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Dog Bone Mysterypennydog All the dog bones have been stolen! Make your way through a series of mouse tunnels to find the culprit and solve the mystery of who took the dog bones. Includes a race, a bomb launcher, and lots of cutesy looking dogs, cats, and mice. all I will do up to 10 feedback...but give me some time. I will be traveling and separated from my PS3 the beginning of this week . http://www.lbpcentral.com/forums/littlebiggallery/images/5542/medium/1_A_Photo.jpg (http://www.lbpcentral.com/forums/littlebiggallery/index.php?n=1572)

2009-08-30 00:18:00 Author: pennydog Posts: 74

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made a few edits on my own. would also like to mention this level currently is four stars, has over 700 plays, and over 70 hearts. would like some feedback on how to make it 5 stars! also, back in town now so can do feedback on your level anytime.

2009-09-03 23:41:00 Author: pennydog Posts: 74

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I'll test and give you some feedback tommorow, haven't finished my project yet but maybe you could take a look at the project im working on and tell me what you think its in the idea's/projects section

2009-09-03 23:54:00 Author: Kn0cked-0ut Posts: 562

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Double post, sorry

2009-09-04 23:28:00 Author: Kn0cked-0ut Posts: 562

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Just played the level and I enjoyed it, the dogs looked cute and the story was pretty basic but effective. Loved the boss fight with the cat at the end PROS - Good story characters - Great storyline - Great atmosphere - Boss fight CONS - Sometimes too much prizebubbles in one spot - The dog-bone sticker was used too much in the level Good job, keep it up and make more levels I gave it 5 stars and a Cute EDIT: for some reason it double posted... sorry for that people

2009-09-04 23:34:00 Author: Kn0cked-0ut Posts: 562

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Thanks! Really appreciate the feedback. Deleted a few excessive stickers and prize bubbles.

2009-09-05 15:25:00 Author: pennydog Posts: 74

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Ok, this level is cute. The story is cute, the dogs are cute ? heck, even the rats are cute in this. But that may be what?s putting people off. Some of the older players may dismiss this as a poor attempt at a first level just because it's too?.childish for them. However I played it and I really enjoyed it. It's action-packed throughout, and whether you?re helping Carl out of a maze or jumping on a rat?s back, you feel you?re doing something. The visuals aren?t amazing but they keep consistent throughout and are nice to look at. Maybe you could throw in a couple of different materials to mix it up a bit? 4 stars. F4F - Once Upon A Time (in sig) Thanks

2009-09-05 19:29:00 Author: Coxy224 Posts: 2645

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Hey this was a nice level, not too hard, not too easy. I knew that cat was trouble when i first layed eyes on it. Any advice I might have for you is almost purely cosmetic. . . so artist's prerogative if you wanna listen. There were a few spots were it looked like the terrain could have looked more purposefully created. . . and i'm just talking about taking the corner editor here and deleting the odd sharp edge or two in the grass. Also you may be aware that there are a lot of things you can choose to make invisible now, such as bolts, and sensor switches- if we can't see them, it adds an element of suprise when something happens. Nothing wrong with leaving them visible though. . . just fyi. Also the bolts in the cats tail are visible through the tree- (which is why I thought to mention). And lastly I think the boss fight could have been a little harder. . . perhaps an extra creature brain or two. . . something to swing from or bounce on. . . I dunno. It was really just a good level all around, nicely done.

2009-09-05 21:03:00 Author: squirlin Posts: 224

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made some extensive modifications. i added a lot of scenery to add more visual interest. so much so, that the thermometer is now a couple ticks away from full. btw: what happens if you keep adding beyond the point when it says "level is starting to overheat"? is there anything wrong with adding 'til it's all the way full? i also made all bolts, sensors, etc. invisible, where it made sense to. last, made the boss fight a bit harder, and quite a bit more fun i think, too. thanks everyone for the great ideas so far! i think it has really improved because of that. if anyone cares to take a second look, i'm happy to do F4F on another level of yours. thanks.

2009-09-13 02:33:00 Author: pennydog Posts: 74

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I liked this level. it kept to a very cute theme, and actually worked! if you notice, a large portion of lbp is un workable levels! jeeze. but yours was platforming gold, and i enjoyed it much. 5/5

2009-09-14 06:49:00 Author: poorjack Posts: 1806

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