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| When The Bombs DIDN'T Fallchuck_18mp You are a visitor in the Unfallen Bombs factory. The employees are some little jokers so they put hidden bombs everywhere. A must play if you don't like Bombs survival challenges. all It is now longer and better. I'm sure you'll love it more than before. http://i570.photobucket.com/albums/ss144/chuck18mp/BOMBS01.jpg http://i570.photobucket.com/albums/ss144/chuck18mp/BOMBS02.jpg http://i570.photobucket.com/albums/ss144/chuck18mp/BOMBGirl.jpg New Video Review by obsoleteXeo: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XofH-E4z0xM | 2009-07-26 22:58:00 Author: Chump  Posts: 1712 |
| This level was awesome! Very creative! I really like the overall design of the factory and all the details that you included. You can really tell you put a lot of work into it. It was awesome how you kept the dialogue smart and funny. The creepy girl character was also very well made. With her legs crossed and the funny nose, it was priceless. I think this is the first step on us forgetting about this entire "when the bombs fell" phenomena!! I do have to say that it would be nice if you added some music to it. It felt kinda lonely at times  Keep up the good work :star::star::star::star: & beautiful My F4F Level is: The Descent (https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=t=14107) | 2009-07-27 04:33:00 Author: javi haguse  Posts: 744 |
| I'll have to check that out. I actually finished a bomb survival level set in a giant building ... ... Pondering if I should publish it ... | 2009-07-27 04:37:00 Author: TheMarvelousHat  Posts: 542 |
| The first obstacle there was pretty nice, it's a pretty decent level and I would've like to have seen a few more hazards. Otherwise well crafted. | 2009-07-27 12:13:00 Author: ll_ye  Posts: 236 |
| great idea very original. weird though i searched it and there were no results :| | 2009-07-27 15:33:00 Author: david1209  Posts: 17 |
| Where the button is where you hold for 5 seconds, you can go behind the scnery. And you cant get past that part ^^ EDIT: NVM. I thought you had to jump on the girl then go over there top part, not go below xD. Anyway cool level could be longer. | 2009-07-27 16:27:00 Author: Adam9001  Posts: 744 |
| 'Sounds fun. I'll give it a try. It's about time someone does a level that DOESN'T make bombs fall. | 2009-07-27 17:14:00 Author: Ryutei  Posts: 244 |
| Thanks for the good and constructive comments! It's really appreciated. Anyway cool level could be longer. The reason why it's short is that I was in a monthly contest. The deadline was August 1st so... But with all the good crits I got, I think I'll maybe do not a sequel but a side story, um... *idea* -Chuck | 2009-07-27 18:26:00 Author: Chump Posts: 1712 |
| What a great level and also a good creator!!! | 2009-07-27 19:25:00 Author: Little B.I.G  Posts: 4 |
| You had me feeling sorry for that little girl at the end - you could have made a really nice story-based level with her. The obstacles were nicely made, but easy, and there really was no challenge to this level - except at the beginning, of course. Three stars. | 2009-07-27 23:32:00 Author: Project_MK  Posts: 80 |
| Thank you very much for the crit Project_MK! I know there not much challenge. Because the subject of the contest was a funny level. You had me feeling sorry for that little girl at the end - you could have made a really nice story-based level with her. Yeah! I had a wonderful idea about a side story for this little girl. I say no more. | 2009-07-28 00:27:00 Author: Chump Posts: 1712 |
tell us please we wanna know more !! | 2009-07-28 02:48:00 Author: Little B.I.G Posts: 4 |
| So anyone play the level since the changes I made? | 2009-07-29 02:24:00 Author: Chump Posts: 1712 |
| Bumpity-Bump: I added obsoleteXeo video review. And just so you know, I'll continue it during the next weeks so check it out with the new stuff! | 2010-03-08 03:03:00 Author: Chump Posts: 1712 |
| Bump: I wasn't feeling like doing another thread about a level that is basically the same but with better editing, lightning, gameplay and simply more fun! Feel free to give constructive feedback and yes, I'm F4F | 2010-04-10 00:23:00 Author: Chump Posts: 1712 |
| Fantastic level. Simple, yet quirky and engaging backstory. The basic ideas of the undetonated bombs worked really well: it created a sense of mild paranoia. Never knowing what will detonate. The bomb-sign is everywhere, but only some will detonate, and sometimes even simple pink floaty can blow you up. Good gameplay. Some of the obstacles felt very fresh and original. Not too difficult, not too easy. The little girl character was very well made. Sad and creepy. Be wise and heed the advice of her teddybear. I will definately check out the story level you've got planned. One snag: the big bomb block you have to dragg up the incline is a bit heavy and unwielding. Didn't manage to snatch away the prize-bubble, so I'll have to return for that. If you have the time for F4F it would be great if you could take a look at one of my levels. | 2010-04-10 10:31:00 Author: pickled-punk  Posts: 598 |
| THe bomb part is now fixed and the prize bubble, well you gotta bring a friend But, thanks for the kind words, I'm glad you liked it | 2010-04-10 15:32:00 Author: Chump Posts: 1712 |
| Added Your Review On The Weekly Reviews Thread (https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=25612-Weekly-Reviews-%28Taking-Requests%29&highlight=Weekly+Reviews) | 2010-04-20 17:15:00 Author: Skeggers  Posts: 583 |
I really like the changes you made, Chuck. I couldn't help but grimace every step I took...fearing that I'd get blown up (which did happen a few times).  You really updated the platforming elements too. Your layer shifting skills are really good. And that little girl! Man she creeps me out (in a good way of course). She's hilarious. Well done, Chuck and glad you updated it. | 2010-04-23 00:36:00 Author: TheCountessZ  Posts: 537 |
| The thing I loved about this level was the girl's story. I wanted more ! (platforming was fun too) I was expecting the girl to say something like: "No! I don't want you to leave!" *creepy voice* and beat her as a boss or something. You should extend this level or make a sequel, as it has a wonderfully simple yet engaging story. Great level. Hearted you as an author, your winter level is pretty cool too. | 2010-04-23 02:14:00 Author: midnight_heist  Posts: 2513 |
| Yay! Longer? I must check this out again. | 2010-04-23 03:43:00 Author: qrtda235566 Posts: 3664 |
| whoa! Thank lot guys for the kind words! @midnight_heist: I have a workshop on my moon about a story with the little girl. So if I ever get my free time back and enough motivation to continue working on it, well, be sure I,ll let you guys know here | 2010-04-23 15:49:00 Author: Chump Posts: 1712 |
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