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Would Someone Please Review My Level

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PSN :iKeemooo
Level Name : Incased Mayhem

This is my second creation and I think it is alot better than my first, I would like to know ways in which it could be improved and part of the level that are already good

Thanks for your time iKeemooo
2009-08-21 15:17:00

Author:
iKeemooo
Posts: 12


Well I had a look, and i think the first thing you should do is play about with some other materials. You've got blue objects behind a sheet of green glass and its hard see exactly whats going on in some places.

Have a play of The Bunker's underwater section to see how Poms has a sheet of glass on the front layer, but you can still see everything behind it clearly because of the colour choices....
2009-08-21 15:57:00

Author:
julesyjules
Posts: 1156


I agree completely with julesysjules... very tough to see behind that glass. If that issue gets addressed I may be able to make it further to give more constructive feedback.2009-08-21 18:14:00

Author:
Rustbukkit
Posts: 1737


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