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Middle Eastern rompFrozen50 Just a short, simple platforming level, with nice detail. all Hey, new here. I usually like to put a lot of work into my levels, but have found that they never get more than a dozen or so plays, and nothing else I do can get more plays. Instead of sinking down to the level of spamming level comments with "pls play my lvl", I decided to come here. Just finished a little thing I started yesterday, and decided to post it here. It's a simple platforming level. Nothing fancy. The biggest thing it's got going for it is some nice detail, which is something I enjoy doing most in LBP So yeah, as far as depth goes, it doesn't have much. If you want that, perhaps check out my level "Watchful eyes" But yes, I do plan on being as active as I can in the community. I'd be happy to help anyone if they need anything, and I intend to check out plenty of all of your levels here. Here's a few screens of my new level: http://i36.tinypic.com/169nsra.jpg http://i36.tinypic.com/2hnx6b7.jpg http://i38.tinypic.com/fycrgx.jpg Comments appreciated

2009-10-04 03:30:00 Author: Unknown User

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I just played the level, and the detail was great, but the level overall seemed empty. -You should try to add more objects like curtains, carts, plants, and lights. -There was no sound effects, I think you should add wind ambient or something. -You should really add a background, it would add so much more to the level! -It could be a little longer, and maybe have a story. -You should add more gameplay than jumping, maybe dodging and leaping? 4 stars and a heart.

2009-10-04 03:48:00 Author: warlord_evil Posts: 4193

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Looks good - I'll give it a shot later.

2009-10-04 04:31:00 Author: Jagrevi Posts: 1154

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I just played the level, and the detail was great, but the level overall seemed empty. -You should try to add more objects like curtains, carts, plants, and lights. -There was no sound effects, I think you should add wind ambient or something. -You should really add a background, it would add so much more to the level! -It could be a little longer, and maybe have a story. -You should add more gameplay than jumping, maybe dodging and leaping? 4 stars and a heart. Yes, all very true. Thank you for the constructive criticism. I didn't really put much polish into this level, I guess. Oh well, there will be better things in the future. Thanks again.

2009-10-04 05:26:00 Author: Unknown User

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