Archive: 5 posts

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By yours truly You find yourself in a different, not-familar place far from home, can you find your way back? My first level, although others have said ts pretty high quality for a first. Anyways, yea, would like it if ya checked it out and gave feedback. Any feedback will be returned as well. Thanks, and have fun!

2009-10-07 04:37:00 Author: Unicorn Squad 4ev Posts: 42

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I can't find your level

2009-10-07 05:12:00 Author: Unknown User

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its under my name and the name is the thread title...if that helps any... Also, you can just add my on PSN if you'd like

2009-10-07 17:19:00 Author: Unicorn Squad 4ev Posts: 42

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Ok, I played through your levels and these are my thoughts + I loved the atmosphere, the colours really worked well + The story was quite interesting I can't think of any other positives, Not because it isn't very good but just because I can't think of anything else to say (I'm better at finding problems that finding the good bits ) - The Sponges at the beginning weren't fully covered with the black sticker - Where you jump on the crosses the grab switch on the sponge in visible - There is one paintinator block on the stairs that if destroyed, requires you to restart because you can't get up. - You should put a paintinator at the first checkpoint after the race, if you manage to die and push the blocks too far away you can't get the paintinator again. (almost happened to me) - On the sign at the end that says "thanks for playing" you should make the letters smaller so you can fit them on the same line - Some of the paintinator blocks took a needlessly large amount of shots to destroy :star::star::star::star: + Heart, Good Job For F4F can you review my level "Sarcophagus Catapult", I'll put a link in my signature

2009-10-10 22:35:00 Author: Unknown User

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Thanks, yea I know there had to be a few glitches as it was my first level...i'll fix it up with your points as they do make a lot of sense and because I did take a lot of time to make this level so I want to keep at it and make it good. The paintinator blocks that took a lot was a good idea in my head, guess not in execution. The sign thou i did want to look like that as...well idk really i guess i wanted it that way to fit with the theme of 'oddness'. If more complain then i'll change it up. i just needed people to test it to find those mistakes. Glad you took the time to do it. Thanks for reviewing it, the next time im on LBP ill look at your level

2009-10-10 22:44:00 Author: Unicorn Squad 4ev Posts: 42

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