Archive: 12 posts

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Homelessfreddykrugerfred http://img340.imageshack.us/img340/8576/littlebigplanet009.jpgMy short halloween contest level I made in 1 week. all This level is very short but features some great story telling and visuals. It tells a short but entertaining creepy story and has a lot of work put in on the visuals. I hope you all will enjoy this on halloween's eve I appreciate all comments!

2009-10-28 18:05:00 Author: nightwing Posts: 422

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I played through this the other day and liked it. I can't comment specifically until after the level contest is done so it's fair but I'll try to leave some comments when judging is done.

2009-10-28 18:07:00 Author: Morgana25 Posts: 5983

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Thanks I'd love some feedback

2009-10-31 12:06:00 Author: nightwing Posts: 422

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Nice and pretty layout, I like all the sack characters and that newspaper coming up like that, Nicely done. It's just too short though, all you do gameplay wise is move a key and close a coffin. You need more things to jump over, enemies to kill and one or two switches because the story and visuals don't really make up for it. Just some improvements of the top of my head, nothing major but needs some music/sounds, few lights and a conclusion of the story near the end. Good level nevertheless, creepy story and fun characters. :star::star::star::star:

2009-11-02 11:15:00 Author: LordMagicPants Posts: 187

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Thanks for the feedback! You are absolutely right about gameplay. I didn't have the time to implement some platforming gameplay but will do in my next project

2009-11-02 17:01:00 Author: nightwing Posts: 422

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any more comments please?

2009-11-08 08:56:00 Author: nightwing Posts: 422

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Just played it. It's really short, but the decorations and objects were really cute. I liked the coffins and the dinner table a lot. Good job.

2009-11-08 10:03:00 Author: Pixietails Posts: 6

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I like the premise here! But the level could have used a lot more polish. - The Magic mouths, although not visible, were all over the place. This could be fixed by making the cut scene cameras more focused in one place. -The player barely has time to see the introduction screen, they just fall down and see it for like a second. -Even if it was a story driven level the game play was still very lacking. Maybe some more puzzles or intense chases? -The level just ended...O.o..I mean if you wanted to continue it then add like a cliffhanger ending but the level here was just cut off. - What was that thing at the end of the level? The sack thing that just waved at you? I do understand though that you had a strict time limit for the contest right? D= I hate time limits too! I really hope that you can get the chance to fully put your time in this level someday. But this level had some rally good things too! + I liked the characters! They looked pretty nice! + The design of the park structures were lovely + The graveyard looked very peaceful. + The way you read the newspaper was really nice. + The going into the coffin idea was interesting! All in all the level needs a bit of work. But has done pretty nice! :star::star::star:/ Short Once again thanks for the review!

2009-11-08 23:04:00 Author: Noroibito Posts: 211

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Hey there, i'll play the level in the weekend since im busy right now and I shouldn't be checking out the forums. If I forget to leave feedback just pm me

2009-11-12 22:09:00 Author: Kn0cked-0ut Posts: 562

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I was really getting into this, but it ended so soon! The graveyard was ace though, and I loved the addition over the scoreboard

2009-11-13 13:11:00 Author: Tanuki75 Posts: 172

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It was definitly lacking gameplay wise, but it looked nice. I liked the weirdo statues before the coffin, and the end was kind of hard to understand but creepy (which I think is what you were going for it being halloween themed and all).

2009-11-23 23:47:00 Author: RagTagPwner Posts: 344

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okay, just played this. I really like the beginning, especially with the newspaper and everything - I enjoyed the visuals up to where you go into the grave. I think from then on it was a bit plain and also some music might've added to it a bit. It was also quite short. Somthing you could add to it are things such as more gameplay, and perhaps decorated the tomb abit more. Sorry I don't mean to be harsh. overall though I'm gave it :star::star::star:. I liked the beginning bit alot though. But I also read you had a time limit so fair enough. Hopefully you can add to this or somthing? If you do, let me know and I'll replay it!

2009-11-24 19:31:00 Author: standby250 Posts: 1113

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