Archive: 16 posts

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Twilight Eyes I don't know - but I'm ready to learn, I can't go - but I feel it's my turn. I can't see, when I look into your heart... Let me know... Tomorrow is my yesterday, And my sorrow is in the words that I say. All my strength is in my fear and not my voice... I can't let go... How do you lock an open door? Why do you listen, but not hear? I know what to say, but the words won't come... I don't feel alone when you're near. Twilight eyes, they make me feel warm Don't leave me alone in the rain. Always move forward, and never look back, I don't want to feel lonely again.

2009-08-24 23:20:00 Author: MrsSpookyBuz Posts: 1492

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MrsSB, i'm welling up (again), that's a lovely little poem.

2009-08-24 23:28:00 Author: mrsvista Posts: 755

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i dont know what ur going through but it seems like itz causing u alot of pain, but u have frendz here to shelter you from the rain. ive read ur poem many times trying to decifer the thingz that u said, so maybe somehow... someway i can dry the twilight tears that u shed. your poem really touches me but i dont know what itz about, i only know that ur hurting and i hope everything will work-out. your such a great frend and it kills me cuz u feel this way, only if there was something i can do or maybe something that i can say. i know ur heart is hurting but the reason, i know not, just remember you are not alone take comfort from all these frendz that u got. such a sad poem mrs buz. =( i made this one for u... maybe it will make u feel better???

2009-08-25 14:53:00 Author: mdaj Posts: 119

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Aww, that's so lovely, mdaj! Thank you.

2009-08-25 14:58:00 Author: MrsSpookyBuz Posts: 1492

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Thats a very nice poem Mrs SB. I used to do a lot of writing when I was younger. Mostly emotional teenage angst stuff though I found i was much better expressing myself visually.

2009-08-25 15:23:00 Author: wexfordian Posts: 1904

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I found i was much better expressing myself visually. I don't know how to reply to this, wex! I could go down the polite and kind route and say 'Aww, wassa matter, babee?!'. Or, I could go down the nosey route and ask, 'how did you express yourself visually'? Do you mean by art, or by flashing off the Ballsbridge Canal???

2009-08-25 15:42:00 Author: MrsSpookyBuz Posts: 1492

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wow, thats freaky..... Right before I read your post I just finished writing an email to a friend of mine saying I was going to a party he was having in his new house....... by the canal very near ballsbridge!!!! You may be a clairvoyant.... or you may have just hacked my hotmail account one or the other either way it is completely possible I will be flashing off the ballsbridge canal next weekend

2009-08-25 15:59:00 Author: wexfordian Posts: 1904

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It's things like this that make me wish that i could write, you got a real talent

2009-08-25 17:05:00 Author: springs86 Posts: 785

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wow, thats freaky..... Right before I read your post I just finished writing an email to a friend of mine saying I was going to a party he was having in his new house....... by the canal very near ballsbridge!!!! You may be a clairvoyant.... or you may have just hacked my hotmail account one or the other either way it is completely possible I will be flashing off the ballsbridge canal next weekend You just be careful! I'm watching your every move via WEX-TV, and you're not as young as you used to be It's things like this that make me wish that i could write, you got a real talent That's very kind of you, thank you. If I ever write a poetry book I'll give you a call about being the illustrator

2009-08-25 20:44:00 Author: MrsSpookyBuz Posts: 1492

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Whoa Mrs SB thats an amazing poem! The only poem I ever wrote was humpty dumpty ( ahh the memories! ) You should make a poetry book because that poem really moved me! It was awesome lol did you get a "A" in English?

2009-08-25 20:54:00 Author: AliBoy1 Posts: 142

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mrs buz... i keep reading ur poem over and over. i dont know what to say... itz so sad. =( i think i know what u are talking about... but i think maybe i am just thinking weird stuff. idk.... sorry... itz late over here, so u know what i am doing. =P maybe i had a little too much??? LOL!!!! but either way, i hope u are not feeling sad anymore. and i hope u no longer hav twilight eyes mrs buz. i loved ur poem!!! it doesnt rhyme too well... but the best, most heartfelt, and deepest poems do not need to rhyme. i loved it mrs buz...! i hope u are okay now.

2009-08-27 06:44:00 Author: mdaj Posts: 119

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either way it is completely possible I will be flashing off the ballsbridge canal next weekend They don't call it ballsbridge for nothing! You'd better watch for people beneath the bridge when you do it, that thing is only like 8 feet off the ground! HAHAHAHA *HIGH FIVE* Wait, what are we doing here? ...Oh yeah, beautiful heartfelt poetry! *HIGH FIVE* p.s. Thanks for sharing! Like Wex, I had my teenage days, but I called them "lyrics", that's how cool I was.

2009-08-27 11:51:00 Author: Teebonesy Posts: 1937

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Really nice poem. I love poetry! Thanks for sharing I wrote a couple poems and several stories when I was younger, but looking back on them most aren't very good

2009-09-02 09:00:00 Author: hilightnotes Posts: 1230

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Wow...that is amazing! Both yours and mdaj's! You could make moniez or something.

2009-09-03 12:33:00 Author: ARD Posts: 4291

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Wow...that is amazing! Both yours and mdaj's! You could make moniez or something. lol - I wish! And a serious warning to everyone - never EVER play Scrabble with mdaj! With the amount of letter 'z's he uses, you'll never win!

2009-09-03 12:42:00 Author: MrsSpookyBuz Posts: 1492

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lol - I wish! And a serious warning to everyone - never EVER play Scrabble with mdaj! With the amount of letter 'z's he uses, you'll never win! OMG!!!! LOL! hehehe. i juzzed realized i uze the letter Z zo much... i never notized until u pointed it out mizz zpooky buz!!!!! LOL! =P

2009-09-08 07:55:00 Author: mdaj Posts: 119

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