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A level that makes you feel alone

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A level that makes you feel alonesprings86
MGS themed level
all
The level is simple find the scoreboard, that's it, same as every other level

The level is in MGS sorta theme, i try, it's the first platform type/reality type level that i have made, look at the others they only to show one thing, this is the first level that i made that actually has platforming in it.

i built it in 4 hours before publishing as i want to get some feedback on it, soon will add my epic apc in a new color scheme as well as some more stuff

also there is a scoreboard it's just really hard to find
Please give it a try and tell me what u think
2009-07-22 16:07:00

Author:
springs86
Posts: 785


hi springs86

I think you might be better thinking of a level title before you post it to the Showcase. I'm not trying to be negative, far from it, you should be encouraged to show off your levels.

It may put people off playing it if you haven't got a title and you start your thread off with "I was bored one day..."

Any and all levels are welcome in the showcase, but if you want serious feedback and comments, people need to know that you've put some effort in, so they feel they can put the effort in to comment.

Like I say, please don't be put off or feel offended - these are just my thoughts on reading your post.
2009-07-22 21:03:00

Author:
MrsSpookyBuz
Posts: 1492


@MrsSpookyBuz all's changed2009-07-22 22:16:00

Author:
springs86
Posts: 785


i found this level called "the map that makes you feel all by yourself"
im not sure if this is your level.... but if it is, then i loved it!!!!
2009-07-24 03:04:00

Author:
johndizzle888
Posts: 34


Hey Springs.
I just had a go at your level.
Generally i found it well done visually. You can see the MGS theme shining through.

I would say that there's quite a bit of plain running though. without much happening.
Now this could be put donw to the feeling of 'Alone' that your going for but i am unsure.

Also i dont know if it was just me but after the cool looking 'Springs' logo(which was extremely well done by the way) i went into a bunker or some sort and there was 1 score bubble and then nothing.
I couldnt find anywhere to go after that.
I'd have a look there for something broken or if there is a way possible give a visual or audio sign to help find it.

And lastly no Icon on your level badge, you'll want to slap one on, because those new level pictures just remind people of half arsed H4H lvls and such.
Which yours isnt.
It'd be in your interests.

:star::star::star::star:
I gave it for now assuming i was just dimwitted and couldnt find the exit.
Because it looked promising.

I'd like it if you gave my The Artists World level a go for F4F.

https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=t=14025

Thanks

Black-Toof:arg:
2009-07-24 13:28:00

Author:
BlackToof
Posts: 172


Don't bother posting here, the level is locked2009-07-24 14:37:00

Author:
springs86
Posts: 785


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