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Dr. Clone

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Dr. CloneMarihond
In this level you start out as a delivery boy for the mighty Dr. Clone who, well, likes to clone himself.

By putting flesh in his machine you help him create tiny copies of himself that he can eat (!) together with his grown up, cloned brothers. A cannibalistic mad doctor with no remorse... please help him, he's hungry!!
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2009-07-13 13:34:00

Author:
Marihond
Posts: 30


I'll give it a go!

Dont worry though, i'll take my brother along too... he tastes like strawberry.
SO i'll be safe.
2009-07-13 16:57:00

Author:
BlackToof
Posts: 172


fine, as long as he doesn't taste like the olsen brothers!2009-07-13 19:09:00

Author:
Marihond
Posts: 30


Now Marihond lets start this thing!

first off you characters are not the best looking BUT they do have a certain look about them that i thought was good, it's probably hard to explain.
I did think the King looked abit like elvis which i enjoyed.

I did notice some sort of spelling mistake that made me laugh so i dont know if you want to keep it in for laughs and not change it. your call there.
It's when you drag her body out the water you are told:

"Take her..."
"Into the..."
"Me!"

hahaha

Anyway. i thought that bit was done quite well.

This is where i started to feel a little sick. A good way sick i should expect since it relays on your level. I thought it was all gruesome with the flesh machine and the chopping of the babies. DUDE!
It made me not feel too good which is a reflection that your level did it's job.

So overall some visuals could look better but it was a good atmospheric level.
:star::star::star::star:

I'd appreciate you to play my boss fight level for F4F:
https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=t=13609
2009-07-13 20:25:00

Author:
BlackToof
Posts: 172


hahaha, thanx a lot!

yeah, those mongoloid comments with bad grammar are there on purpose and will not be changed.

neither will the characters, I like that white trash chainsaw massacre-feeling they produce. bad grammar and inbred looks. and yes: the first one is supposed to be an Elvis-clone.

looking forward to playing your level, but I'm going away for a festival for the rest of the week now. please remind me in this thread if I forget it next week, I'll probably be totally out of sync after 4 days of binge drinking.


by the way: check out The Flying Teapot-level, just made a thead about it. thanx!
2009-07-14 16:12:00

Author:
Marihond
Posts: 30


Im Going to play it right now. ill be back to tell you what i think.2009-07-14 16:49:00

Author:
element
Posts: 14


Rating: :star::star::star:

Reason: Not bad of a level. Nice concept but there were to many eye sores and bugs.

Characters: A bit on the unusal side But its what makes the level. Any other LBP level has the same style (card board cut-out) characters.

Story: Short and to the point. Could have expaned on this a bit more and it could have 1 made the level longer 2. made it more exciting.

Visuals: Not bad BUT not good. alot of choppy shapes and such, sould go back and refine them. too many materials used stick with around 3-5 materials depending on the theme.

Final thoughts: A good level But needs some work on visuals. I would recommend this level to my friends to play.
2009-07-14 17:25:00

Author:
element
Posts: 14


Rating: :star::star::star:

Reason: Not bad of a level. Nice concept but there were to many eye sores and bugs.

Characters: A bit on the unusal side But its what makes the level. Any other LBP level has the same style (card board cut-out) characters.

Story: Short and to the point. Could have expaned on this a bit more and it could have 1 made the level longer 2. made it more exciting.

Visuals: Not bad BUT not good. alot of choppy shapes and such, sould go back and refine them. too many materials used stick with around 3-5 materials depending on the theme.

Final thoughts: A good level But needs some work on visuals. I would recommend this level to my friends to play.


thanx for your feedback, I might do some small changes to the visuals later. but I wanna make a new level instead! I'm working on a new one called The Gloaming right now.
2009-07-23 17:09:00

Author:
Marihond
Posts: 30


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