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TeroR DimensioNAdam9001 http://s296.photobucket.com/albums/mm172/adsteralbum/?action=view¤t=002-2.jpgThe level is about you got sent to a place by a evil creature, make your way threw the level, beat his demonds and traps, and when you get to him, he doesn'twant to be in power anymore, and destroy his heart then finish the level. all Screenshots: http://i296.photobucket.com/albums/mm172/adsteralbum/008.jpg http://i296.photobucket.com/albums/mm172/adsteralbum/007-1.jpg http://i296.photobucket.com/albums/mm172/adsteralbum/006-1.jpg http://i296.photobucket.com/albums/mm172/adsteralbum/005-1.jpg http://i296.photobucket.com/albums/mm172/adsteralbum/004-2.jpg http://i296.photobucket.com/albums/mm172/adsteralbum/002-2.jpg Give me feedback and a honest rateing and i'll do the same for your level

2009-07-13 16:27:00 Author: Adam9001 Posts: 744

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I'll give this level a go soon. I did notice a few spelling mistakes in your decription though. :O

2009-07-13 16:56:00 Author: BlackToof Posts: 172

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Yeeehhh, im not the best speller in the world, cuz im younger then most people.

2009-07-13 17:04:00 Author: Adam9001 Posts: 744

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Sorry for the lateness of my reply. The start of the level i found out that a buzz saw you could die from which i never knew. The wall of lost souls i think it was was an interesting idea. generally it was done okay. I did notice that most of them had a smile on there face. haha. The switch on your first picture i didnt understand, i pushed it up and bullets came down. i pulled it back down and they stopped so i just walked without them coming down. Unless it dissolved a door later on i didnt see. I thought the enemy on your second screenshot was interesting as a bundle of lost souls and goo. but it had a small piece of material over a brain at the top which made it very hard to kill. Old no mouth was a funny part. And i expected a bit more from the heart boss at the end. I gave it :star::star::star: because you've still a bit to learn but your definetly on the right track. It has a theme, no visable dark matter that i can remember, enemies, a boss, small story. I can see you put effort into it! which is good!. Well done. You can play my boss level for F4F if you want: https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=t=13609

2009-07-15 01:57:00 Author: BlackToof Posts: 172

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Thank you for the feed back, i worked it on awhile ago, And when the missiles came down you where warned haha. I cant make boss's well so yea did it simpley.

2009-07-15 16:41:00 Author: Adam9001 Posts: 744

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I liked the glowing intro, but it looks like the last few letters need to be a little more spaced. Sometimes I wasn't sure what was going on. I made it through the obstacles easily enough. The level felt empty to me, but you got a good standing with making the level work. :star::star::star: in the level because it was worth the play, but it didn't feel finished. Please feel free to play, rate and feedback my level 'Towers of Patheon'

2009-07-16 19:58:00 Author: nartules Posts: 38

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