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LittleBigHomestuck v0.5

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LittleBigHomestuck v0.5SonidZero
Based on MS Paint Adventures Homestuck
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Hey, this happens to be my first post on these forums.

This is a level Im working on based on Homestuck (Well, Johns house) from MS Paint Adventures Homestuck (http://www.mspaintadventures.com/?s=6)

Its quite hard to translate 3d to 2d, but Ive got it working pretty well.

Ive also made Costumes for John, Rose, and Dave. I kinda failed at making a Wayward Vagabond costume though, ill post pics of these/guides upon request

Id just like some people to test it and such for me, and if you like Homestuck, you probably should check this out.

Things you dont need to tell me
-3 rooms on the bottom, I havent even started yet
-Theres going to be horrible gas at the floor wayyyy down there, if you fall down right now just re-try
2009-09-27 06:16:00

Author:
SonidZero
Posts: 6


Ill go give it a play right now, and post a review.

Also if youre not busy right now if you could give my level a play Sack Run, you know holding up your end of the F4F bargain. Look in my sig for a link. That would be great.
2009-09-27 16:26:00

Author:
King_Tubb
Posts: 435


You're an MSPaint Adventures fan too? Sweet.
But I really doubt that you're going to be able to recreate the entirety of homestuck.
2009-09-27 20:06:00

Author:
Arkei
Posts: 1432


You're an MSPaint Adventures fan too? Sweet.
But I really doubt that you're going to be able to recreate the entirety of homestuck.

Oh I should of mentioned Im just making Johns house
2009-09-27 20:59:00

Author:
SonidZero
Posts: 6


Although I never really got into the original "game", I have to say that I liked the progress you've made so far!
-Pros
The detail in the house is nice, even if it is all mostly white.
I really liked the sofa.
The tree outside also looked nice.
The enemies seemed comical in a good way!
I liked the bubble placement not too much but just enough.

-Cons
One of the enemies flipped and got stuck.
The first speech bubble by the computer is censored. Maybe you can reword your statement? "Computer" is censored apparently.
There is a visible sound speaker under the sink.
Maybe you could have used the splash sound for the toilet instead of the big crash?
The tire swing section was incredibly frustrating. For some reason Sackboy needed like 7 tries until he got on the branch. The tire is probably too heavy. try making it smaller or thinner.

Other than that this level is headed in a good direction! I can't wait to see the finished product!
Currently: :star::star::star:

Oh and can you please return the feedback?
F4F: SIREN [The Lost World] (Episode 2-Otherside)
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2009-09-27 22:28:00

Author:
Noroibito
Posts: 211


Alright here is my belated Feedback, sorry my servers were really bad yesterday

Pros:

-Awesome detail, liked the house overall, cool enemies

Cons:
-The enemies can get stuck upside down when they do their flips
-Sackboy can fall off the edge and just land down there and walk around. I recommend you put gas down there so sackboy doesnt get stuck down there.
-The tree is near impossible to climb, i actually gave up and quit.
-A speaker is visible on the sink, and maybe you should change the sound for the toliet, "big splash" perhaps, i believe that sound effect is found in the purple one.

Overall good level :star::star::star::star: from me
2009-09-30 01:06:00

Author:
King_Tubb
Posts: 435


Thanks a lot for the reviews and I would get straight onto replying to feedback but my ps3 refuses to connect to the internet, I am improving the level
I
-made all objects that need to be invisible invisible
-redid how the enemies feet work (2 wheels on each, they dont get stuck at all anymore)
-lowered branch on tree (although you can also use the POGO to jump to the other branch and jump on top of the tire to get to the branch, Ill put a hint in about the pogo)
2009-10-02 05:09:00

Author:
SonidZero
Posts: 6


i agree with the other guys
but it's quite detailed
also, i'd like to get those objects somehow, copyable level, prizes or collaberation?

i know this is old but it's the only homestuck related-thread i could see
add me?
2010-10-06 01:38:00

Author:
I Am John Galt
Posts: 5


I just played your level and heres my feedback:

Positives:
+House looked pretty well designed
+Enemies were pretty good

Negatives:
-1st speech bubble in the house is censored
-You have rocks at the bottom of your level that dont need to be there because you can see it during gameplay anyway.
-When you go out the house to the right and once you get to the 4 bubbles near the mailbox if you fall you fall to the bottom of the level.
-Same for the right side you can fall to the bottom of the level

Sugguestions:
-Try adding gas on the right and left side so people cant fall to bottom of the level
-Remove Material underneath level
-Add more scenary

Overall it needs some more work::star::star:
F4F My level SSBB- Battleship Harlberd Interior
2010-10-07 02:22:00

Author:
Sabre_
Posts: 653


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