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Super Mario Bros 3 Level 1-1

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Super Mario Bros 3 Level 1-1CastroX10
Its a nice remake of the first level of the classic mario bros 3. i made it LBP style i think its very fun. though, am not that good creator.
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ill appreciate if u leave me feedback, and tell me wat u think. And heart if u had fun! thanks!
2009-10-18 19:49:00

Author:
Danielcastro
Posts: 11


bump... need feedback!2009-10-19 23:07:00

Author:
Danielcastro
Posts: 11


I thought bumping is a no-no?
Anyways, I will try out your stage and I will give you feedback afterward. However, it is my preference to go and play the actual Super Mario Bros. 3 game (the specified level only) before I play your stage. It may take a while, a day for most, but I will give feedback based on my own history of game-designing.
2009-10-19 23:34:00

Author:
Seiryuki
Posts: 11


ok sure. thanks2009-10-20 01:36:00

Author:
Danielcastro
Posts: 11


I will play this fairly soon, but, will have to play the original Super Mario Bros 3 level that you remade into LBP. I normally don't care much for these kinds of levels but I guess Steve_big_guns changed my mind about that 2009-10-20 03:04:00

Author:
iGotFancyPants
Posts: 1355


You did an excellent job recreating that 1st level of SMB3! It really felt as if you captured all the major pieces of structure and creature from that level and placed them in LBP! (I actually went and grabbed the 'white block' to see if I'd fall through it as in the game, but no luck ^_^).

I had some problems with the invisible barriers, I felt they took away the player's experience without them knowing. It would make the player sorta confused as to why they're not allowed to freely pass through, although I see what you're doing. I was also able to stand on top one of the invisible barriers ( I think it is the 1st one) and go right across.
With the Jetpack, I thought you were going to make that secret in the sky, but it wasn't there. Actually, I was blocked by an invisible barrier. I really think that you should add the secret up there, or else it seems worthless flying. It sorta erases the nostalgic feeling of flying up for the secret.
The backgrounds were well created, especially the ending. I just love that run-jump to get the star!

Beautifully created stage nonetheless, and I did enjoy most of it, especially those red jumping koopas (they caught me with that jump even in LBP?!), and I gave it a 4 stars.
*thumbs up*
2009-10-20 04:40:00

Author:
Seiryuki
Posts: 11


ok - checked it out tonight

I think your ? boxes have infinite bubbles on some of them. The second set of two boxes and the grab box didn't stop putting out bubbles. Not sure if you want just one or infinite on these so I thought I'd point it out. I'd also suggest making all the boxes out of one material. Some are dark matter, some are dissolve.

on the clouds and some of the other shapes I can see where you've put a box of dark matter to hold it. If you make the dark matter a traingle and make it very small you can attach it to the outside of the cloud shape so people can't see it. It's a small detail that can really add polish to a level.

Good use of invisible walls in the jet pack area. Keeps the Mario look but limits where sackboy can go. Good choice.

Visible piece of dark matter on the stone blocks.

Try to use the corner editor on those wooden blocks at the end to smooth out some of the extra corners. It will look smoother and take up less thermometer

I like the black ad blue triangle edge dividing the end from the level - looks very Mario.

Overall a cute level that has some really nice Mario baddies in it. Just take a little time to clean up some of the dark matter parts and it will look even better. I gave this level 3 stars. It's a level Mario fans should enjoy. Thanks for sharing it.
2009-10-20 04:53:00

Author:
Morgana25
Posts: 5983


thanks all of you! i will definitely do the secret area in the sky. and how do i do to make the dark matter not see-able without the block fell? ( sry 4 my english am from costa rica )2009-10-23 23:46:00

Author:
Danielcastro
Posts: 11


it was difficult but i made it the secret area is released!2009-10-28 02:00:00

Author:
Danielcastro
Posts: 11


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