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| *I will be making a seperate thread to put my reviews in and I will only have this one for level review requests.* Hello my name is theonlybub. I will be taking level review requests from anyone that wants one, but I do have 3 conditions. 1: The level must not be H4H 2: I will not review bomb levels 3: The level must have at least 2 stars. Post your level like this: level name by username Here is the format for how I will be doing level reviews. Pros: I will list good things about the level. Cons: I will list bad things about the level. Category: The type of level. Time: The time to complete the level. Difficulty: Easy, Easy-Medium, Medium, Medium-Hard, Hard, Hard-Expert, Expert. Gameplay: Score out of 10. Graphics: Score out of 10 Sound: Score out of 10. Originality: Score out of 10. Final: Score out of 10 (I will add up all scores and come to a final score.) Levels to review The H4H Cleaners by doggy2 Grow-Garden by KillerTerek Neon Sound by FightinRedPanda1 Klonoa: Vision 5-2 by Trevor_Fox Klonoa: Vision 5-2 part 2: Boss Joker by Trevor_Fox wild west sheriffs by freddykrugerfred The Descent 2 by javi_haguse Many Worlds In One <<>> Part 1 by Inthenow543 The "hover"board concept survival challenge by swweet Cloudland by AgentBanana All Dressed Up by iGotFancyPants Rise of the Iron Sack by CartoonPiranha SIREN: The Lost World [Episode 3- Holes] by Exalted_Yawn Axel F - Beverly Hills Cop Theme Music by steve_big_guns & comishguy67 Ghost of Sparta-The depths of Hades by Kn0cked-0ut A City in the Future [3D] by XVoodeedooX The Great Forest 2 by A_SmartPerson B2B3 Terrible Times 2 by robotiod Sack, The legendary - Level 1 of 13 by Luos_Desruc Jurassic Park by DRLONG Planet X by ladylyn Sack, The legendary - Level 2 of 13 by Luos_Desruc Into the Sewer by swweet Warhammer 40k guardsman: pt1 Landing at Voltran by michaelhoar Warhammer 40k guardsman: pt2 Tortured Depths by michaelhoar Warhammer 40k guardsman: pt3 Ethreal Breachpoint by michaelhoar A Land Of Apparent Virtue by bonner123 Sack the Legendary - Level 3 of 13 by Luos_Desruc The Cave Ruins 2 by galacemiguel LittleBigRace 5 by fronk_the_tank LASER Platfomer by Zhion5991 The Legend of Zelda PS3 by Snakeowns Sack the Legendary - Level 4 of 13 by Luos_Desruc HMS Doubtless part 1 by michaelhoar Just hatched! by Syroc SlamBall by Syroc | 2009-08-30 21:15:00 Author: theonlybub  Posts: 690 |
| Hmm...well I never really got a proper review for this, so... Escape from the Underground Temple of Destiny by ARD94 I'd like your opinion, if you please. | 2009-08-30 21:23:00 Author: ARD  Posts: 4291 |
| A Journey by Syroc If you don't mind.  | 2009-08-30 21:50:00 Author: Syroc Posts: 3193 |
How many times will you restart  My worst level, I need a good laugh | 2009-08-30 22:44:00 Author: bonner123  Posts: 1487 |
| What is your level name? I will be doing these levels in a few minutes. I need the level to be posted on this thread. | 2009-08-31 00:30:00 Author: theonlybub Posts: 690 |
| Ok, why not... The Bearer - Part IV : The Depths by Takelow It is the last released of a series of levels about The Lord of the Rings. They all have been rated 4 stars for now. You can review this one alone....or the whole series, as you wishe  Thank you | 2009-08-31 09:43:00 Author: Takelow  Posts: 1355 |
| Its name is How many times will you restart either that or City in The Sky | 2009-08-31 20:05:00 Author: bonner123 Posts: 1487 |
| Subterranean Setbacks by rtm223, it's pretty hard and pretty long, but would be interesting to get a review on it. Thanks. | 2009-09-01 10:04:00 Author: rtm223  Posts: 6497 |
 It's worth a try! SIREN: [The Lost World] (Episode 2-Otherside) I'd like that level review please! More information is in my signature below! thanks! | 2009-09-01 12:58:00 Author: Noroibito  Posts: 211 |
| Escape from the Underground Temple of Destiny! by ARD94 Pros- -good unexpected story -original contraptions -description and level name fit the level -non repetitive obstacles -funny ending Cons- -the alligators were a bit daft and came out of holes (alligators don't pop out of holes in the ground or walls. -the obstacles were daft -i was able to use the jet pack throughout almost the entire level -the level had little color in the Temple of Destiny -there are parts of the level which have too many score bubles in one area Category: Adventure Time: 2-3 minutes Difficulty: easy Gameplay: 8/10 The level name is long and captures the player's attention and the level has flows well. Graphics: 7.5/10 A somewhat detailed level with many obstacles, but the level lacked decoration and color. Sound: 7/10 Great sound, but there could be more in the teimple. I only heard a few. Good, but not good enough. Originality: 7.5/10 Great contraptions, but some I have seen in other levels. The level idea itself was original though. Final: 7.5/10 Level doesn't have enough sound and decoration, but the idea was good and the gameplay was really great. | 2009-09-01 18:37:00 Author: theonlybub Posts: 690 |
| Thanks! ...yeah...I've been meaning to fix that whole jetpack problem. If I ever get round to making another level, I'll make sure I come to you!  | 2009-09-01 18:42:00 Author: ARD Posts: 4291 |
| A Journey by Syroc Pros- -a lot of backtracking -many different contraptions -detailed cave appearance -many different sounds -would not be difficult for new players -you can't die when you hit the water (except for that one small waterfall after the cave) -swiching between layers Cons- -not much deccoration (Example of what could be in the level: plant decoration.) -green platforms were daft and i had no clue what pupose they had in this level -takes pictures at the most daft parts of the level Category: Adventure Time: 8-10 min. Difficulty: easy-medium Gameplay: 8.5/10 Switching betwee layers and backtracking is good in a level like this. Graphics: 8/10 Good job with the earthquake and other things, but it could have been a bit better with that green platform part. Sound: 9/10 Outstanding sound throughout the entire level. Each part at least had 3-4 sounds. Great job! Originality: 8/10 The level itself was original, but not a lot in the level. Final: 8.5/10 Amazing level with good creativity and contraptions. (Hearted the level.) | 2009-09-01 22:05:00 Author: theonlybub Posts: 690 |
| Thanks for the down to earth review. The green platforms to indeed have no purpose, except to have some moving things there. | 2009-09-01 22:44:00 Author: Syroc Posts: 3193 |
| Can You please review all my levels ? You Don't have to do them in one go if you dont want to Here they are: Assault Course(cant edit, data got corrupted,deleted everything) Elvis and ghost costume tutorial(cant edit, data got corrupted,deleted everything) Haunted House art 1 The Outer DefencesBlock Race 1 Block Race 2(single player Version) Block Race 2(Cooperative Version) By RedDevil982 | 2009-09-01 22:54:00 Author: RedDevil982 Posts: 52 |
| Ohh. City in the Sky by bonner123 How many times will you Restart by bonner123 | 2009-09-01 22:58:00 Author: bonner123 Posts: 1487 |
| The Bearer-Part IV: The Depths by Taklow Pros- -uses back tracking -helpful hints -reminders -detailed -lets you know in advance that you need to keep the ring with you -keep t the story Cons- -not original -you have to keep the ring with you the whole time -you don't have to fight the creature at the end of the level (I really was hoping I would have to fight it.) Category: Adventure Time: 4-5 Difficulty: easy-medium Gameplay: 9/10 Uses the ring throughout the level, many different obstacles, and a lot of back tracking. Graphics: 8.5/10 It has a lot of detail and sticks to the theme and the story of the actual movie. Sound: 8.5/10 Great sound, but it could use a bit more inside of the mountain/cave. Originality: 9/10 It is not original with the whole drag an object every where consept, but it does have some original contraptions and nobody else has made a better Lord of the Rings level. Final: 9/10 Great level with lots of detail. It uses the ring well and it has many different obstacles. Good job! (Hearted the level.) | 2009-09-02 04:23:00 Author: theonlybub Posts: 690 |
| Thank you very much for your reviews and your kind words | 2009-09-02 07:46:00 Author: Takelow Posts: 1355 |
| It seems you've been having a little trouble over on GameFAQS bub, you'll find the community a lot better over here. Mars Attacks I and II by GruntosUK | 2009-09-02 09:14:00 Author: GruntosUK  Posts: 1754 |
| I would love it if you could review "The Mysterious Forest" by AgentBanana (me). It would be much appreciated | 2009-09-02 10:31:00 Author: AgentBanana  Posts: 511 |
| Hi and welcome. I'd be much obliged if you would review one or two of mine at some point. Either one under my sig would be good. I also have an old level I never had much feedback on called 'Little Vista Raceway' which was a joint create by myself and littlemanu. It took lots of work not just because of all the stuff in it but also because we had to do a section each and then publish it copyable for the other one to copy and do their section before they did the same and so on and so on. It would have been much easier if the promised 'online create' had been available but we got there in the end and filled the thermo to the max but unfortunately had very few plays since. Thanks. | 2009-09-02 11:00:00 Author: mistervista  Posts: 2210 |
| wow I just checked the thread, and I am booked LOL! I will start reviewing levels later on today. I may get 4-6 reviews done. It depends on how long it takes for each level. I don't like school. | 2009-09-02 22:47:00 Author: theonlybub Posts: 690 |
| Subterranean Setbacks [1P/Hard] by rtm223 Pros- -amazing detail -backtracking -many decorations and color -many different obstacles -different areas to explore -funny text -very original -hidden areas (this list could go on forever):star: Cons- -Only one con! Not enough sound. There could have been much, much more in it. Category: Adventure/Platformer Time: (OMG!) 15-20 min. (If you wish to explore and find all the hidden areas.) 10-15 min. (If you just want to zoom through it.) Difficulty: medium-hard Gameplay: 9.5/10 Great flow and a lot of backtracking, but it did get confusing in some areas, but all in all, great gameplay value. Graphics: 10/10 Amazing detail! Decorations and stickers not misplaced! I am truly inspired! Sound: 8.5/10 There was not enough sound, but each sound was where it should be and none were out of the ordinary. Originality: 9.5/10 This level had so many contraptions that I had never seen before. Especially when you have to "sneak" passed the sleeping rats. That was the best part. I do not know how you did it! Final: 9.5/10 One of the best levels I have ever played. Amazing! Thank you for letting me review it! (Hearted both level and author.) | 2009-09-03 05:25:00 Author: theonlybub Posts: 690 |
| Thank you very much bub. With regards to the sound, the caves are pretty sparse in that respect. I wasn't really thinking about sounds in there TBH. The sneak sensor is actually a giveaway prize in one of the secrets... It's just a slow-moving sackboy tracker with some extra logic attached. Thank you for the review and the kind words, tell your friends too | 2009-09-03 10:23:00 Author: rtm223 Posts: 6497 |
| Monster's Lair by verymalty please! | 2009-09-03 12:44:00 Author: littlebot  Posts: 60 |
| Hi =] I would appreciate it if you would take the time to review two of my levels [ANIME MUSIC] Bleach - Will of the Heart by AzureSkyZ Disgaea Costume Tutorial and Gallery by AzureSkyZ Thanks! | 2009-09-04 02:34:00 Author: Unknown User  |
| SIREN: The Lost World [Episode 2- Otherside] by Exalted_Yawn Pros- -highly detailed -many different puzzles -doesn't make you feel like your in a kid game -many different paths -you need to switch between layers many times -choose your own difficulty -there is a provided website for a walkthrough Cons- -needs more sound to it, like if you unclog the toilet there could be a farting noise or whatever (more like that) That is the only con Category: Escape/Puzzler Time: 15-20 minutes Difficulty: hard (hard, as in hard to find stuff) Gameplay: 10/10 Awesome escape level! I was so thrilled to have reviewed it. The level has so much to accomplish and so much to discover. Graphics: 8/10 The level could have been better, such as cracks and holes in a lot of the background areas. Or things breaking. But really good. Sound: 9/10 There was some great sound, but I feel as if it still needs more. The sounds gave it a really scary feeling to it. Originality: 10/10 I have never seen something like this before on LBP. Really great level! Final: 9/10 It is up there with the top levels. Keep up the good work! (Hearted both level and author.) | 2009-09-04 03:40:00 Author: theonlybub Posts: 690 |
| Assault Course by RedDevil982 Pros- -not hard (n00bs won't rate it low) Cons- -you can see the floor of the level -blank at parts -uses story mode items and creatures -score bubbles not spread out and are sloppily put down -uses no decoration or stickers -daft Category: obstacle course Time: 2 minutes Difficulty: easy Gameplay: 3/10 Has obstacles, but uses items from story mode. The level doesn't really train you. Graphics: 2/10 Nothing special about it. Sound: 2.5/10 Music fits the level but it has no sound in it. Originality: 2/10 Nothing original about it. Final: 2.5/10 Very daft level, but I do understand that you can't fix it. | 2009-09-04 04:22:00 Author: theonlybub Posts: 690 |
| elvis and ghost costume turtorial by RedDevil982 Pros- (NONE [sorry]) Cons- -blank level floor (I don't care if you can see the floor in costume levels, but it shouldn't be blank -uses items from story mode -no decoration and no color -points are sloppily placed -very very short -daft Category: costume level time: 30 seconds (if not making the costumes) about 2-3 minutes (if making the costumes) (This is an estimate.) Difficulty: none Gameplay: 1/10 Nothing to do except make 2 very easy costumes. Graphics: .5/10 There were no graphics but there were items. Sound: 1/10 There was music, but in my opinion it did not fit the level. Originality: 3/10 The costumes were original, but not unique. The costumes did not stand out. (If you would like to see costumes that stand out check out my costume level.) Final: 2/10 It was just a very very short level. (What I don't understand is, why does your costume level have 4 stars and mine [which I spent 3 weeks on] only have 3.) 8^( | 2009-09-04 04:41:00 Author: theonlybub Posts: 690 |
| Haunted House Part 1: The outes Defences by Red Devil982 Pros- -music if fit for the level's name Cons- -uses items from story mode throughout the entire level -you can see the bottom of the level -spikes are not glued to the floor -sloppy stairs -score bubbles where you cannot get to them and bubbles placed sloppily -no decorations or stickers -dark matter everywhere -score bubbles inside of walls -there was not a haunted house anywhere -there is not a second one like it says Category: abstract Time: 3 minutes Difficulty: easy Gameplay: 2.5/10 The level was very daft and had many things that were not glued to the floor. Graphics: 1/10 Nothing special. It had a lot of dark matter and it used story mode items. Sound: 2/10 The level's music stays with the name of the level, but no sound was used. Originality: 1/10 I have seen this sloppy level look a lot and there was nothing original in the level. Final: 1.5/10 The level is highly avoidable, but n00bs will enjoy it. | 2009-09-04 06:15:00 Author: theonlybub Posts: 690 |
| Block Race by RedDevil982 Pros- -good replay value -n00bs will love it as I have seen already (the level has 5 stars) Cons- -music doesn't fit the level -blocks are bland and don't have any appeal -you can see the bottom of the level -no decoration and little stickers were used -level was very abstrac at the end -sloppy stairs Category: race/abstract Time: 3 minutes Difficulty: easy Gameplay: 3/10 The level was a bit abstract, but it did have a nice touch to it with the blocks and such. Graphics: 2/10 The level was good, but it had sloppy stairs and no detail. Sound: 2/10 There was no sound and the music did not fit the level. Originality: 4/10 Good level, but i have seen much better versions of this. Final: 3/10 Good level but I have seen better block races. | 2009-09-04 06:49:00 Author: theonlybub Posts: 690 |
| Treasure by Vinceluk, if you can ^^ | 2009-09-04 16:52:00 Author: Vinceluk  Posts: 12 |
| I shall do more reviews later today. I have to clean the house, so it may be a while. Sorry. | 2009-09-04 17:46:00 Author: theonlybub Posts: 690 |
| Mate, have you looked through the other review threads on this site? It's generally accepted that reviewers will get to you when they get to you. You shouldn't feel under pressure to get through everyone straight away - you're doing us a favour remember. Keep a waiting list on the OP, so you've got easy reference and feel free to take your time - you're doing a great job so far (obviously I'm biassed but still...) so don't feel obliged to get through everyone as quick as possible | 2009-09-04 17:55:00 Author: rtm223 Posts: 6497 |
| No need to apologise, in your own time, we won't jump on your back like other forums Do like rtm says and edit a list into your first post, so people know where they are in the queue, and then maybe send a PM or leave a visitor message to tell them there review is done. Adding a link into your sig might attract more people to | 2009-09-04 18:02:00 Author: GruntosUK Posts: 1754 |
| Yeah, I am just so used to the Gamfaqs/Gamespot board. If I do reviews there, they will keep bugging me about it everytime I don't post a review every 5 hours. LOL! | 2009-09-04 18:03:00 Author: theonlybub Posts: 690 |
| I know, I still read the forums but don't post there much anymore. Its not what it was over there. | 2009-09-04 18:05:00 Author: GruntosUK Posts: 1754 |
| I used to PM people when their review is done. Maybe I should start that again. | 2009-09-04 18:07:00 Author: theonlybub Posts: 690 |
| Maybe you should start the house work! | 2009-09-04 18:08:00 Author: GruntosUK Posts: 1754 |
| Ummm... can you do a review of Splat Invaders Saga by CuzFeeshe? and I would appreciate it if you could disregard all the other reviews and do it first, because I want the review done NOW! And I'll keep buggin you and buggin you until I see it - and if it's not a good review I'll keep bugging you anyway, so please like the game. | 2009-09-04 18:30:00 Author: CCubbage  Posts: 4430 |
| *clicks on the neg rep button* - bad cuzFace | 2009-09-04 18:31:00 Author: rtm223 Posts: 6497 |
| Sorry, but I only do my reviews in order. That would be unfair to others. It won't take long to get to your level though. "Don't worry. Be happy. Be happy now." | 2009-09-04 19:39:00 Author: theonlybub Posts: 690 |
| Check out my Obstacle Courses and my level City in the Sky. I would love your feedback on them. If you want to review a piece of poo however, check out my level How Many times Will you Restart. | 2009-09-04 20:04:00 Author: bonner123 Posts: 1487 |
| Breaking An Entry by XVoodeedooX or if you want a quickie level, overheated with detail and artsy stuff: Twisted Temptations Costume Collection by XVoodeedoox please let me know if you can i'd live to get a review from my attempts at that sort of thing | 2009-09-05 06:59:00 Author: Voodeedoo  Posts: 724 |
| Block Race 2 (Single Player Version) by RedDevil982 Pros- -Even stairs -better than the first one Cons- -the blocks were repetitive -you can jump over the start line -uses some story mode items -you can see the level's floor -spikes were not glued to the ground and were sloppily put in the level. -no point bubbles -some parts were daft and had no color -the sponge that is supposed to take you up is hard for n00bs to get on top of Category: race Time: 2 minutes Difficulty: easy Gameplay: 4/10 My brothers had fun so I gave it 4 instead of 3, but I can still see the level floor and the fire with invisable platform was unnecessary. Graphics: 3/10 The graphics were a little better, but (sorry for repeating myself) the floor could be seen and there was not any decoration Sound: 2.5/10 The music fit the level, but there were no sound effects or anything. Originality: 2.5/10 Not original at all. Final: 3/10 A fun level but needs some drastic changes to it. | 2009-09-05 17:42:00 Author: theonlybub Posts: 690 |
| Block Race 2 (cooperative version) by RedDevil982 Pros- -Even stairs -better than the first one Cons- -the blocks were repetitive -you can jump over the start line -uses some story mode items -you can see the level's floor -spikes were not glued to the ground and were sloppily put in the level. -some parts were daft and had no color -the sponge that is supposed to take you up is hard for n00bs to get on top of -I was able to finish it by myself with no help from other people Category: race Time: 2 minutes Difficulty: easy Gameplay: 4.5/10 There was more to accomplish in this one and it was longer, so I gave it .5 more. Graphics: 3/10 The graphics were a little better, but (sorry for repeating myself) the floor could be seen and there was not any decoration Sound: 2.5/10 The music fit the level, but there were no sound effects or anything. Originality: 2.5/10 Not original at all. Final: 3/10 A fun level but needs some drastic changes to it. | 2009-09-05 17:50:00 Author: theonlybub Posts: 690 |
| The City in the Sky by bonner123 Pros- -many different things to explore -detailed -long -many different kinds of machinery -some backtracking -hints -a lot of color Cons- -not a lot of decoration -the level was a little bland -creature was lazily made (As if you didn't care what it looked like.) -the background is lazy, meaning put in some birds or clouds to make it look nice Category: Adventure/Platformer Time: 10 minutes Difficulty: easy-medium Gameplay: 7.5/10 Great level with a lot of color and spunk, but it didn't flow like I thought it was going to. Some of the platforming you had to stay in one place and jump to get to the next platform. Graphics: 8.5/10 The level was detailed enough to get this score. It has many different kinds of machinery and it was fun. Sound: 8/10 There was a little sound and the music fit the level, but I thought it could use more, like if a light comes on on the boss, it should make a noise to let you know it has been activated. Originality: 8.5/10 I have seen some other levels that take place in a city in the sky and those are a little better, but it is a good idea though. Final: 8/10 A good level, but add some decoration and background stuff. | 2009-09-05 21:44:00 Author: theonlybub Posts: 690 |
| Hi, Would you kindly be able to review my new level its: Mining Mayhem by DarkHawken | 2009-09-05 21:59:00 Author: Dhawken Posts: 96 |
| How Many times Will you Restart? by bonner123 Pros- -funny level -good detail -good repaly value Cons- -way too short Category: Puzzler Time: 25 seconds Difficulty: none (This is a guessing game.) Gameplay: 8/10 Really good replay value and the level flows really well. Graphics: 8/10 Great detail throughout the entire level, and the sticker that ativates the.......I will not say, but it is funny. Sound: 5/10 The only sounds were the sounds when you die and the sounds when you get it right. Nothing special. The music fit the level. Originality: 10/10 I have never seen anything like this before. Good Job! Final: 7/10 A good original level, but it is way too short and lacks sound effects. | 2009-09-05 22:07:00 Author: theonlybub Posts: 690 |
| Thanks for the reviews! I agree with you. It originally used the 3D glitch and there were floating islands in the backround. I would have had clouds but I would prefer a realistic cloud to on made of wood. I actually didn't put time into the creatures . I?ll add some more sound if I can. Thanks! | 2009-09-05 22:54:00 Author: bonner123 Posts: 1487 |
| Hello! I would like you to review a level of mine! PSN: doggy2 level: The H4H cleaners (This is not a H4H level, it is an anti H4H level, wih a twist:kz Have fun! | 2009-09-06 14:56:00 Author: Unknown User |
| Mars Attacks 1: Introductions by GruntosUK Pros- -good first impression -good story -great atmospheric detail -many different mechanisms -impressive enemy after landing -uses multiple checkpoints Cons- -annoying trumpet in speech -most buring objects look as though there was little effort put into the looks of them Category: Adventue Time: 9-10 minutes Difficulty: easy-medium Gameplay: 8.5/10 Level has a good flow and the creatures have had much thought put into their creation. Graphics: 8.5/10 The level had a lot of different mechanisms, but the fire was too smooth to look like it was part of the spaceship. Sound: 9.5/10 Great sound effects thoughout the entire level, and the muisic fit the level. The only problem, fix that annoying trumpet voice. Originality: 10/10 Great level with many things i have never seen before. The level concept is original too Final: 9/10 Really captures the player's attention and drags them into the story behind the story. Great level. (Hearted level) | 2009-09-07 05:48:00 Author: theonlybub Posts: 690 |
| Mars Attacks II: Dropship Down by GruntosUK Pros- -amazing atmoshperic detail -amazing detail on creatures -different backtracking methods -many mechanisms to get through the level -funny ending -captures player's attention -great intro -many different types of decoration Cons- -annoying trumpet voice -monster is a bit difficult to destroy if you are a n00b (I was playing with one.) Category: adventure Time: 10-15 minutes Difficulty: easy-medium Gameplay: 9/10 The level had good flow and the dog tags was a good idea, but the trumpet voice is a pain in the butt. Graphics: 10/10 The level's graphics were a bit similar to the ones in the intro, but there was more of it and I enjoyed playing. Sound: 9/10 The level had amazing sound effects, except some of the music selection in the level did not fit. (Example: the music in the intro. P.S. I usually don't care for the music, I turn it off when playing levels I need to review.) Originality: 10/10 The level is way different than anything I have seen before. Final: 9.5/10 Great alien attack, amazing detail, great sound effects! I love the level! (Hearted the level.) | 2009-09-07 06:27:00 Author: theonlybub Posts: 690 |
| Thanks for the reviews, I appreciate it. I agree with the trumpet voice actually, I'm on with part 3, and when I'm testing it, its driving me up the wall. I'll change it to something else. As for the fire in the ship in Part 1, it was added nearly towards the end of the level, at first it was just a basic run-through of the ship, but it was boring and thats all I could do with the thermo that was left. Thanks again for the reviews, I'm pleased you enjoyed them, gave me a good rating, and hearted them Part 3 should'nt be long now, maybe a couple of weeks. | 2009-09-07 16:07:00 Author: GruntosUK Posts: 1754 |
| Awesome! I can't wait. | 2009-09-07 16:14:00 Author: theonlybub Posts: 690 |
| Just a Day at Sackboy Beach by Spider-Jew | 2009-09-07 22:47:00 Author: Spider-Jew  Posts: 1090 |
| The Mysterious Forest by AgentBanana Pros- -detailed objects and platforms -many different mechanisms -many different materials -uses string as the form of rope -musical puzzle -amazing lighting effects Cons- -lacks decorations -fire obsatcles look like they were made lazily -was not able to finish (Got to the part with the mine giant mine cart.....the wheels were unglued.) Category: Adventure Time: (UNKNOWN) Difficulty: easy Gameplay: 9/10 Great flow, but the mine cart definatly needs to be fixed. Graphics: 8.5/10 The level was great, but the fire could be better and add more decorations. Sound: 9.5/10 Great level, but the music selection was a little weird for the level. Originality: 10/10 The level is so original, I am still admiring its complete awesomness. Final: 9/10 Amazing level...just fix that mine cart thing. I was really angry when that happened because I couldn't finish the level. (Hearted level.) | 2009-09-08 06:32:00 Author: theonlybub Posts: 690 |
| Thanks for the review! I don't know what couldve happened to the wheels but Im really sorry bout it. They weren't supposed to come off untill the end, lol! And I agree with the decoration and fire obstacles. I'll try patch it up if the therometer will let me. Thanks once again. (: | 2009-09-08 10:15:00 Author: AgentBanana Posts: 511 |
| Care to review my new level? Level Title: "SackShine" PSN: TopBanana0769 It's my second LBP level. You gave my first level "Banana's N00b Lair" a negative review (it earned it, lol). And I spent a LOT more time making SackShine. So hopefully it's an improvement. | 2009-09-08 11:37:00 Author: TopBanana0769 Posts: 7 |
| I started school today, so I won't get to level reviewing until later. | 2009-09-08 14:58:00 Author: theonlybub Posts: 690 |
| I started school today, so I won't get to level reviewing until later. Keep it up, you're doing a great job! | 2009-09-08 17:02:00 Author: CCubbage Posts: 4430 |
| PLASMAVILLE by mistervista Pros- -detailed background -a lot of color -funny monsters -original obstacles -original way to die (plasma instead of electric or fire) -long (for an obstacle course) Cons- -not a lot of sound (don't need to fix this unless you want to) Category: Obstacle Course Time: 5 minutes Difficulty: easy-medium Gameplay: 10/10 The level had many different obstacles, all of which were not repetitive and the level had great flow. Graphics: 7/10 Great graphics with a lot of color, but there was not any decoration that I could see. Just color...which was great! Sound: 7/10 It is an obstacle course after all, so I will not give it a low score for poor sound quality. I expect a lot of sound, however, from adventure levels. Originality: 9/10 The obstacle course used a method of dying that I had not yet seen. (Plasma platforms.....How did you do it?!) Final: 8.5/10 Great obstacle course, but could have been a bit better. But, I agree it was a level that is worthy of winning that competition. (CONGRATULATIONS!!) | 2009-09-09 06:11:00 Author: theonlybub Posts: 690 |
| Sheriff Sack : Cleaning up the town of Sackwood by mistervista Pros- -detailed objects throughout the level -uses an actual face of a person -funny dialogue -amazing aesthetics -has a lot of exploring -uses decoration and stickers wisely Cons- -the horses are not touching the ground in the begining (The ones connected to the cart.) -able to see floor of level Category: Adventure Time: 8 minutes Difficulty: easy Gameplay: 8.5/10 Has really funny dialogue and a lot of exploring to get that high score. Graphics: 8.5/10 The animals, people and platforming, has a lot of great detail, but I can see the floor of the level. It makes the level look a bit sloppy. Sound: 10/10 The level has excellent sound and a lot happens near the saloon. Great job! Originality: 8.5/10 I have seen the concept of this level before, but the level had better detail and sound. Final: 8.5/10 Great level just needs a few adjustments. (Hearted level) | 2009-09-09 06:50:00 Author: theonlybub Posts: 690 |
| Can you check out two more of my levels? Pale by bonner123 (Newest) The Untold Story of the Companion Cube by bonner123 (Oldest, Uses Mm Objects, Unoriginal Concept) (P.S. Im only 14 ) | 2009-09-09 22:19:00 Author: bonner123 Posts: 1487 |
| Hey Hey! Try out my newest level, "The Colorless City" Thank you! | 2009-09-10 01:26:00 Author: Dan930930 Posts: 77 |
| Just been through this thread and thrown down some extra "thanks" on the reviews. 16 in one week is a fantastic job mate | 2009-09-10 14:59:00 Author: rtm223 Posts: 6497 |
| Thank you for saying I am doing a great job....If this were Gamefaqs/Gamespot right now, I would be getting a lot of complaints. I did like 600 reviews over there in 7 different topics. I am glad I switched. Everybody appreciates what I am doing for the LBP community and almost everybody says "Thank you." I really like it here on this forum and I am here to stay now. Thank you to all whom gave me levels to review! 8^)) | 2009-09-10 15:42:00 Author: theonlybub Posts: 690 |
| Thank you for saying I am doing a great job....If this were Gamefaqs/Gamespot right now, I would be getting a lot of complaints. I did like 600 reviews over there in 7 different topics. I am glad I switched. Everybody appreciates what I am doing for the LBP community and almost everybody says "Thank you." I really like it here on this forum and I am here to stay now. Thank you to all whom gave me levels to review! 8^)) Yeah, there is definately a different level of members here - generally humble and appreciate constructive critisism. I've tried a few others for short periods of times, but they just didn't cut it. Great job! | 2009-09-10 15:49:00 Author: CCubbage Posts: 4430 |
| I am doing school right now, so I will do more reviews during lunch time. *In case you were wondering...I am a home school student. * | 2009-09-10 16:31:00 Author: theonlybub Posts: 690 |
| Monster's Lair by verymalty Pros- -swamp monster (or whatever you want to call it) looked had good effects -made your own good looking creatures/monsters -has a x2 area -uses stickers and decorations accordingly -all monsters had good detail -uses sound in the correct areas -point bubbles were spread out (with some exceptions: cage and lever at the end) Cons- -trees are made of fire -uses the moving blocks from story mode -level name does not fit level play -background of the lair is a little cheesy/lazy (Uses only fire and a few slime splat decorations.) -boss was easy to defeat Category: Adventure Time: 5-8 minutes Difficulty: easy Gameplay: 7/10 The level had a good flow, except the boss was not able to get me when I was shooting at him. Graphics: 8/10 You used your imagination to come up with your own monster, but the trees and the background in the lair was very sloppy. Sound: 8.5/10 Great sound, but hearing the same thing over and over got a little annoying. Great music choice for the level. Originality: 7/10 The monsters were very original, but the concept of the level was not. Good job though! Final: 7.5/10 Just work out the detail and fix up the boss and I may edit this review! Keep up the good work! | 2009-09-10 20:50:00 Author: theonlybub Posts: 690 |
| The obstacle course used a method of dying that I had not yet seen. (Plasma platforms.....How did you do it?!) http://lbpcentral.com/forums/showthread.php?t=10596 And good work with these, keep it up! | 2009-09-10 21:02:00 Author: ARD Posts: 4291 |
| i would be very grateful if you would review mine. Digitized Reality: The lab by steve_big_guns | 2009-09-11 02:13:00 Author: SteveBigGuns  Posts: 423 |
| I have played this level^^^^ Amazing!! I can't wait to review it! Big thanks to everyone for letting me review their level!! 8^)) | 2009-09-11 04:18:00 Author: theonlybub Posts: 690 |
| Id really like to have two of my levels reviewed sometime if you wouldnt mind too much they are "the garden" and "toxic trouble beta" thanks in advance | 2009-09-11 04:42:00 Author: ghostrider135  Posts: 259 |
| [ANIME MUSIC] Bleach - Will of the heart -Updated 6/15/09- by AzureSkyZ Pros- -music was in sync and sounded good -you created your own logo for both your name and the level -lighting was great -uses stickers on some things in the level Cons- -you have to grab the car to go -you can see the dark matter holding up the lights -the only part that had good material detail was the intro -level has no color after the intro -I can see the bottom of the level Category: Music Time: 3 minutes 30 seconds Difficulty: easy Gameplay: 7/10 Great music level, it flows well, but the only thing you get to do in the level is grab on to a car. Graphics: 7/10 The only graphics I saw were the logos and lights. Sound: 10/10 Great music, I wish I were that good a creating music....In a LBP level that is. Originality: 7/10 The level idea itself was not original-grabbing on to a car while you listen to a song-but the music was original to LBP. Final: 8/10 It was good music, but I can see the bottom of the level and the background was lazy. (Once again I say...good music!) | 2009-09-11 05:46:00 Author: theonlybub Posts: 690 |
| Disgaea Costume Gallery and Turtorial -Updated 9/7/09- by AzureSkyZ Pros- -detailed anime characters -many costumes to make -custom stickers -a lot of decoration and stickers -you give away the anime pictures you made Cons- -uses items most people don't have -no sound *with the exception of music* Category: Costume Time: 2 minutes (Running through the whole thing) 1-2 hours (If you make all the costumes) Difficulty: (UNDETERMINED) Gameplay: 8/10 Instructions were great, but it is a costume level an it may get boring for some. Graphics: 10/10 The anime characters were not made from the PS cam and the pictures were great. Sound: 5/10 There was no sound, except for the music, which by the way, fit the level. Originality: 7/10 The costumes in the level were original, but I have seen way too many costume levels. (I do have one.) Final: 8.5/10 The level had very good graphics, and awesome costumes, but there are a lot of costume levels out there. (Not saying you did a bad job! You did a great job on this level!) | 2009-09-11 06:10:00 Author: theonlybub Posts: 690 |
| Treasure by Vinceluk Pros- -uses many different decorations -some detailed items -custom made sword can kill you Cons- -uses no stickers -able to see dissolve material -sloppy stairs -lazy background in ancient cave -areas where super jump is needed (will cause n00bs to rate low) -sloppy rock formations -items not glued (unless this is supposed to happen) -nothing to kill you once you fall in a hole -uses some story mode items Category: Adventure Time: 4 minutes Difficulty: easy Gameplay: 6/10 The level had some good elements, but the level had no flow and often had hard jumps *not hard for me*. Graphics: 6/10 It had some elements where you must solve a puzzle or there was "rocks" falling from "out of nowhere", but the detail was not good. Sound: 0/10 There was no sound, not even music. Originality: 5/10 The concept of getting treasure was original, but not the level idea of an adventure into an ancient cave. Final: 4.5/10 Fix up the sound and make the stair bits look better, that is all I ask and your score will go up 2 notches. | 2009-09-11 06:36:00 Author: theonlybub Posts: 690 |
| Yay, thanks Bub. ^^ I'll try to update my level and change those things. I really don't knew that music was turning off after first puzzle. I don't have idea how to hide dissolve, some hints? My first "big" level and 4.5 - this is ok for me. Thanks for review once more ;P | 2009-09-11 12:50:00 Author: Vinceluk Posts: 12 |
| Treasure by Vinceluk Pros- -uses many different decorations -some detailed items -custom made sword can kill you Cons- -uses no stickers -able to see dissolve material -sloppy stairs -lazy background in ancient cave -areas where super jump is needed (will cause n00bs to rate low) -sloppy rock formations -items not glued (unless this is supposed to happen) -nothing to kill you once you fall in a hole -uses some story mode items Category: Adventure Time: 4 minutes Difficulty: easy Gameplay: 6/10 The level had some good elements, but the level had no flow and often had hard jumps *not hard for me*. Graphics: 6/10 It had some elements where you must solve a puzzle or there was "rocks" falling from "out of nowhere", but the detail was not good. Sound: 0/10 There was no sound, not even music. Originality: 5/10 The concept of getting treasure was original, but not the level idea of an adventure into an ancient cave. Final: 4.5/10 Fix up the sound and make the stair bits look better, that is all I ask and your score will go up 2 notches. Hi ! Can you please review my level boogeyman and a small review of the 60% I have ready of the level 'SPACE FORTRESS' ? psn id: freddykrugerfred thanks a lot! | 2009-09-11 13:47:00 Author: nightwing Posts: 422 |
| Okay Vinceluk...here are some hints/tips on how to make dissolve material fit in with the level. -add color to the dissolve to make it fit in with its surroundings -put on decorations, maybe to make it look like a plant -put a thin layer of a material infront of it, so that nobody can see it (The main thing though that I was concerned with the level was sloppy stairs and no sound....Just fix those up and I will re-review your level. Okay?) | 2009-09-11 17:56:00 Author: theonlybub Posts: 690 |
| [ANIME MUSIC] Bleach - Will of the heart -Updated 6/15/09- by AzureSkyZ Pros- -music was in sync and sounded good -you created your own logo for both your name and the level -lighting was great -uses stickers on some things in the level Cons- -you have to grab the car to go -you can see the dark matter holding up the lights -the only part that had good material detail was the intro -level has no color after the intro -I can see the bottom of the level Category: Music Time: 3 minutes 30 seconds Difficulty: easy Gameplay: 7/10 Great music level, it flows well, but the only thing you get to do in the level is grab on to a car. Graphics: 7/10 The only graphics I saw were the logos and lights. Sound: 10/10 Great music, I wish I were that good a creating music....In a LBP level that is. Originality: 7/10 The level idea itself was not original-grabbing on to a car while you listen to a song-but the music was original to LBP. Final: 8/10 It was good music, but I can see the bottom of the level and the background was lazy. (Once again I say...good music!) Thank You for the review. I will be changing the scenery and what not. I've been meaning to do it for quite some time, but haven't really gotten around it, usually just making costumes or something, and as for the car, I'll be changing that as well, its been kind of bugging me, any suggestions for it? I'll also be changing my name with a more updated logo. I don't know if you saw it or not, but it was the icon for my costume levels. Disgaea Costume Gallery and Turtorial -Updated 9/7/09- by AzureSkyZ Pros- -detailed anime characters -many costumes to make -custom stickers -a lot of decoration and stickers -you give away the anime pictures you made Cons- -uses items most people don't have -no sound *with the exception of music* Category: Costume Time: 2 minutes (Running through the whole thing) 1-2 hours (If you make all the costumes) Difficulty: (UNDETERMINED) Gameplay: 8/10 Instructions were great, but it is a costume level an it may get boring for some. Graphics: 10/10 The anime characters were not made from the PS cam and the pictures were great. Sound: 5/10 There was no sound, except for the music, which by the way, fit the level. Originality: 7/10 The costumes in the level were original, but I have seen way too many costume levels. (I do have one.) Final: 8.5/10 The level had very good graphics, and awesome costumes, but there are a lot of costume levels out there. (Not saying you did a bad job! You did a great job on this level!) Thanks for the review. Yeah, there isn't a lot of sound, I didn't really know what to add aside from the occasional switch pushes and lever pulls, which were about the only thing that had sound aside from music. Once again, Thanks for the review, keep up the good work | 2009-09-11 19:54:00 Author: Unknown User |
| Naruto Ninja Training 1 by Kefkaas. Thinking of turning it into a series, so tell me what you think please. | 2009-09-12 15:49:00 Author: Kefkaas  Posts: 86 |
| The Lair (The Break In) By beatdough | 2009-09-13 09:15:00 Author: Unknown User |
| Splat Invaders Saga by CuzFeeshe Pros- -had a story to it -great arcade detail -epic boss -only the paintinator can destroy the barriers -gradually gets harder and harder -makes people think that it is over, when there is a whole other side to the level -aliens do not shoot in the same places and move around Cons- -confusing ending -background in shooting area is lazy -boss was way too easy to beat -aliens were a bit sloppy (I don't know if you can make this better.) -path after moving elevator was a bit confusing Category: Arcade Time: 11 minutes Difficulty: medium Gameplay: 8.5/10 Great gameplay, but is a bit confusing during the escape part of the level. Graphics: 9/10 (The level was an arcade level so I will go a bit easy on it.) For an arcade level it was really good looking and looked as if it were in an arcade. (That probably didn't make any sense.) Sound: 10/10 The sound in the level was incredible. Great job. It seems like there was sound on every bit of the level. Originality: 10/10 The begining of the level was the only thing not original, but it had movements that I had never seen before from those types of arcade games! Final: 9.5/10 The level had great originality, just fix up the confusing bits and the level will get 10/10 (hearted both level and author) | 2009-09-14 20:34:00 Author: theonlybub Posts: 690 |
| Breaking an Entry by XVoodeedooX *Error: I cannot find the level. I have played it before and now I cannot find it. There are only 7 levels that I can play of your's and none of which are this level.* | 2009-09-14 20:47:00 Author: theonlybub Posts: 690 |
| Nice review... I like seeing a good objective new viewpoint. I'm actually working on a sequel, which is why I wanted it looked at a bit. -confusing ending The entire level is supposed to actually have a bit of a "confusion" about it - sort of an artistic choice.... you don't know whats happening and it sort of "unfolds". So I don't spell it out for you. Were you confused that you left the alien ship and ended up back on earth? -background in shooting area is lazy Which shooting part? The first 3 stages, the elevator, hallway, or core? -boss was way too easy to beat Which boss? The "recycling unit" or the "core"? Ive actually had mixed messages from both spectrums of players.... some have a really hard time, and others find it too easy. -aliens were a bit sloppy (I don't know if you can make this better.) The final aliens at the end? You're probably right... not sure how to make them better. -path after moving elevator was a bit confusing True... but it's designed in a way where you can't get lost - invisible material pushes you into the proper plane as you walk. Also, did you manage to find the "Bovine Antigravity Chamber? | 2009-09-14 22:02:00 Author: CCubbage Posts: 4430 |
| Originally Posted by theonlybub -confusing ending This I will be deleting I can't remember why I put in in there. Sorry.  Originally Posted by CCubbage Which boss? The boss after the third stage. I just stood in each corner and shot at the boss. It couldn't get me in the corner. Originally Posted by CCubbage Which shooting part? What I meant to say is the pathway after the shooting areas. They are a bit daft. I don't know if you can fix these up with some color or decorations, but if you can that would be great! Originally Posted by CCubbage Also, did you manage to find the "Bovine Antigravity Chamber? Is this the part with the cows? | 2009-09-15 05:02:00 Author: theonlybub Posts: 690 |
| I see the thread is still moving along nicely I've finished Mars Attacks 3. I'd love a review | 2009-09-15 13:08:00 Author: GruntosUK Posts: 1754 |
| The boss after the third stage. I just stood in each corner and shot at the boss. It couldn't get me in the corner. I'll retest it, but this part is random. The ship is moving back and forth off-screen continually before the battle, so the position he shoots COULD possibly exclude the edges but not necessarily. It used to shoot more often but people complained it was too hard in beta. What I meant to say is the pathway after the shooting areas. They are a bit daft. I don't know if you can fix these up with some color or decorations, but if you can that would be great! Yeah, totally appreciate your point of view, but this part was on purpose. It's inspired by 2001 A Space Odyssey - it's supposed to be a white, ultra-clean environment. | 2009-09-15 13:27:00 Author: CCubbage Posts: 4430 |
| Thank you for replying....Not many people question what I say. Thank you. | 2009-09-15 16:52:00 Author: theonlybub Posts: 690 |
| Originally Posted by GrantosUK I've finished Mars Attacks 3. I'd love a review Awesome! I hope that I get to reviewing this one soon! Can't wait! | 2009-09-15 16:55:00 Author: theonlybub Posts: 690 |
| Mining Mayhem by DarkHawken Pros- -player must switch between layers to get through the level -two paths to take -detailed scenery -hidden areas -nothing was repetitive -bomb puzzle Cons- -no decorations used and there were not a lot of stickers -begining pathway was too jagged -mine did not seem like it was falling apart (maybe make a earthquake box. If you need help making it I know how.) Category: Adventure/Puzzler Time: 10 minutes Difficulty: easy-medium Gameplay: 9/10 The level had a lot of hidden areas to get secrets and the level had great flow. (This level has 3 stars and I don't know why! It is a 4 star level!) Graphics: 8/10 The level was surprisingly detailed. The most detail was the scenery and rocky areas. Sound: 5/10 Nothing special. The music fit the level and there were occasional sounds. I expected more. Originality: 8/10 Great level! Had a lot of fun things to do! I think the one thing that I had never seen before was that bomb puzzle. Great job! Final: 8/10 The level is really getting overlooked. It needs a few touch-ups here and there, but overall it was a really good level! Great job! | 2009-09-16 06:32:00 Author: theonlybub Posts: 690 |
| Wow thanks for the great review, glad you enjoyed it. I did start to add stickers but started making a new level instead, but now I will go back and improve. I'll smooth off the path and will add the earthquake box, (just a camera on a piston right?) Thanks a lot for the review, appreciate it. and btw which way did you go at the start? i mean at the start and not at the bridge? | 2009-09-16 10:04:00 Author: Dhawken Posts: 96 |
| I'll smooth off the path and will add the earthquake box, (just a camera on a piston right?) Yes that is exactly what the earthquake box is. Thank you for taking what I have said and putting it to good use. I appreciate it! | 2009-09-16 13:19:00 Author: theonlybub Posts: 690 |
| Ghost of Sparta - Chapter One by Kn0cked-0ut (name is with 2 zero's) | 2009-09-16 16:15:00 Author: Kn0cked-0ut  Posts: 562 |
| 00Sack - Revenge - Part I 00Sack - Revenge - Part II PSN: v0rtex2002 (with 3 zeros )Thanks!! | 2009-09-16 17:39:00 Author: v0rtex  Posts: 1878 |
| Cool could you review this: Over the roofs of Acre- Little Big Assassins Creed Part 2 by thi766 Thanks in advance | 2009-09-16 18:02:00 Author: thi766  Posts: 135 |
| Oh man!! I am falling really far behind! I will do 5 or 6 today just so that I can get the list a lilttle shorter. If the list ever gets to be 25 levels, then I will close this thread until i finish 20 of them. Hopefully I won't allow that to happen. I have had school work from 8:30AM to 5:30PM every day, so I am booked. Expect to see more really soon! Sorry for the delay! | 2009-09-16 19:15:00 Author: theonlybub Posts: 690 |
| The H4H Cleaners by doggy2 *Error: Your level/PSN could not be found. IDK why. I entered the level name and the only levels that came up were a h4h level and a trophy level. I entered your PSN and all that came up were locked levels.* | 2009-09-16 19:43:00 Author: theonlybub Posts: 690 |
| Oh man!! I am falling really far behind! I will do 5 or 6 today just so that I can get the list a lilttle shorter. If the list ever gets to be 25 levels, then I will close this thread until i finish 20 of them. Hopefully I won't allow that to happen. I have had school work from 8:30AM to 5:30PM every day, so I am booked. Expect to see more really soon! Sorry for the delay! Your doing a great job, don't worry about the amount of levels.. it shows how succesful you are Just take your time, but not too much eh | 2009-09-16 20:34:00 Author: Kn0cked-0ut Posts: 562 |
| Just a Day at Sackboy Beach by Spider-Jew Pros- -funny photo booth picture -funny sea monster -level has different decorations and stickers -basic level, but long -jumping fish and sharks Cons- -I should not be able to see the side of the blank level -the first girl playing volleyball does not touch the ground and does not look like she is hitting the ball -"sea gulls" look like giant m's -wave looks as if it were floating -characters do not have hair -boat moves on its own (make the oar move back and forth) -some score bubbles are inside of materials -too many score bubbles were used -all enemies are easily avoidable and basic -beach was daft and didn't have much color Category: Adventure Time: 6 minutes Difficulty: easy Gameplay: 6.5/10 The level was long and had good flow, but there were many parts of the level that were daft. The surfing part and the rowboat in particular. Graphics: 6/10 This level needs a make over on the beach, the temple, and the characters. Sound: 5/10 I like how the music changes throughout the level and how the people have different voices, but there was not any actual sound effects in the level. Please add some. Originality: 4/10 I have seen many many different pirate/temple quests, but this one is random. I have never seen so much random stuff in a level before. (You start off on the beach, you surf and hit a pirate ship, you become a pirate, you find a "lost" temple, you get treasure.) Random! Final: 5/10 The level had some nice touches to it, but it was way random and it needs drastic changes in both sound and graphics. Good job though. | 2009-09-16 20:36:00 Author: theonlybub Posts: 690 |
| Thanks for the review. Ya, I really need to update that level...It was one of the first levels I made. Might get to work on your suggestions over the weekend. | 2009-09-16 20:43:00 Author: Spider-Jew Posts: 1090 |
| Sackshine by TopBanana0769 Pros- -dark matter is used wisely -uses a lot of stickers -for being a daft level, it has an intro Cons- -little spaceship in the beginning of the level was daft (add windows and a hatch that closes when you grab the sponge -way too many jetpacks -way too many checkpoints -score bubbles were bunched together -the background throughout the level was lazy (add planets in the background) -boss was poorly made, maybe put decorations on it to make it look neater and have it shoot out objects -many jetpacks were not glued to the ground Category: Adventure Time: 3 minutes Difficulty: easy Gameplay: 5/10 It had a good story to it and there was an intro, but the level design was a bit sloppy. Graphics: 4/10 The most parts of the level with graphics was the beginning of the level and the end of the level. Sound: 5.5/10 I like how the level had music changes and it had some sound effects, but there should be much more than just 4 or 5 different ones. Some of the music did not fit the occasion as well. Originality: 6/10 The level's story was very original, but I did not see anything else that went along with the story to keep the flow going. Final: 5/10 The level had a lot of problems, but these can be fixed and with a little work this level will be 3 star worthy. | 2009-09-17 00:49:00 Author: theonlybub Posts: 690 |
| Your reviews are great : short, clear and precise..I like that! Nice job! Well if you have some time... : SuperSACK Market by dajdaj03 | 2009-09-17 01:47:00 Author: dajdaj03  Posts: 1486 |
| Could you tell me what you think of my level? Made it awhile ago, it's based on the GROW series of games, for those of you who've played those. | 2009-09-17 09:02:00 Author: Unknown User |
| Could you tell me what you think of my level? Made it awhile ago, it's based on the GROW series of games, for those of you who've played those. What is your level called? | 2009-09-17 17:17:00 Author: theonlybub Posts: 690 |
| Oh man!! I am falling really far behind! I will do 5 or 6 today just so that I can get the list a lilttle shorter. If the list ever gets to be 25 levels, then I will close this thread until i finish 20 of them. Hopefully I won't allow that to happen. I have had school work from 8:30AM to 5:30PM every day, so I am booked. Expect to see more really soon! Sorry for the delay! So sorry that I did not do as I promised. I will be going away for the weekend so I may not get many done before Friday night. When I get back I will be reviewing more than ever, so keep be patient I will get to your level eventually. | 2009-09-17 17:20:00 Author: theonlybub Posts: 690 |
| Thanks for letting us know | 2009-09-17 20:00:00 Author: Kn0cked-0ut Posts: 562 |
| Hello there, you're probably up to your eyeballs in levels at this stage but i thought id add to your list, sorry. My level is called Post-apocalyptic PSN anpostteller The feedback has been extremely posotive but id love to get the opinion of a reviewer. I posted a thread on my level if you want to check that out to see what its about. By any chance could you reply even if its just to say that you dont want to review it? Thank you | 2009-09-17 20:05:00 Author: anpostteller Posts: 16 |
| It's no problem. I have been going so slow cause I have been using my time on the PS3 for my new level. | 2009-09-17 21:04:00 Author: theonlybub Posts: 690 |
| Oh wow. I thought it was strange that you hadn't gotten to my level yet, but then I read all the other posts and saw how many other people were in line. I had no idea you were such a popular reviewer. Hopefully you get a chance to catch up. | 2009-09-17 21:44:00 Author: Kefkaas Posts: 86 |
| The H4H Cleaners by doggy2 *Error: Your level/PSN could not be found. IDK why. I entered the level name and the only levels that came up were a h4h level and a trophy level. I entered your PSN and all that came up were locked levels.* Whoops, I republished my level. Maybe that's why you couldn't find it. Put me back on cue, let everyone else go ahead of me. sorry for the inconvienence | 2009-09-17 23:07:00 Author: Unknown User |
| What is your level called? Put it in the post title, should probably have put it in the actual post . Grow-Garden is the name. | 2009-09-17 23:16:00 Author: Unknown User |
| Pale by bonner123 Pros- -many different obstacles -obstacles in the entire level was not repetitive -the level name fit the level itself -uses materials wisely -many different mechanisms -score bubbles were spread out and not bunched together -puzzles were not very original, but were fun -highly detailed objects and scenery Cons- -level was daft, but it is supposed to be that way -there was sound, but in my opinion, not enough -gets tiring listening to the same music over and over, but you can't really fix this, cause the atmosphere stays the same the whole time Category: Puzzle/Platformer Time: 8-10 minutes Difficulty: easy Gameplay: 10/10 The level had great flow and it also had many things to do so that you will never get bored. Graphics: 9/10 The level had some incredible scenery and platforming, but that was about it. Good job though. Everything was smooth and neat. Sound: 7/10 There were some sound effects, but I didn't feel as if it was enough. And the music was the same the whole time. (Don't need to fix the music problem unless you want to.) Originality: 9/10 The level itself was highly original. I have never seen a level that is so smooth and clear. Very good job. Keep it up. Final: 9/10 I really enjoyed this level. Thank you for allowing me to review it. (Hearted level) | 2009-09-18 09:16:00 Author: theonlybub Posts: 690 |
| Hey thonlybub, You doing a great job on on the thread, and its getting pretty busy I see. Congrats | 2009-09-18 11:51:00 Author: GruntosUK Posts: 1754 |
| Ok, take your time then | 2009-09-18 16:48:00 Author: thi766 Posts: 135 |
| hey bub whenever u need someone 2 play the levels while u write the review message me on psn | 2009-09-18 17:22:00 Author: Unknown User |
| Hi ! i'm still waiting for my level review of SPACE FORTRESS (60% complete but I 'd really like a review so I know what's good and what's not) and my best level BOOGEYMAN (100% complete this one) If anyone reviews them I will play all their levels and review all theirs if they want thanks in advance | 2009-09-19 18:37:00 Author: nightwing Posts: 422 |
| Thanks Again for the review! My new Obstacle Course is out now (Youre in 1st place I believe) if you would kindly review it. Thanks Again! | 2009-09-19 19:59:00 Author: bonner123 Posts: 1487 |
| Thanks Again for the review! My new Obstacle Course is out now (Youre in 1st place I believe) if you would kindly review it. Thanks Again! Yes I am in first place and yes I sure will review it. It is a great level! I just got back from camping which sucked! I will review later when I recover from the worst camping experience ever! | 2009-09-20 23:08:00 Author: theonlybub Posts: 690 |
| Hello again! I am back and I will be busier that ever before so that I can get every single one of these reviews done! I am very sorry for my delay in my progress, I was trying to get a whole bunch of my Minigame Land level done. Once again, sorry. | 2009-10-08 17:55:00 Author: theonlybub Posts: 690 |
| Can you review my level? PSN: FightinRedPanda1 Level: Neon Sound | 2009-10-08 19:12:00 Author: Mod5.0  Posts: 1576 |
| The Untold Story of the Companion Cube by bonner123 Pros- -beginning if funny -uses sound effects when you die -mossy texture on the ledges adds good effects to the level -the CC speaks (made me laugh) -you need to backtrack to get some extra points -two different endings -objectives were not repetitive Cons- -some prizes are very simple to make (Ex. a bush) -the "humpty dumpty" is very confusing (What is it for?) -the wheels that push the moving platform with the mushrooms keep moving (this takes away from the level) -grassy slope after jetpack is not glued to the ground (this makes it hard to get the CC onto the slope) -level has story mode items Category: adventure/puzzler Time: 6 minutes Difficulty: easy-medium Gameplay: 8/10 The level was fun and entertaining, but it was occasionally hard to get the CC up some of the slopes. It was also very easy to loose the CC. But, that is why you gave hints so that players will leave the CC behind. (Nobody reads those texts though.) Graphics: 7/10 Level uses too many story mode items. The look of the level was good, but there are some flaws that make the level harder than it needs to be. The car at the end was not very good looking. It should be easy to fix up though. Sound: 9/10 This level has very good sound, and the music fits the level. There is nothing wrong with it, just very basic sounds. Originality: 8.5/10 The level idea is very original and it has 2 endings, but the story mode items again brought this category down. You should make your own trees and things that talk to you. I know you are capable. Final: 7.5/10 The level has great scenery, but it lacks a background and uses story mode items. Just fix up a bit with the graphics and this will be an 8 or 8.5. | 2009-10-08 19:30:00 Author: theonlybub Posts: 690 |
| The Colorless City by Dan930930 Pros- -name fits the level (not surprising) -uses sound effects everywhere -has opening door effect -buildings have many stickers on them that make them look run down and old -obstacles are part of the city -subway lights look like the real deal -ending made sense and was clear and colorful -there were very many sticker mechanisms Cons- -layers on the first bridge are not even and it looks sloppy -railings on the first building don't make sense -cannot see some of the checkpoints -subway car doesn't fit in with the run down look of the city Category: Adventure Time: 6 minutes Difficulty: easy Gameplay: 10/10 The level was fun, very colorful and had a very happy ending. There was a very good use of the sticker switch. Graphics: 7/10 The level had some great mechanisms, but the look of the level was really a put down. There were a lot of stickers that made the buldings look run down, but the buldings were too square in my opinion. The bridges could use some work too, they were a bit too square as well. Fix this up and the rating will go up. Sound: 9/10 The level had many different sounds and even a music change. I do not think there is anything you can really add to this level to make the sound more revealing. Great job! Originality: 8/10 The level effect was original, but not the beginning of the level. (The run down town with no color.) Very good job with the effect though. (Restoring color to the city.) Final: 8/10 The level idea was very well thought out and the level was fun and had some back-tracking. There were only a few things that could make players confused, but the level played very well. | 2009-10-08 20:21:00 Author: theonlybub Posts: 690 |
| Level Names: "Klonoa: Vision 5-2" and "Klonoa: Vision 5-2 part 2: Boss Joker" by Trevor_Fox I request these two together because they go hand-in-hand with each other. The thermo ran out on the first part so I had to make a part 2 to fit the whole level in. | 2009-10-08 22:59:00 Author: Unknown User |
| please try my level: wild west sheriffs psn freddykrugerfred it's my very first basic attempt at creating a shooter level for LBP where you use the paintinator in almost every part of the level. also futures a nice bonus "sticker shooting" round thanks in advance for the review | 2009-10-12 20:11:00 Author: nightwing Posts: 422 |
| The Descent 2 by javi_haguse | 2009-10-13 14:47:00 Author: javi haguse  Posts: 744 |
| The Descent 2 by javi_haguse What, no please?  Excellent reviews, going through all these levels must be quite tedious, but you're still going, nice work! and you're coming closer and closer to my level! | 2009-10-13 17:00:00 Author: anpostteller Posts: 16 |
| Can you please review my first good level. Name: Many Worlds In One <<>> Part 1 PSN: Inthenow543 THNX! | 2009-10-14 00:20:00 Author: amuseme543  Posts: 67 |
| What, no please? He specifically said to write it that way! so get off me!! lmao | 2009-10-14 03:47:00 Author: javi haguse Posts: 744 |
| unlike everyone else i really apreciate what you are doing!...anyways can you review my hoverboard survival challenge? psn:swweet level:the "hover"board concept survival challenge p.s.a thank for you for putting this all together! | 2009-10-18 05:47:00 Author: theswweet  Posts: 2468 |
| unlike everyone else i really apreciate what you are doing! Whats that supposed to mean? I appreciate that he might review my level. | 2009-10-18 16:39:00 Author: Mod5.0 Posts: 1576 |
| Cloudland by AgentBanana please. Bring on the constructive critisim! | 2009-10-18 20:59:00 Author: AgentBanana Posts: 511 |
| All Dressed Up by iGotFancyPants Thanks | 2009-10-18 23:10:00 Author: iGotFancyPants  Posts: 1355 |
| Any chance you could review "Rise of the Iron Sack", or the easy version? My PSN is also CartoonPiranha. It would be nice to see what could be improved; my mates are all rubbish critics, hehe. | 2009-10-19 19:39:00 Author: CartoonPiranha Posts: 16 |
| looking forward to these reviews thanks for starting this up again | 2009-10-24 13:06:00 Author: lbpholic  Posts: 1304 |
| SIREN: The Lost World [Episode 3- Holes] by Exalted_Yawn More info in my signature below! Thanks in advance and hope you enjoi! | 2009-11-01 16:07:00 Author: Noroibito Posts: 211 |
| Can you review my level: Many Worlds In One <<>> Part 2 PSN: Inthenow543 | 2009-11-08 16:51:00 Author: amuseme543 Posts: 67 |
| Digitized Reality: The Lab by steve_big_guns Pros- -many different mechanisms and machines -doesn't go off the topic of the story -level flows well but is not intended for multiple players at once -the detail throughout the level is sensational -train ride will entertain players ages 0-101 (Me: LOL) -everything in this level is created by the author -level keeps entertaining and never gets boring Cons- -teleportating devices can be unforgiving with multiple players -intro seemed a bit bland (in my opinion) it needs more color in the background Category: Platformer/Puzzler/Adventure/Story (Wow! There should be a name for that...Platuzzlenturory???) Time: 10 minutes 45 seconds Difficulty: medium Gameplay: 9/10 Loved the flow of the level and the ending kept you thinking if there was going to be a sequel. Could be better if it flowed better with multiple players, but it flows great with just one. Graphics: 10/10 The level was insane with detail, and the best part was the fake score board and fake pod. I also enjoyed the blinking eyes as if it were me blinking. XD Amazing. Great job! Sound: 9/10 The sound effects were spot on, but I felt as if the level could have a bit more, (Ex. sound effects when you pull of hit switches, or sound effects when you die.) Anyways, just examples. Originality: 10/10 I have never seen anything like this before ever on LBP. I don't think anything else comes close to looking of feeling like this level. Great thinking! It seems like you put a lot of thought into it. Final: 9.5/10 Loved the level, and keep up the good work! *Hearted the level and already hearted you as an author. | 2009-11-13 21:39:00 Author: theonlybub Posts: 690 |
| The Garden by ghostrider135 Pros- -some sticker switches -bubbles are not sloppily placed in the level Cons- -story mode items were used (trees, bird on chain, clouds) -useless prize bubbles -too many prize bubbles -very few checkpoints -overuse of the flower decoration -little detail on the hills -very short level Category: Platformer Time: 2 minutes 20 seconds Difficulty: easy Gameplay: 6/10 The level has good flow and the score bubbles were placed accordingly, but something just wasn't right. I felt that the level needed to be much longer that it is. It can only last a little over a minute if you don't die and don't get all the score bubbles. Try making it a bit longer please. Graphics: 4/10 The level was okay, but I think you need to make your own clousd and trees. They are very simple to make and using story mode items is very careless and sloppy. You could also add your own flowers instead of using the decoration so much. There are way too many of the same flower. Get creative! Sound: 3/10 The only sounds that I can think of hearing were the sounds at the end of the level. Try adding some more sound into the level. Maybe some sound when you are walking an make some animals come out of trees (with sound). The music choice fit the level well though. Originality: 5/10 I am half on this one because I have seen this name on many, many levels before, and there were ones way longer and they had a story, but each one does have its own style. That is why I only am half on this one. Final: 4.5/10 There needs to be much more detail and a lot more sound. Just fix up in this category and I can promise that this score will go up. | 2009-11-14 21:07:00 Author: theonlybub Posts: 690 |
| Toxic trouble beta v1.0 by ghostrider135 Pros- -level was really easy to beat, so that will be good for new players -mechanisms didn't break Cons- -the atmosphere never changed and never was exciting or frightful -the level was very short -no decoration at all, or stickers to spice up the level -detail was not that great -shapes in the wall do not go with the level theme -there was only one toxic area in the whole level Category: Adventure Time: 1 minute 30 seconds Difficulty: easy Gameplay: 3/10 I did not get to play for a very long time in this level till I got to the end. The level was way too short. It had good flow, but it still needs to be much longer. Graphics: 5/10 What I did see in the level was fairly good, but I didnt understand why there are shapes in the walls. Please tell me why this is. Sound: 2/10 I did not hear any sounds. If I was mistaken please tell me and I will take a closer look at the level to determine if this is true. The music choice was okay, but there isn't much of a variety though. Originality: 8/10 I have never seen this concept before, but to really stand out the level needs to be longer and have more effect on the player. The atmosphere should change when you need to get out of an area quickly. (Ex. the ground shaking [earthquake box], bits of the gas bubbles coming from the ground). Final: 5/10 It was an okay level, but the level needs to be much, much longer than what it is right now. Also add more decoration and make the level more detailed. | 2009-11-14 21:43:00 Author: theonlybub Posts: 690 |
| Thanks for great review of my level. I would have liked to add more sound effects ect but I used 100% of the logic based thermo. Im still undicided about making a sequel. If not then I will enhance the original. Ive just lost the motivation to spend countless hours in the level editor when I could be playing uncharted 2, fallout 3 or modern warfare 2. Thanks again buddy . | 2009-11-15 12:53:00 Author: SteveBigGuns Posts: 423 |
| Okay, I understand. I am hooked on Modern Warfare 2 right now. I should be doing video reviews, but I have to go to a friends house to play MW2, so kind of hard to vid reviews away from my house. LOL. I hope you have fun with those games. | 2009-11-16 05:53:00 Author: theonlybub Posts: 690 |
| boogeyman by freddykrugerfred Pros- -the story fit the level's theme -level kept its atmosphere creepy and scary -sounds were on the spot and correctly placed -the detail was great at the beginning of the level, but got worse toward the end -lighting effects everywhere Cons- -point bubbles were slopilly placed and only in one area of the level -level was confusing to scale -everything seems as if it is randomly sequenced -electric fell from nowhere instead of appearing out of the ground or out of emitters -spiders did not attack -didn't understand why you had to take a car ride to a place far enough to walk to... -the hand does not get destroyed when you pop the two bubbles -at the end of the level it has in a speech bubble "heart for heart" (*has a saddened face and puts his head*) Category: Story Time: 5 minutes 30 seconds Difficulty: easy-medium Gameplay: 6/10 The level had a lot of different aspects to it. It had so many things that were made from scratch and not a lot of this stuff was easy to make. The one thing I didn't like with the gameplay though, is that the level did not flow very well. Everything was unorganized and you can skip parts of the story. Graphics: 5/10 The begining of the level was really, really good, and filled with many graphics. But as I got closer to the end of the level, I felt like you got a bit sloppy. The score bubbles were everywhere and sloppy. (This was the only time I saw score bubbles.) And also, the spiders that craw above you in one room, do not attack, but instead, just sit there. They were mocking me. XD Sound: 8/10 The sound was the best thing in this level. There was pleanty of sound to make this level feel creepy and the sound also gave atmosphere to the level. I was surprised that the graphics did not support the sound, but instead, the sound supported the graphics. Originality: 5/10 I have seen many different levels with this name and many that were similar to this. The only things that were all you, was the spiders, and the hand. Everything else was not that original. Final: 6/10 All I can say, is look at the "Cons" section and fix up thoses things. The one that will get you more points in the graphics, would be to make the spiders in the "spider room" attack the player so that it is sort of a small little boss battle. Well, just a suggestion. Overall, a fairly good level. | 2009-11-18 18:46:00 Author: theonlybub Posts: 690 |
| Thank you for the review my friend I think I get the hang of what people want this time around. I'm half way finished my next project and I'll be sure to let you review that one once it's finished. | 2009-11-18 19:41:00 Author: nightwing Posts: 422 |
| space fortress by freddykrugerfred Pros- -great use of lights -switches everywhere -easy to play Cons- -spaceship wasn't as detailed as the rest of the level -uses stickers to spell out names (It is very easy to make your own letters.) -outerspace was very bland and was not detailed at all -very easy to accidentally get out of the small elevator (happened to me) -has a "no players past this point" sign at the end of the level instead of the begining -i couldn't tell if it was a story level because all you do is end up in prison some how and then make your way to the ship's core -the level doesn't have as much detail as some of your other levels Category: platformer Time: 5 minutes 30 seconds Difficulty: easy Gameplay: 4/10 The level had no story to it. The story would have been really easy to do. The level didn't have a great flow, because it was one thing after another. First you are in a spaceship, then a person says, "Go to your jail cell." I had no idea why. Then you pull on the wall and escape. I had no idea where I was headed to escape. There needs to be a story for anyone to understand what is happening. Graphics: 4/10 I was really disappointed with this level. The one I reviewed before was much better. I expected to see better things in this one considering you are not yet done with it. The spaceship needs a make over, there needs to be much more decorations and stickers, and also, there needs to be neater platforms and mechanisms. One problem i had with a mechanism was the elevator. One slight jump and you fall out and get stuck on one of the platforms the elevator passes. Sound: 3/10 In this level, there was very little sound effects. I want to see more, nothing else to say here but, "Fix it, please. Fix it, please." Originality: 2/10 The only original thing i saw in this level was the name. everything else I have seen before. I do however like the fact that you tried to make your own space shuttle. It was a good try. If you need ideas for a space station theme, look up this author: CandyK. (Unless you want to keep your theme the same.) Final: 3.5/10 You really need to fix this level up. Please do so as soon as possible. One of the main things to fix would be the detail. In fixing the ship, you will get a point added to Originality. I do change the scores when the author of the levels tell me the changed their level up. Tell me if you fix up your level please. | 2009-11-18 23:02:00 Author: theonlybub Posts: 690 |
| wow that's harsh I do understand your comments though. Problem with my levels is that some of them have really cool scenes but I can't seem to deliver a finished product that scores high on every front (gameplay, graphics, puzzles, sounds ...) Will you be so kind to review my levels DEAD OCEAN and Flight Simulator ? I'd love to hear your opinion about my smurfs in sackworld level as well my masterpiece level which I'm building now will most certainly get 4 star ratings so I'm looking forward to letting you review that one :-) once again, thanks a lot for the review(s) ! | 2009-11-18 23:07:00 Author: nightwing Posts: 422 |
| If you have time between playing MW2 can you review my lnew level created by comishguy67 and myself. I really appreciate your last review. Axel F - Beverly Hills Cop Theme Music Psn: steve_bug_guns | 2009-11-19 18:51:00 Author: SteveBigGuns Posts: 423 |
| Naruto Ninja Training 1 by Kefkaas *Attention! I did not finish the level all the way, therefore I do should not be allowed to rate this level. If you would like me to give this level a rating based on what I saw please send me a private message.* (Where I lost all of my lives: I was walking up a hill to destroy ninjas and then got to the top of the hill. A platform came down from out of nowhere and the whole level fell apart. I had all of my lives left, but it said as I died, "You have lost all of your lives." I don't know how or why this happened. Please tell me....) | 2009-11-19 19:57:00 Author: theonlybub Posts: 690 |
| If you have time between playing MW2 can you review my lnew level created by comishguy67 and myself. I really appreciate your last review. Axel F - Beverly Hills Cop Theme Music Psn: steve_bug_guns I would be glad to review the level thanks! 8^D | 2009-11-19 19:58:00 Author: theonlybub Posts: 690 |
| The Lair (The Break In) by beatdough Pros- -many different mechanisms -different switches -level theme never changes or gets off track -has a warning that the level is hard -sound effects throughout level -music changes are made -camera angles to help the player Cons- -laggy parts in the level -some sticker do not fit the level theme (Ex. wolf sticker next to the jetpack) -harder than it seems (Will make new players rate poorly.) (I like it hard though, just saying...) -after the gas-box-jump, when going up the stairs you can skip some of them. *I suggest you put rails so that you cannot skip some of the stairs. Category: Adventure/Puzzler Time: 11 minutes 30 seconds Difficulty: Level: medium---Boss: medium-hard Gameplay: 7.5/10 Level flow was consistent and and fun. I only have one complaint though. The level was very laggy in the parts that had many mechanisms. For example: the conveyor belt. This part took me some time because of how laggy it was. This is the only complaint that I have with gameplay. Graphics: 7/10 The level had very good graphics, but I still felt as though it needed to be less complex on the conveyor belt part. The level also needs to have railings on the the stairs to have the effect of a factory. Also, if you could make the elevators like service elevators, it would also add to the effect of the level. You do not need to do these things if you do not want to though. Sound: 8/10 The level had great sound and everything is in the correct place. One thing I don't understand though, is why didn't you put sound in with the boss? Such as when the beam turns on, it doesn't make a noise. Another place to put sound would be the elevators when they are turned on, or moving. Other than that though, I really enjoyed the music changes as well. Awesome job! Originality: 6.5/10 I have seen this level theme before, but not the story. There were mechanisms in here that I have never seen before, but there were some that I have. I could tell though that you put a lot of effort into new ideas for your level and I respect that. Final: 7.5/10 I really enjoyed this level for many things: its length, the difficulty, and its detail. I cannot wait till the sequel. I hope it is much better and has different mechanisms than the first one. Keep up the good work! *Hearted the level. | 2009-11-19 22:35:00 Author: theonlybub Posts: 690 |
| Thanks for the detailed review. I'm glad to see you liked the difficulty and didn't give up. I've tried countless times to get rid of the lag in the conveyor belt area, but It just won't go away. Also, I never really cared about being able to skip steps, but adding rails would be impossible because of the thermometer. Overall though, i'm glad you enjoyed my level. | 2009-11-20 02:26:00 Author: Unknown User |
| Mars Attacks III: Unleashing The Beast Below by GruntosUK Pros- -avatars are hidden in many different places, but can be seen -puzzles are not too hard, so that the average player will be able to finish the level -"the beast" was very detailed and had a lot of color -the level's mechanics, were not repetitive -3D glitch was used (adds to the underground effect) -decorations and stickers were exactly where they needed to be -the story continues where the last level left off Cons- -the puzzles can get a bit confusing (I understand that this is supposed to be like this though.) -the multiple companion cubes can get in the way of eachother Category: Story/Puzzler Time: 16 minutes Difficulty: medium Gameplay: 8/10 Level was full of many mechanisms and puzzles. You would never get bored in this level, that is for sure. Even though it may get a bit confusing, the level stays on a steady pace, and it flows very nicely. My only complaint would be that, some of the avatars, though placed so that you can see them, I could never see kids under 10 figuring this out. They are the ones who "usually rate low as well. <<<My only complaint in this category. Graphics: 10/10 Everything in this level is so precise. I can't imagine how long it took to get everything looking the way you want it to look. There was a 3D effect in the level which did not take away from the level, it added to it. The beast was my favorite part of the level, because of the score multiplyer you can get from it. I really do not have any complaints in this section. Sound: 9/10 There was a bunch of different sounds in this level. Everywhere you go, there are sounds. I think the best example for incredible sound would have to be the intro. Very unique. There were some chains and other mechanisms that did not have sound. I was very confused about that. Is it because the thermometer maxed out and you have no way of putting more sound in there? Originality: 10/10 This level is one of a kind on LittleBigPlanet. I have never heard or seen the name: Mars Attacks before. This level series was a very good idea. Some of the mechanisms on the other hand were not one of a kind, but I will not mark you down for it. This series will always be the original no matter what other players say. Final: 9/10 The level's design was incredible and had amazing 3D effects, some of the best that I have seen. Keep up the good work, and I expect to see much, much more levels in the future. Great job! *Both level and author already hearted. | 2009-11-21 15:08:00 Author: theonlybub Posts: 690 |
| Thanks for the review bub. I'm pleased you enjoyed it, and mars 4 is published, I'd like to hear your thoughts on that if you get time. | 2009-11-21 16:11:00 Author: GruntosUK Posts: 1754 |
| Ghost of Sparta-The search for Lahkesis by Kn0cked-0ut Pros- -hidden grab emitters -multiple multiplyer runs -mechanisms that slow down other mechanisms...0.o *I'm confusing myself. -the level has both a mid boss, and a final boss -plays out like a video game story -details throughout the entire level -the level has rain effects and earthquake effects -rocks falling from the ceiling was a great effect in the final part of the level Cons- -at the beginning of the level, the spike pillar that is on a chain that you pull up, can break and the spikes are then all over, blocking the platform to get down (This will cause problems for players wanting to ace it the level.) -the last part of the level is the only part with a ton of "blood" stains -gears in the wall right next to the "cannon" do not make sense in the level -after defeating the mid-boss, the earthquake box doesn't turn off untill you leave that area Category: Adventure/Story Time: 7 minutes 45 seconds Difficulty: easy-medium Gameplay: 9/10 Even though the level flows well, and the story never veers off course, there are some parts of the level that can break and you will not get to finish the level. Another thing is that when you are defeating the boss you have to 1H KO him. If you can make it, so that you must hit him more than once, it would be much more exciting ending! Graphics: 8.5/10 Some of the things that I am about to say I know you will not be able to fix, but, it is just my opinion. I think that there should have been more "blood" stains for this type of level. I expected to see a lot more gore. (If you know what I'm saying.) Other than the lack of blood, I have to say, that the entire level was well drawn out and had multiple stages where you just have to look in awe of the creativity. One other thing that I noticed, was that the torches, were all facing the same way, and all looked the same. Sound: 10/10 The sound in this level was greater than words can say. I heard every bit of sound. Sounds for the switches, sounds for grabing, sounds for cannons.... This list can go on for ages. I heard sound everywhere. There were even music changes. (I rate high if there is pleanty of music changes.) I cannot get over how much sound was in this level. Great job! Originality: 10/10 I have never seen anything like this. Yes, there may be more griffons that other people have made, but this one is unique without a doubt. I have never seen anything like it. The name of the level really stand out as well. I really like how it does not just say "Ghost of Sparta: 1". It has a full blown name. Final: 8.5/10 All of the sound was great and I love all of the music changes. I just expected this level to be much bloodier. I really enjoyed reviewing this level and thank you so much for letting me. Great job! *Hearted level and author a while ago. | 2009-11-21 17:34:00 Author: theonlybub Posts: 690 |
| I see your list of levels is quite long so, please, don't review my level Many Worlds in One <<>> Part 2, just review the first one. Thanks | 2009-11-21 21:18:00 Author: amuseme543 Posts: 67 |
| Thanks for the awesome review bub, I'll do something with your feedback later on The second part is out now and I think you will enjoy that one even more because it has the things this part missed If you have time could you review that one too? | 2009-11-21 21:19:00 Author: Kn0cked-0ut Posts: 562 |
| Thanks for the awesome review bub, I'll do something with your feedback later on The second part is out now and I think you will enjoy that one even more because it has the things this part missed If you have time could you review that one too? I have actually played the second one and I absolutly loved it! Amazing detail. I would be happy to add this to my level review list. Thanks! | 2009-11-22 06:43:00 Author: theonlybub Posts: 690 |
| I finished a level! Here's my request: A City in the Future [3D] by XVoodeedooX im pretty sure thats what it's called... ive changed it a couple times... its a short level but i've spent quite a lot of time on it :] probably my most effort ive done yet. thanks ;D | 2009-11-23 09:40:00 Author: Voodeedoo Posts: 724 |
| 00Sack-Revenge-Part 1 by v0rtex2002 Pros- -very funny beginning (This draws the player into the level.) -some mechanics I have never seen before -there are many secrets to look for -there is an intro to the level where you would least expect one to be -puzzles are not too easy to figure out -lots of backtracking and moving objects for different purposes -bubbles are plentiful and are all over -none of the items used in this level were story mode items -level used different switches and the switches were not repetitive -there is a switch that brings back the elevator when you can't get to it Cons- -there were no hints to what you needed to do -the desert was a bit bland (can you add a few animals?) <<Just a random question. -the buildings at the beginning looked as though they have been there for a few days, maybe add some stickers that will add to the rundown feel -after the elevator, the paintinator shooting gets a bit repetitive Category: Adventure/Puzzler Time: 12 minutes Difficulty: easy-medium Gameplay: 8/10 The level had many different mechanisms that made the play very easy. This also helped the flow of the level. One thing I do not get though is, why is the jeep much, much bigger than sackboy? Other than that, the level played very well and nothing ever broke. I am really glad that elevator recall button was there, I would have been stuck forever! Graphics: 9/10 There was a lot of incredible features in here, such as the jeep and elevator. There were also (regretfully) a few features that need some touching up. One of them would be the robots that shoot plasma out at you. Another would be the part with the boxes. They should be more like crates instead of boxes, to get the factory feel of the level. Sound: 10/10 Everywhere I went in this level I heard many different sounds. There was also music changes and sound fluctuations. I really like the fact that creators go to all the trouble to put sounds in their levels. What I don't like is that, their levels get rated poorly just for the fact that they did?t like the level. You had sound in hidden areas as well. I think my favorite sound would have to be when you try to drink the water at the beginning of the level. Amazing sound! Originality: 8/10 Though there are many 00Sack levels, this one conquers all of them. This one has more sound, more detail and it is the longest one out of all that I have played. You made all of the machines yourself, so those are definitely original. Some things on the other hand were not original, like the cacti or the elevators. Final: 8.5/10 The level has a few things in it that may or may not be original, but the level itself is not so easy that it is boring. Overall, the level is very fun and has multiple hidden areas to keep you busy. I have never managed to find them all, and I doubt I have the time. Great job with the detail and the decorations. Keep up the good work! (P.S. Both my little brothers said that they enjoyed it and hope you come out with many more.) *Hearted level | 2009-11-24 20:38:00 Author: theonlybub Posts: 690 |
| 00Sack-The Revenge-Part II by v0rtex2002 Pros- -multiple pathways -many secrets to discover -platforming is fairly easy and will not get the average player frustrated -vine swings look like actual vines -sounds where you wouldn't expect to hear sounds -the story continues off of the other level -level flow is better than the previous level Cons- -overuse of the flower decoration -repetitive platforms -repetitive creatures -uses story mode people -trees are just cutouts of stickers -some score bubbles are placed sloppily Category: Story/Adventure Time: 8 minutes 30 seconds Difficulty: easy Gameplay: 10/10 The gameplay of the level was better than the other one because some of the secrets were easier to find, however I did not manage to find them all...DANG IT! The level had easier platforming and the story of the level was much better than the last. The level flowed very well because it had less obstacles. Graphics: 7/10 I really liked that this level had a forest background to fit the theme of the surrounding area. There was also a huge waterfall and a dark cave. However, I really was disappointed in some ways: 1. The trees were just cut outs of stickers. 2. The level has story mode characters in it. (Example: the workers where the forklift is.) Other than those two things, the level was alright on the graphics side. The only other complaint would be the overuse of the flower decoration. Sound: 10/10 The sound was exactly the same as the level before this one. There was sound where you didn't expect to hear sound. There were also music changes in almost every place. I think the most sound was in when I was working on the forklift. That was amazing sound effects. Keep up the good work! Originality: 8/10 Again, I have seen many, many 00sack levels, but this one is better than any of them. The only thing that I know for a fact though, is that this one has things in it that I haven't seen before. (Example: the forklift.) The forklift was my favorite thing in this level. It inspired me to make a machine of my own. Final: 8/10 The level wasn't as good as your previous level, but it did have more original things in it that made it stand out. I really like how the sounds are different and that there is more decorations, but try not to make the decorations repetitive. The detail was great and the level flow was better than your last level. Great job! | 2009-11-25 02:01:00 Author: theonlybub Posts: 690 |
| Thanks for the great reviews! I'm glad you enjoyed them. If you ever get the chance, you should try the original - the first installment in this series: 00Sack-Betrayed. Not asking for a review of it, as it's been published for nearly 6 months, but I still think it's my best work to date. I like these two for a lot of reasons, but Betrayed is better, IMHO. Everything just sort of came together in just the right way on that one. Just sayin' - if you and your brothers liked these... Anyway... thanks again. | 2009-11-25 04:22:00 Author: v0rtex Posts: 1878 |
| Over the roofs of Acre-Little Big Assassins Creed Part 2 (V.2) by thi776 Pros- -a loading screen -warning players to not press (O) at a cutscene -some cutouts move -you can get hurt by the thin guards -helpful hints along the way -different colors tell which people are good and which are bad -you kill more than just enemies -climbing ladder (you cannot see the steps) -signals telling when it is safe and when it is not safe -sort-of hidden flags Cons- -story mode items were used (Example: vases and eggs.) -more decorations or stickers could have been used instead of so many different materials -buildings did not look authentic (Suggestion: Add some glass in the windows and put some markings that look like the buildings have cracks in them.) -expected to see more blood Category: Story Time: 6 minutes 30 seconds Difficulty: easy-medium Gameplay: 10/10 The level had a great flow, you have to backtrack many times and the level never broke. I thought that the level would break somewhere along the line, but to my surprise it did not and I was very pleased. The grab wall was very cleaver and well hidden. and the story was very pleasing and was not boring. (Usually storys can just carry on and on, but this one had some interesting parts to it.) I really liked the flow. Graphics: 6/10 The level was okay, but I expected to see more blood considering what the level is based off of. The buildings were not authentic either. What I did like though was that you can "kill" people and there are cut scenes thoughout the entire level. It really reminds me of the game itself. I do, however, think that there needs to be much more plant life and the windows need to look as if they have glass panels on them. Sound: 6/10 The were not many sounds, but there were quite a few music changes. I rate high if there are pleanty of music changes. I suggest you add some more sounds wherever possible. When being "chased" by the guards, you could add some sound effects as if they are shooting arrows at you. (You could even have arrows falling from the sky.) Originality: 7/10 The level name and concept are not original at all. We all know that is really obvious. There are however some things in here that I have never seen before on LBP. 1. "Sneaking up on guards and killing them. 2. Lights that show which people are threats and which are not. 3. The level acts as if you are really playing the game. Final: 7.5/10 The level may need a few fix ups here and there, but overall I enjoyed playing and reviewing it. I hope to see more in the series. Keep up the good work and remember, you don't have to do what I ask of you. I am only making suggestions. Besides, I am just one opinion. | 2009-11-25 05:45:00 Author: theonlybub Posts: 690 |
| One more review and then it's my level! Do you really need people to review your level even though you know its amazing? | 2009-11-25 19:58:00 Author: iGotFancyPants Posts: 1355 |
| I don't know that, and i don't think it's as good as some people say, they're just being nice, this guy will give an honest opinion and tell me all the flaws to help towards a better sequal, but thank you for the nice comment ZOMG! lol and I doubt people are just being 'nice' when talking about your level. If you haven't seen already, about 70% of people posted your level as the top 3 in the Best Level Nominations | 2009-11-25 20:07:00 Author: iGotFancyPants Posts: 1355 |
| Post your level like this: level name by username The Great Forest 2, By, A_SmartPerson | 2009-11-28 20:01:00 Author: Unknown User |
| You were going so fast and you were so close to my level, what happened to the reviews? Here, let me do it for you: This level [place level name here - either one will do] by anposteller is so good your eyes will literally pop out of your head, your jaw will drop, and you will salivate uncontrollably. If this imagery disturbs you, please don't play his level! | 2009-12-05 13:48:00 Author: CCubbage Posts: 4430 |
| Can you review B2B3 Terrible Times 2by me robotiod Thanks | 2009-12-05 14:04:00 Author: robotiod  Posts: 2662 |
| Hello Bub, the only one!, If you have the time, would you be so kind to review my level named: "Sack, The legendary - Intro level (1 player) PSN: Luos_Desruc More information can be found here: Level Showcase: Link (https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=t=19564) Project showcase: Link (https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=t=19616) thank you in advance! cheers! Yoeri | 2009-12-08 17:30:00 Author: Luos_83  Posts: 2136 |
| I am so sorry to everyone who has been waiting. My parents banned me from LBP due to Christmas time. I have been busy cleaning house, putting up decorations, doing schoolwork, and rehearsing for a Christmas play. I promise that I will get these reviews done ASAP when I am allowed back on LBP. Thank you everyone for being so patient with me. | 2009-12-11 18:49:00 Author: theonlybub Posts: 690 |
| Hey you think you could review my most recently updated/most popular level? Here is the level: Jurassic Park by DRLONG I think you will find this level most enjoyable and I hope you will find it "epic." This level is accurately based off of the blockbuster film Jurassic Park however I added a little of my own twist to it to make it more original. If you've seen the film Jurassic Park I think you will enjoy this level much more but it still implies the same storyline. Thanks in advance and I don't mind waiting. Hope you enjoy it! | 2009-12-12 17:53:00 Author: DRLONG  Posts: 57 |
| Heya! Any chance of reviewing my newest level: Planet X Thank you! | 2009-12-13 09:44:00 Author: ladylyn1  Posts: 836 |
| Hello Bub! I know my review of "Sack the legendary" part one is still pending, But I wanted to let you know that part two of this decatrilogy if finished. I also changed the name of level 1 a little. "Sack, The legendary - Level 1 of 13" And now, "Sack, The legendary - Level 2 - 13" is available for your (re)viewing pleasure! PSN: Luos_Desruc More information can be found here: Level Showcase: Link (https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=p=351782#post351782) Project showcase: Link (https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=t=19616) I am in no hurry so take your time | 2009-12-15 17:59:00 Author: Luos_83 Posts: 2136 |
| when you get lbp back can you review my level into the sewer... by swweet i made this level with my friend g7775(its part 1 of a 3pt saga) | 2009-12-16 05:53:00 Author: theswweet Posts: 2468 |
| If you're still taking reviews, could you review my "Warhammer 40k guardsman" levels. The two published levels are in my signature. Cheers in advance!!! | 2009-12-19 16:30:00 Author: The Gentleman  Posts: 360 |
| Hey, would you mind reviewing my level -A Land Of Apparent Virtue- Instead of my obstacle course? Thanks in advance! | 2009-12-19 16:49:00 Author: bonner123 Posts: 1487 |
| hey bub, sorry to bother you again, but I just released a new level and obviosuly I want this to be reviewed as well. So if you ever find the time, could you check out: "Sack, The legendary - Level 3 of 13" ( https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=t=20502 ) PSN: Luos_Desruc | 2009-12-28 23:38:00 Author: Luos_83 Posts: 2136 |
| Wow, I'm surprised how generous you are with these things. Well, if you don't mind please review: "The Cave Ruins 2" by galacemiguel. Thanks a lot in advance! | 2009-12-29 02:23:00 Author: galacemiguel  Posts: 179 |
| LittleBigRace 5 by fronk_the_tank | 2009-12-29 04:16:00 Author: Unknown User |
| LASER Platfomer by Zhion5991 Thanks in advance! | 2009-12-30 03:40:00 Author: Zhion5991  Posts: 164 |
| Nice reviews you make pal! Level: The Legend of Zelda PS3 Creator: Snakeowns | 2010-01-30 12:28:00 Author: Snakeowns Posts: 34 |
| hey bub, sorry to bother you yet again! lol. but I just released "Sack, the legendary - Level 4 of 13" ! So if you ever find the time, could you check out: "Sack, The legendary - Level 4 of 13" ( https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=21990-Sack-The-legendary-Level-4-of-13 ) PSN: Luos_Desruc (it comes with a very nice trailer!) | 2010-02-01 00:03:00 Author: Luos_83 Posts: 2136 |
| Hello everyone! I am so glad to be back! I will now be starting reviewing yet again! I know I have a lot of work to do and I am looking forward to it for some strange reason. 0.o Anyways, I will be starting reviewing tomorrow at approximately 6:00am California time. XD I hope I didn't waste anyone's precious time. Please forgive me. EDIT: Ummm I had a change of plans....My mom's car broke down when we were shopping and I couldn't get home for quite some time....Sorry everyone! | 2010-02-12 02:19:00 Author: theonlybub Posts: 690 |
| Hello, esteemed sackboy! Would you kindly review all the levels in my signature, HMS Doubtless and my warhammer 40k guardsman series? T'would be greatly appreciated! Thank you for your time! | 2010-02-12 19:21:00 Author: The Gentleman Posts: 360 |
| Could any of you by chance start reviewing lbp psp levels? | 2010-02-13 01:42:00 Author: tominater12 Posts: 87 |
| SuperSACK Market by dajdaj03 Pros- -level has a logo -many stickers were self made and looked professionally made -item logos and names were all original and were not repetitive even though the setting of the level takes place at a grochery store -the human at the beginning was very well designed and it had a name that only a mother could love (XD LOL) -there was a variety of food items and there were also magazines and what looked like to be tags of some kind on a wall -was the right length to keep players interested and want to continue to the end -the level is a one-of-a-kind -obstacles were not repetitive -sounds were somewhat funny and were placed where necessary -there were arrows pointing the way -different materials were used as a way to add more detail without using stickers Cons- -creatures were very repetitve -bubbles were placed sloppily and were different sizes -creatures were not orignal --- Category: Abstract Time: 3 minutes 30 seconds Difficulty: easy-medium --- Gameplay: 7.5/10 The level was a bit short for me. That was the main reason, but another would be because the cretures were the same throughout the entire level. Maybe if you added different creatures it would help "UP" the level of gameplay. The thing that I thought made the level more appealing to the player was the constant of things to do. Everywhere you go you will end up seeing something to do. (point bubbles, killing enemies, jumping, grabbing....) You get the point. I may be wrong on this, but it looks as though you can add more to the level. If you were to do so, it would add some score to your gameplay. --- Graphics: 8.5/10 One of the main things that I noticed was that there were a lot of custom made stickers in this level. I didn't even notice that until I decided to see if these stickers were real or not. Were they made by you is the question? If they were made by you Great Job! If not you should mention a thanks to that person, but I am pretty sure it was you. Now, on to the visual aspect of the level. There was a lot of detail when it came to food logos and the human at the beginning and end of the level, but other than that, you used way too many MM items. Maybe try to make some of your own bottles and fruits. It will make your level seem more original. One other thing is that the creatures looked too mechanical. Maybe change them up so that they fit in with the level better. --- Sound: 8.5/10 There were a lot of sounds in the level, not too many at the beginning, but there are more and more when you get farther into the level. One of my sugestions would be to add sounds when the creatures are destroyed. That would add a little personal touch to those creatures. Just because the parts were made by MM. The best sounds in my opinion were during bottle obstacles. Those made me chuckle a bit just becuase I like that sort of humor. --- Originality: 9/10 I would have to say, other than the MM items and creatures, you did a fine job on creating all of your own things. The logos for the foods were very well designed and thought out. the obstacles I had not yet seen when I first played this level, and that was when it was first published. The only thing you could improve on is making your own creatures. That is all. --- Final: 8.5/10 The level design was really good, but as I have said before, just fix up those creatures. They are very repetitive and the parts are made by MM which makes them very unoriginal. Thanks for allowing me to review it and I hope you take my criticism to our advantage. | 2010-02-13 07:14:00 Author: theonlybub Posts: 690 |
| Could any of you by chance start reviewing lbp psp levels? I do not own a PSP. And I do not plan on buying one any time soon. Sorry. | 2010-02-13 07:15:00 Author: theonlybub Posts: 690 |
| Can I ask for two reviews? I would not mind if you delay one in favour of another. Just hatched! by Syroc SlamBall by Syroc | 2010-02-13 10:11:00 Author: Syroc Posts: 3193 |
| Thanks very much for your review on my level! Wow, I almost forgot about that, it's been such a long time... It's an interesting and honest review, and I agree with all that you said! It was my first real level, so yes there are many things that can be improved But now the level is a little old (6 months), so I don't think I will work on it again... I made a another level since this one (Little Gypsy Circus), and I'm starting a new one right now, so anyway I think practising will help improving my weak points... And thanks for you remarks on the custom stickers. Yes I made them myself...! | 2010-02-13 15:46:00 Author: dajdaj03 Posts: 1486 |
| Post-apocalyptic by anpostteller Pros- -graphics are top of the notch -3D background -decoration everywhere -logic is seen but not seen (invisible switches, bolts, ect) -level design is well thought out -level looks as though it has maxed out thermo -level looked as though it were being destroyed -switches were used knowledgeably -MM items were not used at all -some enemies fall and explode when destroyed -many emitters were used to show more graphics -mines explode when you are close enough for them to kill you -sounds were not-repetitive and were throughout the entire level -all obstacles were basic ones, but they looked way more complicated than they are Cons- -not everything looked as if it were on fire, but just a small thing (NNTF) -enemies were a bit repetitive -paintinator was used only for destroying enemies and mines --- Category: Platformer/Graphical Time: 4 minutes Difficulty: easy-medium --- Gameplay: 9/10 Even though this level is jam packed full of many different things and task, I still think that there should be some fix-ups. I am pretty sure that the thermo is really high, but if you can fix these that would be great. The creatures in the level are a little repetitive, but they look great and have amazing graphics when they are killed with the paintinator. When going through the level I noticed all the amazing graphics that were in the level like the enemies exploding and cars blowing up (exploding). I would play this level over and over. --- Graphics: 10/10 The level's graphics are just absolutely incredible! I cannot get enough of this level. If I were as talented as you, I would make more levels. Everywhere you look you see one thing after another. There is so much going on around you. When someone plays this level I bet the one thing that they will always notice about this level is the part where you are falling down in a hole. That was my favorite part. I know how you do it, but it is none of my interest to make it. All of the enemies explode on impact and the mines are just amazing. I hope that you make more levels like this one in the future.--- Sound: 10/10 There is nothing to add in this category at all. Throughout the entire level, the sounds are all over the place. You can't see them, but you sure can hear them! (obviously) Anyways, the level's sound is precise and all of the sounds happen when they are needed to. Such as the mines when they explode, or when you land on a platform from high up. It amazes me how some of you creators find the time and effort to make these wonderful levels full of sounds and exploration. The sound doesn't need to be fixed and no other noises need to be added. --- Originality: 8/10 There were a lot of mechanisms in here that are very orignial, but one thing that would bring this score down is repetitive creatures. When you have reptitive creatures in your level, it shows that you were too lazy to make ones that are a bit different from the other. I could easily do that in one of my levels, if I had any that needed creatures. XD I am trying to put that in the nicest way possible. Sorry. Anyways, All of the platforming is not your average jump, jump, jump, which I like. It is your Jump forward, backward, forward. Great platforming style and I really enjoyed all of the hard work you put into this level. One other thing that brought the score down is the type of level. I have seen quite a few of these, but this one really stands out in the crowd. *thumbs up*--- Final: 9/10 The level is brilliant and makes you want to play it over and over just to play it some more. The best part of about the level is the graphics and logic that are in the level. The level looks and feels all-around great and will be one of those levels that stand out in the crowd even though many levels get published everyday. I would recommend this level to many friends and I hearted and 5 starred the level. I hope this level continues to get plays because it really deserves it. Thank you for being so patient and waiting all that time to get this review. *Hearted the creator and the levels* | 2010-02-13 23:14:00 Author: theonlybub Posts: 690 |
| Post-apocalyptic by anpostteller Pros- -graphics are top of the notch -3D background -decoration everywhere -logic is seen but not seen (invisible switches, bolts, ect) -level design is well thought out -level looks as though it has maxed out thermo -level looked as though it were being destroyed -switches were used knowledgeably -MM items were not used at all -some enemies fall and explode when destroyed -many emitters were used to show more graphics -mines explode when you are close enough for them to kill you -sounds were not-repetitive and were throughout the entire level -all obstacles were basic ones, but they looked way more complicated than they are Cons- -not everything looked as if it were on fire, but just a small thing (NNTF) -enemies were a bit repetitive -paintinator was used only for destroying enemies and mines --- Category: Platformer/Graphical Time: 4 minutes Difficulty: easy-medium --- Gameplay: 9/10 Even though this level is jam packed full of many different things and task, I still think that there should be some fix-ups. I am pretty sure that the thermo is really high, but if you can fix these that would be great. The creatures in the level are a little repetitive, but they look great and have amazing graphics when they are killed with the paintinator. When going through the level I noticed all the amazing graphics that were in the level like the enemies exploding and cars blowing up (exploding). I would play this level over and over. What I thought I was going to see in this level though was some obstacles that I needed to shoot with the paintinator. I thought I would see some of these in this level, but I guess I was wrong. Dang it. --- Graphics: 10/10 The level's graphics are just absolutely incredible! I cannot get enough of this level. If I were as talented as you, I would make more levels. Everywhere you look you see one thing after another. There is so much going on around you. When someone plays this level I bet the one thing that they will always notice about this level is the part where you are falling down in a hole. That was my favorite part. I know how you do it, but it is none of my interest to make it. All of the enemies explode on impact and the mines are just amazing. I hope that you make more levels like this one in the future.--- Sound: 10/10 There is nothing to add in this category at all. Throughout the entire level, the sounds are all over the place. You can't see them, but you sure can hear them! (obviously) Anyways, the level's sound is precise and all of the sounds happen when they are needed to. Such as the mines when they explode, or when you land on a platform from high up. It amazes me how some of you creators find the time and effort to make these wonderful levels full of sounds and exploration. The sound doesn't need to be fixed and no other noises need to be added. --- Originality: 8/10 There were a lot of mechanisms in here that are very orignial, but one thing that would bring this score down is repetitive creatures. When you have reptitive creatures in your level, it shows that you were too lazy to make ones that are a bit different from the other. I could easily do that in one of my levels, if I had any that needed creatures. XD I am trying to put that in the nicest way possible. Sorry. Anyways, All of the platforming is not your average jump, jump, jump, which I like. It is your Jump forward, backward, forward. Great platforming style and I really enjoyed all of the hard work you put into this level. One other thing that brought the score down is the type of level. I have seen quite a few of these, but this one really stands out in the crowd. *thumbs up*--- Final: 9/10 The level is brilliant and makes you want to play it over and over just to play it some more. The best part of about the level is the graphics and logic that are in the level. The level looks and feels all-around great and will be one of those levels that stand out in the crowd even though many levels get published everyday. I would recommend this level to many friends and I hearted and 5 starred the level. I hope this level continues to get plays because it really deserves it. Thank you for being so patient and waiting all that time to get this review. *Hearted the creator and the levels* | 2010-02-13 23:21:00 Author: theonlybub Posts: 690 |
| You are very welcome for the review. I can see why you wouldn't want to make the changes. It is a lot of work. I am now watching the olympics, so I hope that I don't get too caught up in them. XD | 2010-02-14 06:35:00 Author: theonlybub Posts: 690 |
| Please review mine; The Fantasy Chronicles | 2010-02-14 10:19:00 Author: AlPhAoMeGa81 Posts: 73 |
| Please review mine; The Fantasy Chronicles First off, I don't know your PSN. You obviously skipped reading the first part of the thread which means you also don't know how many levels are on my waiting list. I have about 40 on my waiting list BTW. Please tell me your PSN and I would be happy to put the level on the list. | 2010-02-14 15:50:00 Author: theonlybub Posts: 690 |
| My PSN is ALPHA-OMEGA81. And yeah, I kinda didn't read the first part of the thread...my bad... I'll do this again; Please review The Fantasy Chronicles by ALPHA-OMEGA81 *awaits (im)patiently* | 2010-02-14 16:44:00 Author: AlPhAoMeGa81 Posts: 73 |
| I know you have a long list but I would be very thankful if you added mine to it. M306 Trash Drop by Shebhnt Thanks again for your time | 2010-02-16 00:07:00 Author: shebhnt  Posts: 414 |
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