Archive: 6 posts

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A short one. It's a bit deep, but it's about everyone being equal and being themselves. Hope you like The Balance There's no black or white; just grey. There's no doubt inside you; just say! There's no right or wrong; just opinion, There's no land of freedom; just dominion. You don't choose what you know - you'll be told. If you don't know what you choose - lose your blindfold. Mountains and rivers pass you by, Always there, no goodbye. I want to see the sunrise, I want to see the sun, It may be different for everyone. The laughter we share, the tears we cry, I'll be there for you - no goodbye.

2009-09-11 20:01:00 Author: MrsSpookyBuz Posts: 1492

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awesome!!!!!!!!!

2009-09-11 20:09:00 Author: AliBoy1 Posts: 142

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Nice _____________

2009-09-11 22:00:00 Author: Unknown User

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Very good!

2009-09-12 03:22:00 Author: iGotFancyPants Posts: 1355

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Wacko! On a more serious note, very nicely written, very well rhymed . The one problem I had was that line 6 didn't really scan when I read it

2009-09-12 09:06:00 Author: dawesbr Posts: 3280

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Really nice! I recommend reading it out-loud rather than in your head!

2009-09-13 04:44:00 Author: Mr_T-Shirt Posts: 1477

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