11-14 22:07:00 Author: KoRnDawwg Posts: 1424

---

And congratulations to you too korn!, hard work pays off

2009-11-15 11:22:00 Author: Kn0cked-0ut Posts: 562

Posts: 1077139    Threads: 69970    Members: 9661    Archive-Date: 2019-01-19

Aus dem Archiv wurden alle persönlichen Daten wie Name, Anschrift, Email etc. - aber auch sämtliche Inhalte wie z.B. persönliche Nachrichten - entfernt.
Die Nutzung dieser Webseite erfolgt ohne Speicherung personenbezogener Daten. Es werden keinerlei Cookies, Logs, 3rd-Party-Plugins etc. verwendet.