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Sackboys Shouldn't Play with Dead ThingsDanceatron http://www.rhythmfactorystudios.com/Forums/LBP/Dead_Things/A Photo_9.jpgHey guys. I just published a new stage called "Sackboys Shouldn't Play With Dead Things". Just in time for Holoween! This stage is like a beautiful and spooky picture book... with a really cool boss. Features: - TONS of cinematics - Plenty of "Dead Things" - Lots of detailed scenery - A complex and spooky boss all After making Botropolis, I wanted to make a stage with a Boss that was even better, and had a lot more eye candy.... and this is it! I'm excited to finally finish this one. It has a lot of love poured into it. I actually started this one before the Creator Pack came out (yikes!). But I finally was able to pick it back up and complete it. If you find anything buggy or broken, let me know so I can fix it. Have fun guys... and let me know what you think! Pics: http://www.rhythmfactorystudios.com/Forums/LBP/Dead_Things/A Photo_10.jpg http://www.rhythmfactorystudios.com/Forums/LBP/Dead_Things/A Photo_6.jpg http://www.rhythmfactorystudios.com/Forums/LBP/Dead_Things/A Photo_7.jpg http://www.rhythmfactorystudios.com/Forums/LBP/Dead_Things/A Photo_3.jpg http://www.rhythmfactorystudios.com/Forums/LBP/Dead_Things/A Photo_4.jpg http://www.rhythmfactorystudios.com/Forums/LBP/Dead_Things/A Photo_5.jpg F4F: I've been busy so I can only guarantee 3 F4F's right now. I'll gladly do more if I have the time.

2009-10-15 10:50:00 Author: Danceatron Posts: 23

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Looks nice can't wait to play it.

2009-10-15 10:53:00 Author: robotiod Posts: 2662

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This level was brilliantly put together. I liked the skelletons at the start and the boss fight was great too. The demon is awesome at the end and there's some superb cinematics. This level deserves soooo many more plays than it currently has. 5 stars and a heart from me. Excellent job.

2009-10-16 18:53:00 Author: shindol Posts: 78

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Alright, I played it, here goes; Good things : - PRO skellingtons! - Love the use of gas to make faces and ghostly enemies - Very cool boss concept - Some good scenery pieces Improvements to make : - You have some very nice looking bits, but there are relatively blank gaps with little no scenery. You should go back and add more to them; paper thin dead trees / bushes with eyes / rocks etc - End boss room needs to looking AMAZING, but unfortunatly...it doesn't... sorry, If anywhere needs tarting up its definatly that end room, it's the climax of your level and it needs to reflect that! Put cracks in the walls, put some paper thin pillars down, add decorations in and around the room, really just go to town. - A bit Short, I was hoping that the level would continue after that boss and I was dissapointed when the scoreboard came up and it ended I know it's hard to make this improvement, but adding longeivity without tedium would be a boon to this level. Thats it You really just need to work on making it look perty, I know its very superficial of me to say that but you do have some cool stuff going on in your level. This is the level i'd like you to feedback https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=t=17699

2009-10-16 19:31:00 Author: Asbestos101 Posts: 1114

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Thanks for the kind words shindol. I'm glad you enjoyed the stage. Oh, and Thanks to everyone that's played this. So far, it looks like everyone's liking it. Thanks for the review, Asbestos101. You have good suggestions, unfortunately I have a pretty high thermometer on this one, so I can't do too much more to it. I reviewed your "2026 Aerostation Project" level.

2009-10-17 09:55:00 Author: Danceatron Posts: 23

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Good things + The skeletons looked really cool and so did the graveyard + The ghost were cool also + The skeleton that reached up from the graves kind of scared me :eek: + The boss fight was AWESOME!! but it took me a little while to work out what I was supposed to do Not so good things - As Asbestos101 said it needs more scenery - I also wished it was a little bit longer but as you said, you can't add much more. :star::star::star::star::star: + A Heart for you and your level For F4F Could you look at the level in my sig

2009-10-18 01:38:00 Author: Unknown User

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