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Temple of Lost SoulsNODNARB87 Sackboy starts at the entrance of the temple and is greeted by a goddess who informs him only the chosen one's touch can activate the stone powering the entrance. The level is beautiful very rich in gold, brown earth tones, and a lot of fire and perils. As you navigate the temple several characters inform you of an impending danger and that an evil guardian awaits you. This is my first level so any feedback would be greatly appreciated! all

2009-07-10 19:05:00 Author: NODNARB87 Posts: 4

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The level is quite short and easy, but i liked the theme and the style; also, all those eyes remembered me somehow of mario's world You could change the logic behind the 2 buttons that are after the moving pillars so that you only need to press them and the way stays open (the buttons activate some dissolve material that separates a directional magnetic switch from the magnetic key, you press the button, the dissolve disappears and the key falls on the switch); the boss was way too easy, you could adopt a system like the rex battle (a bit of cover and nothing else to protect against a shower of plasma, and everything on one thick lane); lastly, the treasure! where is it?!?! be sure to make one, there are lots of level if you need inspiration Also, please stop doing h4h, there are countless threads here that explain why you shouldn't... Rated 3/5, good job for a first level

2009-07-10 21:19:00 Author: Shadowheaven Posts: 378

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Having played your level i enjoyed it. Yes it was quite short but i can only see it as a bonus that you didnt stretch it out needlessly. I enjoyed the boss, he looked good! even if his attacks were rather random. I did finds that when a candlestick :O spoke to me and told me an elevator switch was needed below i went down there the switch was down. Down being important here, i went down there and pushed it upwards but couldnt find a way out. I exploded my sack and tried the elevator and it wasnt running i then pushed the switch back down and exploded and the elevator worked. That paragraph can be summerised into: Show them how to get back out if possible. And perhaps your switch is in the wrong position when the level starts. (i'd recommend going create mode on it's behind and pushing it up rather than backwarding it. since no one like to push levers up.) Nice 1st level, alot better than my first level which fell apart at the seems. Oh, :star::star::star::star: For my F4F you could have a go at this short and simple boss. https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=t=13609 Keep up the good work. Black-Toof :arg:

2009-07-11 01:34:00 Author: BlackToof Posts: 172

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The lever being down was a level ending glitch my apologies it has been updated and is now ready for criticism thank you!

2009-07-13 06:54:00 Author: NODNARB87 Posts: 4

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