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The Awakening, ACTUALLY PUBLISHED!

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The Awakening, ACTUALLY PUBLISHED!tawarf
Cool, yeh ummmm, yeh your trapped in a dream world, can you get out? this took 2 months, alot of hard work i put into it i hope you like it
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2009-10-16 10:29:00

Author:
Tawarf
Posts: 457


i will play it tonight,,, i look forward to it,,,can you check my level again.. i havent been online in 5 days,,, is i ton page 1 yet?... and how many plays has it had?... THANKS,,,PEACE.2009-10-16 10:43:00

Author:
Unknown User


That was a very good game. A very interesting dream world to play in. I wish my dreams were this good. They're usually full of emptiness. Back to your level, the only problem I had was falling where the clouds begin to the bottom of the level behind some gas that didn't kill me. Not a major problem but just thought I'd let you know. Like I said at the start, a very good game.2009-10-16 17:58:00

Author:
shindol
Posts: 78


I really liked the variety in this level. It kept me wanting to see what was going to happen next. The gameplay was fun and simple throughout. I would have hidden the music myself. Ive seen a few levels that have left them visible, maybe as they are trying to emulate mm. A very enjoyable level.2009-10-16 20:22:00

Author:
SteveBigGuns
Posts: 423


Am I the only one that can't find the level?2009-10-16 23:31:00

Author:
brnxblze
Posts: 1318


Sorry, it doesn't exist! I see Randomosity, Stiched Orange (sic), Climbing Sack, Randomosity 2, Randomosity 3, and The Forbidden Temple.2009-10-17 02:26:00

Author:
Argon Vile
Posts: 28


Sorry, it doesn't exist! I see Randomosity, Stiched Orange (sic), Climbing Sack, Randomosity 2, Randomosity 3, and The Forbidden Temple.

Soz guys i had to delete, it was 3 stars for some random reason. probably cause a noob hater came along and 1 stard it!
2009-10-17 11:43:00

Author:
Tawarf
Posts: 457


Dude, just cause its four stars, that doesn't at all mean its a bad level. 4 stars is an extremely good representation for a level.

I'll give this a go and tell you exactly what it deserves....

EDIT: I'm an idiot xD I forgot it got deleted lmao
2009-10-17 13:23:00

Author:
iGotFancyPants
Posts: 1355


4 stars is amazing, you just delete a level be becuase it got one 1 star away from what you were expecting?2009-10-17 13:52:00

Author:
Darkcloudrepeat
Posts: 606


Mate, take a look at some of the showcased levels here. You will notice that not a single good level with more than 100 plays manages to stay at 5 stars. 4 stars is what you call a very good rating.

In order to get a permanent 5 stars-rating, you'd need a level which

- is suited for all audiences
- which you can't die in, thus quitting frustratedly, but which is hard enough for those who seek a real challenge
- ...

well, you'd need a level which pleases everyone, no matter how old or experienced. This is simply not possible. There will always be at least one person out there that doesn't actually like your work. No reason to delete your level!
2009-10-17 15:12:00

Author:
Treas
Posts: 223


wait... OPPS! i said 4 stars????? i meant 3!2009-10-20 16:41:00

Author:
Tawarf
Posts: 457


Okay I see you published the level, here's some feedback as I go through (first time I do this in a while!)
-The first two mouths have some spelling errors
-I really dislike when there are mouths that tell you what to do, I think you should make like a question mark with a sticker switch so if anyone needs help they sticker it or maybe a sign that shows you what to do (I'm talking about the parts where it says to put a ball into a hole, the part where it says looks like these lights can be grabbed, where it says there must be some switch here i can instert here, i hope...., the part where it says grab on..., they are vulnerable to hit on the head, the gates locked maybe i can sneek in..., ). I just think its really obvious and it made me feel like you thought I was stupid lol. Also I like to figure things out for myself so I think all these obvious hints messed up the level a bit.
-The killing parts were really strange, it seemed like I was killing people for no reason
I gave the level 3 stars. It was designed well in some parts but I just couldn't give it 4 stars for some reason, sorry.
2009-10-27 18:38:00

Author:
brnxblze
Posts: 1318


I will play once I start feeling better. Feedback coming soon!!2009-10-27 19:03:00

Author:
Mod5.0
Posts: 1576


Could u be any eviler!!!!2009-10-29 14:11:00

Author:
Tawarf
Posts: 457


i think ima delete this level..... i really dnt like it anymore.2009-10-29 14:12:00

Author:
Tawarf
Posts: 457


Why do you always think that your levels need to be deleted? So, someone gave it 3 stars... big deal. Everyone is entitled to their opinion.

Rather than delete it, why not work to make it better? That's the purpose of these forums, is it not? Brnxblze offer some critiques, and were meant to be taken as suggestions, not motivation to delete the level.
2009-10-29 14:45:00

Author:
comphermc
Posts: 5338


Could u be any eviler!!!!

You should be saying:

"Ok I respect your opinion and I will try and use it to improve my level. Thank you"

If you post it here and want feedback, don't expect it to be all positive. If that was the case, what is the point in this thread? The main point in the showcase is to get your level noticed and see what people think.

Seriously you have to calm down, keep the level there.

Now to give you my feedback.
I thought it was 4 stars. Very good. I just agree with brnxblze, You need to get rid of the countless speech bubbles directing me like I'm 2 years old. I also thought some of the visuals were a little rough in places, but overall a pretty level.

:star::star::star::star:
Good job. Just the little things need improvement.
2009-10-29 14:59:00

Author:
KQuinn94Z
Posts: 1758


ive deleted it. i reallyu wasnt botherd about it! lol it stressed me out... ALOT!!!2009-11-01 13:54:00

Author:
Tawarf
Posts: 457


the reason y i delete when 3 star is because it just dosnt change from then onwards.2009-11-01 13:56:00

Author:
Tawarf
Posts: 457


Sorry, but i think this is full of fail. Not the level, but mostly the way you think a 3 star rating is not good. Like, what? Is it just me or did Dreamscape ALSO receive 3 stars... as well as The Perpetual Distance Chapter II? You know what they did? Republished their levels. I know bonner123 also changes his level based on feedback because hes awesome lol

Anyway, I feel like I don't make sense anymore, so I'll stop talking. Please rerelease the level though, I haven't played it and I want to give you my honest opinion!
2009-11-01 15:02:00

Author:
iGotFancyPants
Posts: 1355


You know, probably the favourite level of mine, Unhearted: Drakes Misfortune has 3 stars. I don't care about the rating, I like it, and other people on these forums did to. And thats all that matters to me to be honest.2009-11-01 15:10:00

Author:
GruntosUK
Posts: 1754


ummmm i cant release it again! i deleted completely!!!!!! it stressed me out i didnt like it at all i improved on feedback but that made it worse....2009-11-01 15:43:00

Author:
Tawarf
Posts: 457


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