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The Begining: Part 1
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The Begining: Part 1Mopthefloo Neat level i made, tried to add as much neatness as possible but the thermo wouldn't allow it. The level is a simple platformer, and i've had many "ooos" and "ahhhs" from people. Recommended for 1 player, although it could work with more. all so, i'm not too sure how to work this F4F thing. and why there is 2 text boxes for level descriptions (?). Anyways, took me a while to make. I tried to add new features that you don't find in many other levels, like choosing what you say to a character in the game. It's a 3 part series level, but i only plan to make the other 2 if i know people enjoyed it. so please, try it out, and leave some feedback ![]() ![]() | 2009-09-24 02:56:00 Author: Mopthefloo ![]() Posts: 139 |
Hey man i just tryed your level, i'll give feedback in pros and cons: Pro - Nice scenery - Good choice of music/sounds and lightning effects - Original story - The sticker prizes were cool, would be better if the stickers were hidden in the level though ![]() - 3D glitched background looked nice Con - Sometimes i couldn't see where to go, would be smart to place some camera's to make it easier ![]() - I died about 50 times at the part where you have to climb the branches over the poisened mushrooms that I gave up.. sorry man ![]() ![]() Overal a good level, but needs some work to make it easier by placing camera's/and making the branches easier to climb. Good luck with the next of your levels, i'll take a look at them when you post more ![]() Could you please give feedback on my level, "Ghost of Sparta"? It seems it's hard to find so please add me on psn (kn0cked-0ut with two zero's) so you can go to friends and play it ![]() ![]() Link to my topic: https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=t=16535&page=2 | 2009-09-24 14:56:00 Author: Kn0cked-0ut ![]() Posts: 562 |
awesome thanks for the feedback ![]() | 2009-09-25 00:38:00 Author: Mopthefloo ![]() Posts: 139 |
I just played your level, here's what I think: -The layer glitch was nice, but I think you should just add a background, it would really add some level atmosphere. -The small bits of comedy were nice, the jumping mushrooms were funny, and I noticed a tree wearing a tie. -It was really hard to get onto the mushroom that launched you to the tree. -That same mushroom was slightly floating off the ground on one side. -The visuals were nice, but I think you should use the corner edit tool on some areas. Try not to get the look of 'taking the circle tool and dragging everywhere.' -The scoreboard was very under decorated, and you should remove the burn marks on the scoreboard itself, another way of removing the base of a scoreboard is crushing it. A nice level, I already forget what I rated it, but I would give it 4 stars. EDIT: It turns out I didn't rate it at all, I immediately wrote this review when I finished the level, I gave it 4 stars. | 2009-09-25 02:31:00 Author: warlord_evil ![]() Posts: 4193 |
awesome thanks for the feedback ![]() F4F means I give feedback on your level's post and you give feedback on my levels post.. so that means you have to post on my level ![]() | 2009-09-25 07:17:00 Author: Kn0cked-0ut ![]() Posts: 562 |
F4F means I give feedback on your level's post and you give feedback on my levels post.. so that means you have to post on my level ![]() ok, i did ![]() | 2009-09-25 13:40:00 Author: Mopthefloo ![]() Posts: 139 |
Thanks for the great comment on my level, but feedback for feedback is more than just telling you liked or not liked a level. It's helping eachother by telling what to improve. Could you please give me some more detailed feedback, im working on a second part at the moment and i need to know what stuff i should keep in and what could be improved or deleted ![]() | 2009-09-25 15:14:00 Author: Kn0cked-0ut ![]() Posts: 562 |
Thanks for the great comment on my level, but feedback for feedback is more than just telling you liked or not liked a level. It's helping eachother by telling what to improve. Could you please give me some more detailed feedback, im working on a second part at the moment and i need to know what stuff i should keep in and what could be improved or deleted ![]() sure, sorry. still new at this -.- | 2009-09-25 23:54:00 Author: Mopthefloo ![]() Posts: 139 |
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