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Wanted: Criticism on my Vehicle

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*UPDATED*

Okay, I never wanted to make a vehicle, never struck my fancy. But then before I knew it, I have a vehicle that I would like judged. To spark my creativity I started messing with treads (like tank treads), then i started adding...that never ends well. Well its doesn't end bad, it just doesn't end for a couple of days
So I put a chamber on the front and then I started thinking how am I getting out of this thing. So I started tinkering with failed ideas, epic failed ideas, and horribly catastrophic (for the whole tank) ideas. I finally put a wobble bolt on and it worked beautifully. A nice side effect is that when I flip the "tank" over, usually on accident, it flips it back over for me. How considerate right?
Okay, so why I'm writing is because I really like where it went and I would like someone to critique it and possibly run some ideas by. I would love to improve on it, but right now I don't know how to improve it without cluttering it up.
Its published and titled "rightable tank"
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v720/thefrozenpenquin/APhoto.jpg
2009-09-22 09:01:00

Author:
thefrozenpenquin
Posts: 479


I played the level, and here are some of my thoughts:

You may want to change the material of the walls, they look to much like rock.
You could add cameras to show more of where the player is going.
You could add sound.

These are the treads for future tanks right? The treads are fairly large, which means that is one big tank, but that would be cool to have a giant tank.
2009-09-22 22:07:00

Author:
warlord_evil
Posts: 4193


Could you post pictures of it?2009-09-23 00:29:00

Author:
Incinerator22
Posts: 3251


Could you post pictures of it?

I'm working on it, probably will have some on tonight. (soon as I get the TV back )
By the way, incinerator22, I'm a huge fan of your tank. It started my interest in treads. Might sound dumb but I still haven't figured how you made yours, probably could just copy it or something but I like to figure things out for myself.


I played the level, and here are some of my thoughts:

You may want to change the material of the walls, they look to much like rock.
You could add cameras to show more of where the player is going.
You could add sound.

These are the treads for future tanks right? The treads are fairly large, which means that is one big tank, but that would cool to have a giant tank.

Honestly, the material wasn't even a thought, I just figured something to run over. Actually I found that metal gave the hardest test to the treads, I wanted to really rough them up.
I'm not the best at cameras, um can I just put one on the tank? Show some front area?
Sounds are coming, didn't know how much I wanted to invest into a vehicle, but this is actually taking up more of my interest than I thought.

If there is interest in a big tank, I will put some time to make one worth playing.
2009-09-23 01:23:00

Author:
thefrozenpenquin
Posts: 479


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