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Kirby's LittleBigDreamLandninjagod123
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v88/animefanatic/APhoto_5.jpg?t=1248812650My 2nd Kirby Level. It is 100x better than my first kirby level and you can be sure that my next one will be tons better.



In this level, you traverse LittleBigDreamLand. With the help of Kirby's power, you overcome obstacles and challenges.



Please give me feedback and suggestions and tell me if any glitches occur.
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2009-07-28 21:38:00

Author:
ninjagod123
Posts: 3


I love kirby!

Ill give this a play on friday, cause i got drivers ed all this week from 8 am to 3 pm and lacrosse from 4 pm to 9 pm tomorrow and thursday.

If you got some spare time, could you give my level a play? Its called Turrotolia, i recently published it, and if you could write some words, any words on my thread for it (link for it in my sig) that'd be awesome

Until friday, consider this a free bump
2009-07-29 03:44:00

Author:
King_Tubb
Posts: 435


Ok ninjagod123, its friday and i played your level.

Pros:

-Awesome designs, i liked fire kirby, good work putting in detail
-Cool game mechanics, such as the spike attack and the fire ability effect.
-Fun, overall it was really fun to play

Cons: WARNING, DONT READ IF YOU ARE EASILY OFFENDED BECAUSE YOU PROBABLY WILL BE

-Why is kirby in the beginning made of floaty? To me that a lazy fail because you couldnt have used a better material like cardboard and stickered it pink.




-Fail slide, when you get launched from the star you slide right into a spiker guy when you land and hit the wall.

http://i661.photobucket.com/albums/uu340/King_Tubb/APhoto-2.jpg

Move that spikey guy





-Fail ice thingy that made me want to quit almost immediately. Yea this thing was garbage, it pretty difficult to get on and the stupid orange guy is just a wall that took me like 10 times to try and get by.

http://i661.photobucket.com/albums/uu340/King_Tubb/APhoto_2-3.jpg http://i661.photobucket.com/albums/uu340/King_Tubb/APhoto_1-2.jpg

My words of advice, slow down the ice platform thing and either remove that stupid orange guy or make him move more (see my picture) so that he isnt always blocking the ice, i had to jump over him when he was at his lowest point and i just barely made it.





-Fail clouds, this one looks like a W, cmon, seriously?

http://i661.photobucket.com/albums/uu340/King_Tubb/APhoto_3-3.jpg

If you need a better cloud ill make you one. It would be better to have a really good cloud used over and over again instead a bunch of darkmatter blobs




-Fail Rock Kirby, Dont use that type of metal, it looks dumb. Maybe you should have used, well i dont know, rock?!?! Duh.
-Also I can be killed by fire because there a hole in the bottom. A second fail for the same object.


http://i661.photobucket.com/albums/uu340/King_Tubb/APhoto_5-2.jpg

Use rock instead of metal.

Fix the hole in the bottom, its near the bottom left corner.

Yes your probably furious at me for this review, but all those problems I found were minor and I offered simple solutions for them. They will make your level that much more enjoyable and fun.

I rated it :star::star::star::star::star: cause im not a jerk and the level was actually fun.

Oh yea and if you could write some words on my Turrotolia thread, even if its just ranting it would be appreciated, it could use a bump. But then again a review would be super awesome.
2009-07-31 19:47:00

Author:
King_Tubb
Posts: 435


Thanks so much for the comments. I took some of your suggestions and tweaked some of the game play aspects to make it less awkward. Lawl and about rock kirby breaking by the moving wall, that was intentional. You're supposed to dodge the wall with good timing.

Anyways, thanks for playing and you suggestions and I encourage others to play this level.
2009-08-08 07:02:00

Author:
ninjagod123
Posts: 3


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