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The Begining: Part 1Mopthefloo Neat level i made, tried to add as much neatness as possible but the thermo wouldn't allow it. The level is a simple platformer, and i've had many "ooos" and "ahhhs" from people. Recommended for 1 player, although it could work with more. all so, i'm not too sure how to work this F4F thing. and why there is 2 text boxes for level descriptions (?). Anyways, took me a while to make. I tried to add new features that you don't find in many other levels, like choosing what you say to a character in the game. It's a 3 part series level, but i only plan to make the other 2 if i know people enjoyed it. so please, try it out, and leave some feedback and i guess since it's F4F i'll try someone else's level then too.

2009-09-24 02:56:00 Author: Mopthefloo Posts: 139

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Hey man i just tryed your level, i'll give feedback in pros and cons: Pro - Nice scenery - Good choice of music/sounds and lightning effects - Original story - The sticker prizes were cool, would be better if the stickers were hidden in the level though - 3D glitched background looked nice Con - Sometimes i couldn't see where to go, would be smart to place some camera's to make it easier - I died about 50 times at the part where you have to climb the branches over the poisened mushrooms that I gave up.. sorry man I just couldn't do it because the branches were placed in a hard way.. please make that part easier Overal a good level, but needs some work to make it easier by placing camera's/and making the branches easier to climb. Good luck with the next of your levels, i'll take a look at them when you post more Could you please give feedback on my level, "Ghost of Sparta"? It seems it's hard to find so please add me on psn (kn0cked-0ut with two zero's) so you can go to friends and play it Thanks in advance Link to my topic: https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=t=16535&page=2

2009-09-24 14:56:00 Author: Kn0cked-0ut Posts: 562

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awesome thanks for the feedback i'll try to fix some stuff up if the thermo lets me. i'll try your level later tonight most likely. (although, i'm still i bit unsure of this F4F thing, do i post it here, or in a different thread?)

2009-09-25 00:38:00 Author: Mopthefloo Posts: 139

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I just played your level, here's what I think: -The layer glitch was nice, but I think you should just add a background, it would really add some level atmosphere. -The small bits of comedy were nice, the jumping mushrooms were funny, and I noticed a tree wearing a tie. -It was really hard to get onto the mushroom that launched you to the tree. -That same mushroom was slightly floating off the ground on one side. -The visuals were nice, but I think you should use the corner edit tool on some areas. Try not to get the look of 'taking the circle tool and dragging everywhere.' -The scoreboard was very under decorated, and you should remove the burn marks on the scoreboard itself, another way of removing the base of a scoreboard is crushing it. A nice level, I already forget what I rated it, but I would give it 4 stars. EDIT: It turns out I didn't rate it at all, I immediately wrote this review when I finished the level, I gave it 4 stars.

2009-09-25 02:31:00 Author: warlord_evil Posts: 4193

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awesome thanks for the feedback i'll try to fix some stuff up if the thermo lets me. i'll try your level later tonight most likely. (although, i'm still i bit unsure of this F4F thing, do i post it here, or in a different thread?) F4F means I give feedback on your level's post and you give feedback on my levels post.. so that means you have to post on my level It's on page 2/3, you can use the link though.

2009-09-25 07:17:00 Author: Kn0cked-0ut Posts: 562

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F4F means I give feedback on your level's post and you give feedback on my levels post.. so that means you have to post on my level It's on page 2/3, you can use the link though. ok, i did

2009-09-25 13:40:00 Author: Mopthefloo Posts: 139

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Thanks for the great comment on my level, but feedback for feedback is more than just telling you liked or not liked a level. It's helping eachother by telling what to improve. Could you please give me some more detailed feedback, im working on a second part at the moment and i need to know what stuff i should keep in and what could be improved or deleted

2009-09-25 15:14:00 Author: Kn0cked-0ut Posts: 562

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Thanks for the great comment on my level, but feedback for feedback is more than just telling you liked or not liked a level. It's helping eachother by telling what to improve. Could you please give me some more detailed feedback, im working on a second part at the moment and i need to know what stuff i should keep in and what could be improved or deleted sure, sorry. still new at this -.-

2009-09-25 23:54:00 Author: Mopthefloo Posts: 139

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