Archive: 16 posts

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Please give me feedback on my level "Neon Sound" I'll download pictures later Description: It is a level based on the dark mgs materials to give this level a nice affect. It is a platformer. There is'nt much more so i'll leave it at that.

2009-07-15 18:10:00 Author: Mod5.0 Posts: 1576

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Some description would be some help, but its not that important. Ill give it a play and a review tomorrow because its late here, but until then consider this a free bump =P

2009-07-16 02:07:00 Author: King_Tubb Posts: 435

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Hmmm... Interesting lvl and nice idea. But it was very hard to see. I know the level is meant to be dark, but its kinda hard to play when you cant see yourself. Maybe just add some light to where you can actually see your sackboy.

2009-07-18 19:56:00 Author: Toinkz Posts: 19

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I just played this level, to some up in a sort of mini review, the level idea is good, however when playing it is too dark to see where ur going at points, some cool lighting effects would make the level so much better, also the lift thing at the end could use some adjusting as i went into the air and fell off, with the lift stuck, effectively there was no way to finish the level However I think that this level is great, but needs some improvements to make it better hope this helps

2009-07-18 20:09:00 Author: springs86 Posts: 785

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Thanks for the feedback guys . Been waiting for a response for awhile. I'll address the problem with the elevator and, are you you having problems seeing where you are with neon skin?

2009-07-19 22:17:00 Author: Mod5.0 Posts: 1576

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lol, simple solution wasn't wearing neon skin or my other glowing outfit, but works much better with it on , please add a sign somewhere either in level description or in the level so people who don't have common sense (like me) put it on. also on that first green lift please extend the gas underneath because if u jump over it u end up on the floor somwhere otherwise a fun level

2009-07-19 22:35:00 Author: springs86 Posts: 785

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Is that the level you want me to Feedback??

2009-08-22 02:06:00 Author: phil_003 Posts: 609

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yes lolz

2009-08-22 03:31:00 Author: Mod5.0 Posts: 1576

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Ill try it when I go on later

2009-08-22 06:34:00 Author: PatriotEyez27 Posts: 34

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Nevermind,I got it fixed now

2009-08-22 06:35:00 Author: PatriotEyez27 Posts: 34

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Man that looks like my costume on LBP lol so off topic. Thanks for playing it.

2009-08-23 19:46:00 Author: Mod5.0 Posts: 1576

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hey! Just had a go on this level, and as other posters have said, it is very difficult to see. Luckily I had my fairy wand, so could see my sackgirl. It's a nice idea but sometimes I wasn't too sure where I was supposed to be going - a few arrow hints maybe? Also, after going on the zip wire, I let go accidentally and ended up dying. I went to the previous checkpoint, but then had to reset as the zip wire was at the other end. Perhaps an emitter there to make sure that if people do die, they don't have to reset, as some people might not be bothered to! Just a thought. Liked the neon though - looked fab! Check out Monster's Lair if you fancy giving some feedback in return!

2009-08-24 17:28:00 Author: littlebot Posts: 60

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Thanks littlebot for the feedback. I will check your level out soon.

2009-08-24 17:33:00 Author: Mod5.0 Posts: 1576

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I dont know what to think about this level to be honest. There are some good neon designs and i like a level entirely done in neon. However, its far too short and a bit generic. Ive done it all before. I also had a problem with the switch on the lift, i couldn't see it. Also, When you grab the neon to slide down to a new area, it doesn't respawn for if i fail. Maybe you should do a long story filled level in neon? That could be interesting as your good at the design. I like what your doing, please continue.

2009-08-24 19:10:00 Author: Lotus_Flow3r Posts: 165

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I dont know what to think about this level to be honest. There are some good neon designs and i like a level entirely done in neon. However, its far too short and a bit generic. Ive done it all before. I also had a problem with the switch on the lift, i couldn't see it. Also, When you grab the neon to slide down to a new area, it doesn't respawn for if i fail. Maybe you should do a long story filled level in neon? That could be interesting as your good at the design. I like what your doing, please continue. Thanks for the feedback. I can't see to make long levels my brain does'nt let me but I could improve on what I got:arg:

2009-08-27 23:16:00 Author: Mod5.0 Posts: 1576

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The Good: Fun, great platformer, nice design, interesting traps. The Bad: I managed to escape from your level, so I had to retry. I died in some parts which forced me to restart the entire level, twice. Some of the switches need tweaking. Suggestions: 1) Don't just limit your switches to one option. Try using other options such as direction, speed, and one-shot. 2) In the segment where lights turn on as you run past them, make each light turn on individually, instead of 6-7 lights turning on at once. Overall: Great level, lots of fun. If you manage to get around the problems, then you will enjoy this level.

2009-08-28 23:27:00 Author: galacemiguel Posts: 179

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