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Well, I just recently got this idea for a story and decided to roll with it. So... yes. Here it is. Enjoy!

Table of Contents
Prologue:http://docs.google.com/View?id=ds3929t_67tfw2sfcc
2009-09-09 01:07:00

Author:
RockSauron
Posts: 10882


Thats really good! Very creative lol 2009-09-09 01:43:00

Author:
iGotFancyPants
Posts: 1355


Interesting, it almost sounds like an isolated version of "Surrogates".2009-09-09 02:02:00

Author:
BSprague
Posts: 2325


Reminds me of that Arnold Schwarzenegger movie, The 6th Day. If you haven't seen it, it's not imperative that you do, but it's got some good Arnie stuff going on.

Anyways, you've written a real nice hook. At first I was worried that it was going to be just teenage angst [in written form], but I liked the sci-fi twist. Are you endeavoring to write a short story? Novel?

I like what I've seen so far.
2009-09-09 02:12:00

Author:
comphermc
Posts: 5338


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