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Bathroom Adventure

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Bathroom AdventureL0l_L0l-
You travel through a bathroom, avoiding various hazards such as the bathtub, and toilet. It's a fairly short level - but I spent alot of time and effort into it. Let me know what you think of it.
2009-08-01 02:10:00

Author:
L0l_L0l-
Posts: 139


:star: I like how the sponges that you swing from at the start don't all swing the same way. a nice accent.

:star: it's nice that you though to havew a 2 player section, but it didn't seem like much of a puzzle.

nice glycerin soap! well done.

:star: wow that was short. did I miss a path somewhere? What there was of it, I liked.
2009-08-01 09:08:00

Author:
swanbrown
Posts: 898


I Played through your level(:star::star::star::star::star and i like the concept of it alot. it is pretty short though id like to see this level expand into something bigger. thanks for playing and commenting my level. i fixed up some things and added 3 more bobble heads. dont give up on those last seven you were just 1 away form the upper levels.2009-08-03 11:27:00

Author:
RAWBANDRATHALL
Posts: 9


I'm playing this as I'm typing.

Pros:
+ Funny sounds throughout the whole level (which was 2 minutes)

Cons:
- In the beginning, I fell between the stone and the poison gas next to the rubber duck and landed on the bottom of the level.
- Really short level (as you mentioned).

I gave :star::star::star:

F4F: https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=t=14546
2009-08-03 22:53:00

Author:
MrTran
Posts: 216


I'm playing this as I'm typing.

Pros:
+ Funny sounds throughout the whole level (which was 2 minutes)

Cons:
- In the beginning, I fell between the stone and the poison gas next to the rubber duck and landed on the bottom of the level.
- Really short level (as you mentioned).

I gave :star::star::star:

F4F: https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=t=14546

I'll add some more poison gas to the beginning. Reason why it's so short is I had difficulty coming up with ideas after the sink. Thanks for playing ^^
2009-08-04 01:00:00

Author:
L0l_L0l-
Posts: 139


The good - comical noises, sound effects, detailed background
The bad - gameplay was not smooth (got stuck on doorknob at start, and the tippy platform thing), needed some sort of introduction, also could have used more stickers and finishing detail. MOST IMPORTANTLY - it was too short!

I gave it :star::star::star: because it could have had more potential, but nevertheless keep trying; I'm sure your next one will be better!
2009-08-04 22:30:00

Author:
pocoroo
Posts: 14


i played this lvl with some friends. not bad i like it hmm i give it arround :star::star::star::star: lvl was short but still, i like it 2009-08-05 01:34:00

Author:
Joey
Posts: 758


The good - comical noises, sound effects, detailed background
The bad - gameplay was not smooth (got stuck on doorknob at start, and the tippy platform thing), needed some sort of introduction, also could have used more stickers and finishing detail. MOST IMPORTANTLY - it was too short!

I gave it :star::star::star: because it could have had more potential, but nevertheless keep trying; I'm sure your next one will be better!


i played this lvl with some friends. not bad i like it hmm i give it arround :star::star::star::star: lvl was short but still, i like it

Thanks for the feedback, I'll check out your levels as soon as possible.
2009-08-05 01:49:00

Author:
L0l_L0l-
Posts: 139


I just finished playing your level.
I think the level was pretty good. It was very creative and fun, specially the duck with the rocket, priceless. You can really tell that you put some work into this level, as you keep the theme throughout the entire level. I did encounter the same problems as the ppl that have posted before. I died like 4 times when I was trying to jump from the knob. Also, as everyone has said (including you tags), this level is way too short. Maybe next time add some puzzles so that the players stay in your level more.

:star::star::star:1/2 & pretty

When you have a chance, please check my F4F level
2009-08-05 04:16:00

Author:
javi haguse
Posts: 744


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