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After Dark - Survival Challenge

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After Dark - Survival ChallengeRomiBraman
It's a survival challenge on a dark room where lights turn off one after another

http://sites.google.com/site/romainbrami/DSC02858.JPG

http://sites.google.com/site/romainbrami/DSC02863.JPG

http://sites.google.com/site/romainbrami/DSC02867.JPG

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Hi guys,

I'm looking for people to try and review my level.

I'm a bit proud of this one so I'll hope you'll try it.
2009-10-02 10:16:00

Author:
RomiBraman
Posts: 4


A very interesting level, The gameplay was quite unique, Here's some feedback:

I liked the concept of the level, Jumping on moving platforms over gas while slowly being enclosed in darkness, however there were a few things you could do to make it better

Add more detail, Stickers, Decorations and different materials could really make this level look better, I would suggest you the change the dark matter at the beginning and end to a better looking material, also extending the gas at the bottom a bit would make it look better IMO.
2009-10-02 13:00:00

Author:
Unknown User


The concept is interesting, i like how the bubbles can be used to determine the positions of the platforms. However, i'm not sure it plays all that well. If the platforms were spaced more evenly it would be easier, as is i was always jumping and having to calculate a different way to jump without seeing the platform. Also, as adam mentioned, some decoration could go a long way. Dark matter typically isn't regarded as the prettiest of materials, and i'm sure you could spruce up the level to make it look nicer.

For F4F could you check out "Just Play"? (link to F4F thread is in my signature)
2009-10-02 20:27:00

Author:
Burnvictim42
Posts: 3322


Hi guys, thanx for your feedback.

I have completely redesign the beginning and the end. No more Dark Matter Visible and a bit more "poesy" in it.
Also I have tweak the Platform emitter to make it more in Sync with the platform acceleration.

Hope you'll like the improvements (already 120 players ;-) )

Cyu All,

Romi
2009-10-03 20:46:00

Author:
RomiBraman
Posts: 4


It's a little bit dissapointing that you have no screenshots here. Do you want me get a screenshot of it and PM it to you?2009-10-03 22:34:00

Author:
CyberSora
Posts: 5551


It's a little bit dissapointing that you have no screenshots here. Do you want me get a screenshot of it and PM it to you?


It would be super nice.

Can you take the very begining of the level ?

Thanx,

Romi
2009-10-04 11:50:00

Author:
RomiBraman
Posts: 4


Hi guys,

Screenshot added,

Already 800+ players.

I'm so happy...
2009-10-05 19:19:00

Author:
RomiBraman
Posts: 4


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