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A Loggers Life

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A Loggers Lifesrgt_poptart
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Basically three different minigames, a survival, a collection, and a race. Separate mini game where you find all of the loggers kids. I want feedback on how I can make the minigames easier to understand or less awkward. Thanks!:arg:
2009-10-15 08:51:00

Author:
srgt_poptart
Posts: 425


'Ello, I played your level. Let me Pros and cons you my feedback;

Pros;

-3 interesting mini game ideas, i liked the idea of the timed boat race, it was clever.

- The ongoing 'find the lumberjacks kids' thing, fits well on this sort of level.

- Nice characterisation and theme

Cons / things to tweak IMO;

- The race timer is too short for people getting yellows to make in time.

- The kid next to the wheel challenge is very hard to get.

- Getting onto the wheel in the first place and getting the 'start' sponge is very hard. The wheel is diffifcult to land on, I suggest making the wheel slightly easier to jump on.

- The mice challenge should have mice spawning at different areas, they became a bit predictable, also it would be cool if they moved

Theres a few things to improve on, I liked the concept of the level and a little bit more tweaking would really streamline the experience.


The level I wish for you to feedback is https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=t=17699

Thanks.
2009-10-16 17:45:00

Author:
Asbestos101
Posts: 1114


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