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The DayXTrophx
here is my new lvl The Day..
all
, something just happened and you dont know your just confused and trying to find out what happen :eek: there will be a continue for this lvl i hope you enjoy the awesome effects i put on it ooh and.. ths Is Just The Beginning....

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hope you enjoy the lvl is now out
2009-08-05 08:31:00

Author:
Joey
Posts: 758


I was expecting Zombies... Thankfully I wasn't correct. That was just awesome, I can see a real story building up, and am for once intrigued as to what happens next!

I feel as though any criticism I give has already been noted, and there's not much for me to see apart from I though that it was pretty epic.

Well done, I'm looking forward to the rest of this story
2009-08-06 01:32:00

Author:
CrumpetColey
Posts: 41


thanks.. yeah the story is kinda weird.. anyways this first part was just the beginning.. the part 2 will come out soon it will have way more things and things to fight. and the destructions will be more realistic in part 2 2009-08-06 04:14:00

Author:
Joey
Posts: 758


Hi Joey,

I played this and have to say.. I hated it.. it was the most abysmal....

Nah.. I am just kidding!! I just like to see your sackperson eyes pop out like they do!! LOL!

This was pretty darn cool. I must say you used the 3D glitch quite well in places which is commendable considering all the ones that just have extended flat dull landscape and just force the play area so far back you need binoculars even on a 46 inch tv. Having play tested it with you a few times, I was pretty confused at what was supposedly happening. With the recent additions and effects.. wow.. that was pretty darn cool and a really neat "what the heck" kind of story that I really like.

I loved the knocking down the wall challenge as well as all the earthquake and other calamity you have put in there for example in the opening bridge sequence. The cosmic bomb or whatever you call it.. wow.. that was freaky cool. I somewhat lagged the scene, but really is a cool feature to all that.

The only cons were I think you could have decorated a bit more in the foreground as well as background in a few places. For example the construction site. Maybe a trash bin or some other expected stuff around as well as some other sort of stuff on the thin layer foreground as well as possibly quite a bit more stickering here and there. (Sorry.. I've become picky lately!) ...then again with all the wacky effects you have going on.. you probably can't!

Possibly some of the dialog was a bit forced and almost interferred with the already confused feeling that you so wondefully capture. There was one in particular that was blank that didn't really seem to do a cut scene and not sure why it was there.

I loved it and look forward the next edition from your popit menu.

:star::star::star::star: and a heart. I withheld one star so maybe you wait to polish it up a bit more before publishing next time!! Job well done.. Most proud of you!
2009-08-06 15:14:00

Author:
jwwphotos
Posts: 11383


Very atmospheric epic level. Bridge looks awsome. Good use of the extra layers, I didn't even notice at first. Fun to use the crane to smash my way ahead. Not a lot of stuff to do but the design is great. Maybe the title is a bit basic. Try Thesurus.com if you need some help!

Hope you will check my level.
2009-08-06 15:23:00

Author:
Kipmonlin
Posts: 251


i try to add more things and decorate.. but lvl got full grr i hate that when lvl gets full thats why i make the story kinda like a secret. then in the second part the story will be open a bit more and thanks 2009-08-06 17:28:00

Author:
Joey
Posts: 758


Very atmospheric epic level. Bridge looks awsome. Good use of the extra layers, I didn't even notice at first. Fun to use the crane to smash my way ahead. Not a lot of stuff to do but the design is great. Maybe the title is a bit basic. Try Thesurus.com if you need some help!

Hope you will check my level.

lol yeah the name i knoow thats where i had problems.. i finish the lvl way long time but never knew what to name it .. sooo thats why the name is kinda pffssst lol maybe in second part ill change it and put it more interesting and thanks
2009-08-06 17:31:00

Author:
Joey
Posts: 758


I just got done playing through this level and I can see all the hard work. The use of pipes makes it very 3d. I like how I made my way through with the crane. Oh and the box thing that pushes you back. What is that? lol. I tried jumping back up and it kept pushing me back which was a little weird! I didn't have any problems with the level. Everything looked fantastic.

:star::star::star::star::star:, beautiful tag, & a heart
2009-08-06 22:28:00

Author:
MrTran
Posts: 216


I've played through this a few times with you already so you know what I really like about it so I'll be brief here.

+ bridge looks great
+ the 3D effect is subtle which I appreciate a lot
+ the floaty green stuff with the cars (favorite part!)
+ the construction site crane part - love that you have to work for it
+ the plane crash area looks cool - wing in the distance is subtle and well done
+ the signs above the stores look great and that you have them collapse is neat

The story is vague and still heartbreaking at times. I don't know if more specifics would help or hurt but I liked it as is. I'd want some answers in the 2nd level though

I'm going to have to agree with jwwphotos about the decorations a bit. I think what you have is an awesome base for a level that just needs a little dressing up in a few places.

Having seen a few of your levels from earlier until this most recent one I can see your learning new techniques and getting better at it every time you publish. I look forward to seeing more levels from you because I can tell you put your heart into each one. Keep up the good work - I'm loving it! 4 stars & hearted from me
2009-08-06 23:01:00

Author:
Morgana25
Posts: 5983


I just got done playing through this level and I can see all the hard work. The use of pipes makes it very 3d. I like how I made my way through with the crane. Oh and the box thing that pushes you back. What is that? lol. I tried jumping back up and it kept pushing me back which was a little weird! I didn't have any problems with the level. Everything looked fantastic.

:star::star::star::star::star:, beautiful tag, & a heart

oooh that.. is a force bomb i really love that bomb. you can get it if you go on the top of the train and thanks for playing it
2009-08-07 03:05:00

Author:
Joey
Posts: 758


I've played through this a few times with you already so you know what I really like about it so I'll be brief here.

+ bridge looks great
+ the 3D effect is subtle which I appreciate a lot
+ the floaty green stuff with the cars (favorite part!)
+ the construction site crane part - love that you have to work for it
+ the plane crash area looks cool - wing in the distance is subtle and well done
+ the signs above the stores look great and that you have them collapse is neat

The story is vague and still heartbreaking at times. I don't know if more specifics would help or hurt but I liked it as is. I'd want some answers in the 2nd level though

I'm going to have to agree with jwwphotos about the decorations a bit. I think what you have is an awesome base for a level that just needs a little dressing up in a few places.

Having seen a few of your levels from earlier until this most recent one I can see your learning new techniques and getting better at it every time you publish. I look forward to seeing more levels from you because I can tell you put your heart into each one. Keep up the good work - I'm loving it! 4 stars & hearted from me

thanks ill try to put more decorations..
2009-08-07 03:08:00

Author:
Joey
Posts: 758


Just got done playing this... very cool! This could definately end up being a great series. I love the sci-fi aspect of it.

My favorite parts were definately the floating car parts and the swinging crane.

I can definately tell how much work you put into each section, and the level has a great atmosphere. Definately I agree with the decorations and sticker thing - there are several places where, if you put in that little bit extra effort to dress it up with some stickers and decorations, it will make all the difference.

Couple places in general - some buildings could use some stickers and in the construction site there are a bunch of decorations, such as plates and other hardware, that would make it look much more authentic.

Great job - 4 stars and a heart.
2009-08-07 04:30:00

Author:
CCubbage
Posts: 4430


Just finished playing this level and I was extremely impressed with the overall presentation.

The bridge at the beginning was extremely well crafted and I loved the cars, especially the one that fell into the massive crater in the ground when I was running over it.

Really good atmosphere and the lighting was very effective. I too look forward to a sequel.

Good work Joey, you should be proud!

Icey
2009-08-07 13:52:00

Author:
IceMaiden
Posts: 1057


Great work, simple yet really effective.
4 stars and a heart.
2009-08-07 17:49:00

Author:
OmegaSlayer
Posts: 5112


I loved the design you've put into this level, the bridge being what impressed me the most. The use of the background layers was great, you've used it to add style to the level without losing it's substance. The general story was mind-boggling, in a good way. I enjoyed seeing floating cars and a bomb without a typical explosion. As has been said, if you went the extra mile by adding more detail, such as the graffiti on the background walls idea, that would be great.

Altogether, an enjoyable and baffling trip through a city where something very strange indeed has appeared to have happened. :star::star::star::star:
2009-08-08 23:47:00

Author:
persona3fan93
Posts: 155


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