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Adventure Series!: The LBP Temple of Egypt

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Adventure Series!: The LBP Temple of Egyptbaahas
Level Description: Get Set for Adventure and Challenges! The LBP Egyptian Gods have chosen you as the "Chosen One". You must venture into the Temple of Egypt and recover The Emblem Of Egypt.
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Firstly, Thanks to my Beta Testers:
Shadowheaven
Burnvictim42 <-Special Thanks for quick and helpful feedback
and LittleBigSackboy


Alright Here is my first LBPC level. I spent quite a bit of time on this and learned some things. Bellow are some screenshots from the level but be sure to play the level to see everything!

http://i454.photobucket.com/albums/qq270/Sparro_5/APhoto_24.jpg

http://i454.photobucket.com/albums/qq270/Sparro_5/APhoto_23.jpg

http://i454.photobucket.com/albums/qq270/Sparro_5/APhoto_3.jpg

http://i454.photobucket.com/albums/qq270/Sparro_5/APhoto_21.jpg

http://i454.photobucket.com/albums/qq270/Sparro_5/APhoto_20.jpg

http://i454.photobucket.com/albums/qq270/Sparro_5/APhoto_19.jpg

http://i454.photobucket.com/albums/qq270/Sparro_5/APhoto_18.jpg

http://i454.photobucket.com/albums/qq270/Sparro_5/APhoto_17.jpg

http://i454.photobucket.com/albums/qq270/Sparro_5/APhoto_16.jpg

http://i454.photobucket.com/albums/qq270/Sparro_5/APhoto_15.jpg

http://i454.photobucket.com/albums/qq270/Sparro_5/APhoto_13.jpg

http://i454.photobucket.com/albums/qq270/Sparro_5/APhoto_12.jpg


The level is a combination of platforming and puzzles which you will have to solve. Please play my level and tell me what you think.
2009-07-21 04:58:00

Author:
baahas
Posts: 74


PLEASE READ: I Have changed the levels name to "Adventure Series!: The LBP Temple of Egypt", now.

I have also modified the level description and changed the avatar for the level.
2009-07-22 03:49:00

Author:
baahas
Posts: 74


I played this level earlier today and I really liked it. It had some good platforming, a nice little story, and just the right amount of diffuculty. I did come across a few problems though and I'm going to tell you what they were.

-After that mask tells you that you need to get three keys I got a little confused on where to go. I kept going up the path and it was blocked, but I did eventually find that you just go right in the triangle shaped area. Maybe you could put an arrow pointing the player in the right direction.

-When you're putting together that puzzle with the different shapes I think you should put a sound effect when they put a certain shape in the right place so they know they are on the right track.

-During the cart ride for no apparent reason I died because I was squished, I'm not sure exactly why, but maybe it's because the two things in the cart are close together.

-After you ride that lift up and it brakes, you have to go up this fallen pillar like thing that is going in a direction like this . After I went up the ledge I actually got stuck in between it and the wall and couldn't get out. I then killed myself and when I went back the lift was no longer there, so I had to restart the level. You could fix this by either making there be no space in between the pillar and the wall, putting a checkpoint on the lift, or both.

Besides these few things I enjoyed the level. I gave it:star::star::star::star: and tagged it "brillant".
2009-07-22 17:19:00

Author:
Dr_Vab
Posts: 134


Thanks for the feedback Vab. I'm glad you liked the level. The feedback turned out to be very useful and I've fixed everything that you addressed.2009-07-23 20:22:00

Author:
baahas
Posts: 74


I thought the overall design of the level was awesome! I like to see lots of details in the LBP levels that I play, and this one had a bunch. I really liked that you kept the theme throughout the entire level and that you didn't stick to the grid. The shapes in different angles made it look nice.

I did find it more in the difficult side. I died a lot in this level. I've seen that for ppl to give a good rating, you usually have to make the levels a bit easier. The first rolling fireball was a bit frustrating because it came without warning. Maybe that's what you want, but if not, add a sound to it.I also found that you don't really need to build the pyramid in order to continue. I would add the sensors from one piece to the other, to ensure the build it the right way.
Other than that, it was very well designed and very atmospheric!

I gave it :star::star::star::star: and a "beautiful" tag
Keep the good work!

My F4F Level is "The Descent"
www.lbpcentral.com/forums/showthread.php?t=14107
2009-07-23 22:36:00

Author:
javi haguse
Posts: 744


Thanks for the feedback javi. I wanted the level to be challenging but not too challenging if you know what I mean . I'll also get to fixing the pyramid. Yes, there is way to continue without building it and I know how to fix that and I will fix it when I have time. Glad you like the level though . I'll check out and give feedback for your F4F soon probably later on today.2009-07-23 22:55:00

Author:
baahas
Posts: 74


Just as a Note: I've republished the level and fixed the pyramid building sequence. You can't cheat anymore. You have to actually make the pyramid. To do that I had to change its logic to something similar used by the keys just less complicated off course.2009-07-24 03:04:00

Author:
baahas
Posts: 74


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